Date: 02/19/12 01:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Omg this story is absolutely fantastic! i hardly ever write reviews but this is azing so far. I cant wait to read the rest. Great use of adjectives by the way.Everyone else's kinda suck
Date: 07/08/10 10:49 am Title: Chapter 12
Did you change the ending? I didn't remember it ending like this
Date: 09/23/09 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
honestly: i liked the story, i hated the ending.. i don't know, i was hoping for a happy ending with bill and tom.. but i'm just a sucker for happy endings and lots of love :p but i have to say, the whole kinky sex thing, was something different!! i liked it.. x
Date: 04/14/09 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
very strange.. im wondering where you're going with this. :/
Date: 04/05/09 06:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Daaamn. Some naughty ass class.
Date: 02/21/09 04:42 am Title: Chapter 1
This made me laugh 8D! Just picturing that is too funny. I like it so far ^^
Date: 02/04/09 11:19 am Title: Chapter 12
It'd be cool if you'd write a sequal where Bill and Tom meet up later in life.
Date: 01/27/09 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
awe yay.
and all this time i thought Daniel was a bitch,rofl.
there was very little Tom in this :O
i wish i knew what happened with him, and all this.
Date: 01/23/09 11:31 am Title: Chapter 12
But then there was another issue. Daniel had warned him against following the life path he was already taking. He needed to stop. Though it was fun to fool around, he should move on with his life. He should grow up. He should fall in love. - *groans* make the plotline stop. *pouts* go back to the sex!
"And I have a little surprise for you at home...it vibrates." – yeah thank you
ok it was just weird and pointless *shrugs* ok fine!
Date: 01/23/09 11:25 am Title: Chapter 11
He got in and told the others to leave, and he didn't look back. If Tom wanted to be fucked over, let him. At this point, he couldn't find himself caring anymore. If Tom was going to reject him for that fake ass mother fucking... – oh poor bill
"Georg, take us home. I'm pissed, I'm horny, and I want to fuck." Bill's lips were all over Gustav and Georg sighed, knowing that Bill was serious. When Bill was horny, Bill was horny. End of story. - *Grins and rolls eyes just a bit*
Gustav took his place back in front of Bill's mouth and Andreas took the back, lapping at Bill's naked asshole and smiling as he made his friend grunt and groan. *claps* yeah orgy!
He would get Georg's keys and drive away right back to Tom's house. He would wait until a light turned on in the house and he would place the tape atop the doormat before ringing the doorbell and driving off. – um I’m sure there’s a purpose but um? Ok *throws hands up* I keep trying to make sense maybe the most sensible thing to do is just go along with it.
The four boys scoffed but rolled their eyes. They were hungover and horny as usual. No one really cared. Besides. Mr. Jost was just a good fuck as anyone else. Who was complaining? –ok not who I was expecting ok!
Date: 01/23/09 10:22 am Title: Chapter 10
He simply shut his door after making sure that Daniel was back in the kitchen before turning back to Bill and wrapping his hand around the students neck and bringing him in to kiss him softly on the lips. Bill, too dazed from the kiss didn’t even notice the flash of a camera go off once, and twice as he leaned in once more to steal another taste of his teacher’s lips. - *gasp and giggles*
YEAH plot!
Date: 01/23/09 10:17 am Title: Chapter 9
He must have assumed that Bill would lure him into the warehouse just like Bushido had done to him so long before. Bushido must have known that Bill would take whatever chance he got to change their place to his. He had waited. He had waited, and lured Bill right back in. And now…he was blackmailing Bill of something he hadn’t even done yet. – wooo-hoooo plot!!!!
room, so who was taking Bill’s spot in his bed? – BILL!
thanks for the plot back! *grins*
Date: 01/23/09 10:12 am Title: Chapter 8
But there was one person that knew. He knew. Andreas – how did Andreas know?
…and he had no clue what the hell was going on – yeah well he’s not the only one!
Date: 01/23/09 10:04 am Title: Chapter 7
Bushido? You’re going to randomly throw in characters? OMG! OK fine whatever I’m still reading it but confused as hell….awesome sex scene BTW! Aaahhh!
Date: 01/23/09 10:00 am Title: Chapter 6
get fucked in the ass by random guys and, UGH the germs – oh god not the germs the insanity! Ha ha
Bill was pissed. He wanted Tom’s cock in his mouth. He wanted Tom. And fuck everything, he would get him. – I don’t doubt his perseverance.
Date: 01/23/09 09:53 am Title: Chapter 5
Tom fell to his knees on the side of Bill, the mail falling forgotten on the floor. – and he’s lost control and no longer “the adult” in the room anymore ha
Tom didn’t know what he was planning, and he didn’t get the chance to find out as someone knocked on the door before jiggling the door handle. – aahhh!
Date: 01/23/09 09:49 am Title: Chapter 4
Bill wore a plain black tshirt that clung to his chest like a second skin. Tom wished he could be that shirt. - *Grins*
He could hear the other boys groan, zippers being tugged down as they no doubt jerked themselves off. Frankly, he didn’t care about them. - *hands fly to face and cover eyes for a moment and she groans* Oh My GOD! *giggles* *then continues*
He took control of that situation and now they all want him? Ha ha
And god, did he want Bill, now more than ever. – now he’s done for!!! Ha *cracks up*
Date: 01/23/09 09:37 am Title: Chapter 3
“Hang on, Dan. One second.” Tom frowned at the blocked number before switching over, answering. – I don’t think he really cares much about Daniel, cause if he did then he wouldn’t take that second call.
“…Bill? What are you doing, calling me? What do you want?” – he recognizes him by a moan and his name being called hum?
Why in the world did Bill call Tom while being fucked by Gustav? *blinks* this stories logic is really confusing for me.
*cracks up*
Date: 01/23/09 09:32 am Title: Chapter 2
Something activated it, and miles away, sitting at a school desk waiting for his teacher to arrive, a boy with shiny black hair was squirming. – Impressive remote! I WANT ONE!!!!
*Giggles* so they’re all fucking Bill? *shudders* Awesome!
Whatever. Go. But I want you back here in twenty minutes – ha ha I can’t believe he let the go! Ha ha ha *cracks up*
They had been ‘fucking around’, and the whole time…Bill had imagined it was Mr. Trumper. - *grins* I think we all did!