Date: 11/23/08 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I really7 like it, but I don't really think it's very...complete. I love it, really. I just want a sequal! XD
Date: 10/08/08 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh man this was so funny! I had to look up which JB was Joe, but i had a hunch it was him^^
And the German wasn't that difficult, but still cool of the translation^^
Date: 10/08/08 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked the story--Tom and Bill's interactions were very cute. I actually liked the German in there--it seemed realistic and worked within the context of Tom thinking they were alone when they weren't.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you!!! I'm glad someone got the atmosphere I was trying to create! rnPhew, I feel quite relieved now...
Date: 10/07/08 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
bhahahaha,the part about Bill being a bottom to the shorter jeobro is one of the funniest things I've read in a long time. If you add to this make sure to put in a bit about the promise rings.
Author's Response: Really? I'm glad you enjoyed it. Bill is too tall for his own good anyway! XD rnAnd this is meant to be a oneshot, so no speculating about the promise rings. I'll leave that to you. ^^