Date: 04/26/19 07:25 am Title: Epilogue
this was a good story!!
Date: 04/26/19 05:40 am Title: Epilogue
this was a good story!!
Date: 09/20/16 05:15 pm Title: Epilogue
I can't believe I never saw this before, but Imm glad to have been able to finallg read this for the first time. I loved it, thank you for writing!
Date: 10/16/13 12:41 am Title: Prologue
When is something juicy going to happen? The story is kind of slow.
Date: 01/16/13 04:39 pm Title: Epilogue
I love this story! The story line is amazing in its mystery, magic and romance. It really sucked me in. I love these Bill and Tom. They are very interesting and just so real. Wonderful, wonderful story!
Date: 07/11/12 11:01 pm Title: Epilogue
I am glad that the twins got a 'happy ending' together.
It was so heart-wrenching to see Bill devastated by Tom's death, his emotions were described very well - I felt/understood his pain so well.
It's cool that the twins got to move to the city like they wanted and now they have money to support themselves. They struggled so much in their lives, they deserve a little peace. Now that they have money, they'll be able to do whatever they like - travel, etc.
I was surprised and pleased that the twins did get a happy ending together! After reading about Bill seeing Tom dead on the ground, I felt so sad. But, now they get the rest of their lives together and that's awesome!
Date: 07/31/11 06:59 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow, I was skeptical about this story, mostly due to the slightly vague summary and I definitely didn't expect it to involve magic, but... wow. Just wow. Astounding piece, that's what I can say. :)
Date: 06/28/11 01:18 am Title: Epilogue
Wow, I can't believe I've actually finished reading this story..... finally!
Do you know how long I've been waiting and waiting until the *right moment* came along so I could concentrate and read this fic from beginning to end? At least a year... or since whenever this was posted, cuz I remember adding it to my Tracked list asap. I just kept putting it off. I don't know why... maybe because I expected this story to be exactly what it was. So yeah, you guys definitely lived up to my expectations! :) I thought it would be all serious and in-depth and really freaking good! And it was. lol. So I knew it deserved my undivided attention.
You guys are extremely talented writers. Really really well done.
The ending was a fun surprise, glad the twins have their happy ending, but I think they would have had an equally happy ending without the money as well... I think just the fact that they could move out of the village would have been enough for them to be happy, and having eachother- that too. :)
I also have to say, that I loved and admired how knowledgable you guys were about your subject matter (magic, etc)... it just made it all more realistic and quite impressive. From the little I know, you guys were correct, and from what I don't know, you guys were very believable. Much applause there.
I also loved the bit of humor you threw in, the way they talk- it makes everything feel very down to earth and real. You've painted some amazing images with your words, and everything comes across really well. I feel like I got to know the twins and see everything they saw.
This was unique and wonderful and I loved every minute of it (except maybe when Bill gave in to Anis, cuz in my heart he should always be w Tom, lol, but that's negligible) and I'm so happy yyou guys wrote this, and I FINALLY read it. It's been a journey and a long time coming for me. Amazing amazing fic!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it. :)
Date: 01/20/11 07:14 pm Title: Epilogue
Well, I surely enjoyed it!
This was such a great story to read and to completely fell in love with.
Tom and Bill and all the magic.
I did love the way you outlined the whole plot and the delicate structure of each chapter -flashbacks, notes on magic and such. All the spells, runes and herbs, everything incredibly fitted and so interesting.
You created such an incredible universe here, with and amazing atmosphere that fussed into the story just as any other element. I loved the way you used spaces and surroundings to create tension and to highlight emotions. It was really, really great!
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 01/04/11 05:08 pm Title: Epilogue
I loved this! So awesome. Loved the whole idea, the plot, the charactization, and of course the writing. And Bill's last sentence just made it perfect.
Date: 12/22/10 02:23 pm Title: Epilogue
Nice, creative, a little unexpected, but nothing surprises me from you two!!
Nothing is too hard or out of reach for you...
I guess you made some serious research to come up with this, it was very interesting.
YOU are the one and only reason i read billshido, and I gave myself full permission to hate him in this one, as I am a true twincester... P
I really hope that your real life will be happy and fulfilling, if only to reward you both for the joy you bring us all with your writing.
My favourite is still THD, but I love all your work.
Thank you.
Bows to the Majestrix
And then to the Little Muse, too
Date: 09/13/10 02:56 pm Title: Epilogue
*snorts* *uncontrollable giggling* ohh whocould blame him for that last comment huh? This was a really good fic.And very nice to know that an ancestor had stong enough forsight to do be able to set that up for them. I would ask if there was going to be a sequel you know because I almost always want one...but this one feel so well concluded I'm not sure what a sequel could be about. I mean how often do you want to read about the happily ever after part. Just knowing it was happy is good enough.
Date: 09/12/10 11:30 pm Title: Protecting Barberry
I'm not liking Anis in this...no no i'm not...he definately seems like a creeper. I was wondering is he was a werewolf...this chapter semi confirmed that...
Date: 08/25/10 09:00 pm Title: Epilogue
a really great story
i'm so glad that everything worked out in the end for them :D
Date: 04/03/10 04:00 am Title: Epilogue
As always, I loved everything about the story
Date: 04/03/10 03:22 am Title: Warding Aspand
Anis is so unbelievably scary and creepy at times. I worry for Bill.
Date: 04/03/10 02:07 am Title: Wise Pyrite
OH Bill. And Tom. And Bushido. So much drama in your lives.
Date: 04/03/10 01:45 am Title: Enchanting Acacia
AH! I am both excited and nervous about Bushido here.
Date: 04/03/10 01:10 am Title: Prosperous Basil
AHH! I don't want trouble for them :(
Date: 03/22/10 11:01 pm Title: Epilogue
That was an amazing story to read ! Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it very much !