Date: 03/06/12 02:43 am Title: Convulsion
Wow...Bill is a sexy demon! A jack ass if that :D He has no heart or soul
Date: 04/06/11 04:04 am Title: Convulsion
Please don't abandon this story! I absolutely love it!
Date: 05/16/10 06:26 pm Title: Convulsion
*.* When I thought it couldn't get worse!! Oh mein Gott!!!
Write more when you can!
Still loving it!
I am soooooo :O and ahhh! I wanna be mad @ Bill, but still part of me has sympathy for him! Darn it! He's totally out of control!
Author's Response: Its the out of control we love about him though ;) :P thanx so much for rewieving :)
Date: 05/13/10 08:59 pm Title: Convulsion
ahh so i just started reading this and it's so freakily good!!! i'll bet tracking this story and can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response: Thank youuuu :D
Date: 12/25/09 12:49 am Title: Intrusion
GAHH!!!!!! CLIFFHANGER!!! EVIL!!! xDDD Loved it... I'm never gonna stop reading lolz
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 12/02/09 10:01 am Title: Intrusion
Oh yeah! what revenge. Bill really has become a selfish bastard!
Author's Response: Well he got what he wanted. revenge..
Date: 11/30/09 05:22 pm Title: Intrusion
:O!! WHAT A ASSHOLE!! More please!! TOMI GO help your girl :( :'( save her from the evil that is Bill
Author's Response: Thanx for readin' <3
Date: 11/30/09 02:27 am Title: Audition
Bill wants to be a cold, heartless bastard, but I think there's more in there than he lets out. I love it. ;)
He could suck my blood any day.
Author's Response: Thankyou so much, am pleased that you liked it :)
Date: 11/29/09 09:13 pm Title: Intrusion
ahhh, Bill! WHY??!! Really is revenge worth it?
I see now I know what happened, must have been weird for both of them.
Thanks 4 da update :D
Author's Response: No problem babe, I'll do my best to update as soon as possible :)
Date: 11/29/09 08:56 pm Title: Intrusion
wow.. i love it so far!
hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I'll do my best :)
Date: 11/29/09 05:44 pm Title: Intrusion
OMFG. OMFG. OMFG. OMFG
THAN YOU FOR UPDATING!
Beyond KICKASS chapter.
Helluwa smexy, too.
Thanks.
Author's Response: Thankuuu :D I hope it was mildly worth the wait ^^,
Date: 10/10/09 08:38 am Title: Illusion
update asap please. [:
Author's Response: Just uploaded it guys, so sorry for the wait. Hope you enjoy it :)
Date: 10/07/09 05:16 pm Title: Illusion
Mmmm.......Update? Pretty pretty pretty pretty please...
Author's Response: Just have, enjoy :)
Date: 07/18/09 12:06 pm Title: Illusion
OMG!!!!!!!
This soooooo adictive, I always thought Bill would give Edward Cullen a run for his money ;)
Pleeeeeeeeeease update soon I can't wait to read more!
Love Jezzabella (my real name)
Author's Response: Ah, Bill has always reminded me of a vampire anyway. he looks like one, and he's so pale it wouldn't actually surprise me if it came out that he was one :P he's just too pretty :D
Date: 07/15/09 02:50 pm Title: Illusion
hmm, i really have a love hate relationship with Bill. Feel sorry for him, but then he deserves it too.
He really looked like a vampire in the pic Tom posted of him in his blog!
Author's Response: I havent seen that pic, I dont really follow TH anymore, but I'm glad u like the story :)
Date: 07/13/09 04:12 pm Title: Illusion
Hey Stine, another fantastic chapter. You asked way earlier from where I knew you real name.. I was an eager reader of UT ;)
Well, back to this story! I really love your style of writing, it has everything: drama, romance, sex, angst - you name it!
I especially like the way you change pov so that it never becomes dull and boring reading and it brings a great flow in your story! I'd love to read more from you and hopefully you update a little faster now that its summer - nah just kiddin' - update when you're ready and I'll be here waiting patiently!
Take care
Kristine
Author's Response: Lol aww, I never knew any of my UT readers woulęd read my english stuff, but cool :) My danish and my english writing styles are totally different, but I glad u like both apparently :) Keep reading :)
Date: 07/13/09 10:54 am Title: Illusion
“It’s been just five minutes more for the last hour. Now please just let me out of the door,” I giggled again. – Oh god they are so stupid together!
“Okay fine, but you’ll have to promise me I’ll get to kiss you at least ten times today. And I’ll be counting them!” – that’s actually pretty cute!
“I can’t wait. Now go, before Gustav gets up and sees you.” – I can’t wait for Bill to catch them and kill either Tom or the annoying assistant!
“So what secrets can you tell us about the boys?” – ha ha ha
“I don’t really know; they all keep their cards pretty close to their chests. – I really like this turn of phrase, why don’t more people use it?
“Part of being a good assistant is knowing when to talk and when to just listen,”- Jenna’s not that smart…lol oh Gustav taught her, I’m surprised she managed to retain something so intelligent.
