Date: 03/23/09 05:27 am Title: Chapter 10
Aww Tom is such a sweetheart.
I don't like Lorraine, how dare she want all of the sudden have her daughter back when she hasn't been there.
Date: 03/23/09 03:33 am Title: Chapter 5.2
OMG Andreas cracks me up. I am really enjoying this story and the way you describe Tom an a parent is so cute.
Date: 03/02/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
lol great! and btw i aded Bush lol read up
Date: 02/25/09 07:59 am Title: Chapter 25
I'm just about to move on to your sequel to A Beautiful Disaster, but I first wanted to let you know that I absolutely adored this story XDD. Especially the ending, I nearly died when you wrote the title as the last line, it fit sooo perfectly. It was sad that Tom and Bill both cheated on one another, Bill more than Tom -_-'', I'd like to think that their love for one another would prevent it, but I can understand why it might happen. I thought it was brilliant how you developed the lives of the supporting characters, and how everyone impacted on one another. I have to say, adding members of Cinema Bizarre and Simple Plan and probably some other band members I can't think of right now, was an awesome idea. Kiro getting pregnant to Yu? 0.0 Could be, could be. Hahaha.
Anyway, you're a really good writer and I hope that your sequel is as well-written as this work. XDD.
Date: 02/19/09 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 25
ohhhh so cute!!!!
there were a few typos but you only get them if you read it really carefully...or had a break in between chapters so your not used to the writing anymore...
other than that way good!!!
i luved it!!
Date: 02/10/09 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 21
what the fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i cant believe that just happened
Date: 02/09/09 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 25
Aww :] I loved it! And I cant wait for the sequel!
Date: 02/09/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 25
*cries* awwwwe i can't believe its already over, it looks like it was just yesterday when it all started, god time passes by so quickly.
This was such a great story, even though soemtimes i didn't like the ways things turned out to be, i really liked this story.....a lot!!*sobs*
but hey there's still a sequel right ????yay for the sequel.
i hope the sequel turns out to be as wonderful as this story=DDD
Also you did an awesome job!!!!
Date: 02/09/09 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 25
*cries* awwwwe i can't believe its already over, it looks like it was just yesterday when it all started, god time passes by so quickly.
This was such a great story, even though soemtimes i didn't like the ways things turned out to be, i really liked this story.....a lot!!*sobs*
but hey there's still a sequel right ????yay for the sequel.
i hope the sequel turns out to be as wonderful as this story=DDD
Also you did an awesome job!!!!
Date: 02/09/09 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 25
Your story made me cry. It's so touching. It is realistic, heart-warming yet heart-breaking at the same time.
You have developed the characters to and unbelieveable degree and I keep hoping all will work out.
You're right. All families have ups and downs. I guess that's what makes them so breakable.
It was truely amazing.
-Sacred
Date: 02/09/09 07:39 am Title: Chapter 25
THis is so sad! *sniff* why did it have to end??? I will deffi read FP!!!
Date: 02/08/09 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 25
Fortune cookies are delicious and fun^^ I keep them too:D
Lovely story:) I forgot what i was gonna write here though -_-' ...
oh yeah! tom's nana!
God what an awful person! And to say such things about Bill's mother:0
*gives her a virtual smack across the face*
yeah,...I'll check out the sequel;)
Date: 02/08/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 25
i love this :D
Date: 02/08/09 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 25
congrats on finishing it.
Date: 02/08/09 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 22
I hate Tom right now. He's such a jerk.
Date: 02/08/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 21
I hate them both right now.
Date: 02/08/09 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 20
So where'd the tape come from? and no cheating