It had been a week since he’d kissed her in his room, a week since they slept together and she had come to his room every night since then. – ha ha I can’t wait for them to get caught they are so stupid!
“Well they all have their strange requests. Georg once asked me to bring a giraffe to his room and I spent two hours trying to find out why he would want a giraffe till I found out it was a kind of beer.” – ha ha that is funny.
“Welcome back, brother dear.” Tom heard the cold voice as soon as he stepped into his room and it already made his spine shiver. Bill was there again, sitting in the chair. – ha ha I bet he can smell Jenna!
“I remember quite clearly how we used to share everything. Toys, secrets, your bed…” - *grins*
“No, I’m still the same inside. It’s just because we’re different now that you don’t see it, but if you would let me, then - ”
“No! I’m not making the same mistake you did! I’m not giving up my life to you!” – hum…I guess Bill has to just take it sometime in the future. Yea! But will Tom still be a silly stick in the mud vamp as he is as a human?
Bill stood up and stepped closer to his brother but didn’t touch him. “I didn’t do it on purpose, I didn’t mean to. I didn’t understand, that - ” – Bill is talking and being honest and open. You have to listen to him but you’re not stupid boy!
You and I both know that one can’t be turned without free will, so you have no excuses! – ah he’s going to have to coerce Tom into it then…Jenna will make a nice hostage!
Tom turned around towards his suitcase again and started stuffing T-shirts in. If he packed it well enough nothing would get damaged no matter the rough ride. If he made sure to hide everything valuable at the very center then nothing would get to it. – metaphor alert!
“I know it is; I can hear your fucking heart beating! It’s her, you like her!” - lol
“I swear Tom, if you touch her I will - ” – lol ha ha ha
Something in Bill’s eyes had changed, that little almost nonexistent hint of humanity was completely gone. – and the last little bit of Bill left the building and all we have left is the monster *grins*
“You… You wouldn’t.”
“I’ve done it before, you know I have. There’s something strangely satisfying in hearing a heartbeat stop for good. Especially when the heartbeat belongs to a person I dislike.” - *giggles*
Tom was avoiding me. Again. And this time I doubted it was because he liked me.
Had I said or done something wrong? Had I somehow screwed up the interview? For some reason my secret boyfriend was mad at me and it made my stomach twist and turn with worry. What had I done? – you you you you you it’s all about you!
I felt my heart break into a million pieced as he turned around and left the room. He’d already grown tired of me. – OMG can I kill her now?!
Despite of his sweet words for the past week. It just all seemed so sudden. Just the previous morning he’d begged me to stay in his bed a few more minutes and now he was again actively avoiding me. – she’s so stupid! OMG!
“Don’t be silly, of course I’m not sick of you. I could never be. Look, I’ll explain everything tonight, okay? Come to my room later and I promise I’ll explain everything.” – hum? Is this the illusion?
Gus entered the stage; the drums drove the crown wild and when – oops Crowd not crown
“Jenna,” his voice was right by my ear and it made me shiver slightly as the beat of the drums drowned in the cold breath to my side. “I need you tonight. Please wait for me on the bus and follow me straight to my room when we get to the hotel.” – is it a test? Or hum something fishy is going on *grins*
The first song was over now. I heard Bill thanking the crowd for coming to see them and him telling them that this was one of the band’s favorite concerts of the tour. – lol yes he does! lol
“Apparently something has gone wrong with the hotel reservations, so I need you to go to the hotel and fix it.” – wow something really fishy is going on!
“It’s okay, I’m sure you’ll do great.” David actually smiled at me and put a reassuring hand on my shoulder. “I have faith in you. You’re a better assistant than you give yourself credit for.” – wow then their other assistants have been shit cause she’s horrible and so stupid!!
They’d only been sort of together for a week and yet he already felt the most happy and relaxed when he could stroke her hair and kiss her forehead before he went to sleep. – pathetic!
Author's Response: Ah,. something fishy, eh? I need to be less obvious with you guys, your all way too clever for me :P I do absolutely love how you tought the T-shirt metaphor, I'm quite fond of that one myself :) And yes, you can kill Jenna in your thoughts if you want to ^^,
Date: 07/13/09 09:27 am Title: Illusion
uuuh....New chapter.
Awesome chapter. Bill“s an asshole, but at the same time smexy. :D
Thanks. :)
Author's Response: oh no, thank YOU :D
Date: 07/13/09 05:36 am Title: Illusion
:O more please!bill is such an asshole!@!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha xD
Date: 07/13/09 04:48 am Title: Illusion
:D This is Ah-Mah-Zing .
i read every chapter tonight .
its 3:49 now && I'm tired as shit but i cant take my eyes away . this is so good . i am totally captivated by the flash backs the twins are having && I
cant help but smile when i read about tom && jenna . This is just a great piece . hurry && update please :D
Author's Response: OMG yay, I've captivated someone :D Niiice :D thanku nfor reading, I should hopefully have the next chapter up soon :) (hopefully!!!!)