Date: 01/10/09 04:16 pm Title: Arabian Nights
Genius!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks ,)
Date: 01/02/09 01:57 am Title: Arabian Nights
I also had to come back and say... that the way that you described things... It felt like I was there O_O really. It was just so amazing and wonderful, and I can't even explain how much I love this!!! I love Dakota's character :D Once he started telling Tom about the lark, I figured that he was semi talking about Tom having his freedom... but I wasn't quite sure. And then when Bill walked in and Tom saw him... O_O I dunno, I felt like Dakota knew something then and that's why he started to ask them to do those things together. It's like he totally knew they loved each other right then at that moment O_O was that what you were going for? Was it more running on just pure fate than anything? :D If so... you are pure genius, love. Very much so.
Author's Response: hihi, you came back ^^ I am SO glad you liked Dakota, he's one of my first original characters and I was really nervous about him! yes, I was going for Dakota knowing they were in love. Cause when Dakota talked about Tom's freedom and then Tom played that piece of music, Dakota realized that Tom loved someone really deeply, but he didn't know who. And then Bill walked in and Dakota saw the look on Tom's face, and that's when he knew ,) and yes, I think it was fate, too ,p *hugs you* thank you for this <3
Date: 01/02/09 01:41 am Title: Arabian Nights
OMG... D"X THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFULLLLLL
At first O_O I was freaking out, not having ANY clue what the hell was going on... and then ja *0* that part came... and then the end D"X and then I cried!!! ahhhhh.... I loved it *0* I really did... Never read your stories before, I but I've seen them around a lot lol =P And now that I've actually read one *0* I'm impressed... I uberly love them...
Author's Response: LOL you gotta breathe honney xD okay, so at first you didn't know what was going on, but then that part came and then the end? that totally confused me, girl, you're so cute ^^ I'm so happy you decided to read this story of mine, and I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so, so much for reviewing me, it made me smile so much !!!
Date: 12/19/08 05:07 pm Title: Arabian Nights
Holy...just...wow!
This was so beautifully written and incredibly erotic. Just a wonderful story!
Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it !!! hugs
Date: 12/17/08 05:23 pm Title: Arabian Nights
Oh my darling... that was... there just aren't words for you and your writing. Just perfect.
Author's Response: oh dear...*eyes watering*...thank yoooooooou !!!
Date: 12/15/08 07:55 pm Title: Arabian Nights
this was absolutely great! the message behind it with the flower was so sweet! you are a great writer, and this piece really proves it. I honestly did not even expect something like this when I began reading. you have a keen eye for details, which I'd great, I'll tell ya that! you add the perfect amount of detail to each story to give it the depth it needs to become more than itself ya know? Best read for me by far!
Author's Response: hihi, happy you caught the part about the flower ,) and I love you for liking my detail work in this, I just adore spending time on a fic just writing all those small things ^^ so much love for you, girl, thank you !
Date: 11/25/08 11:43 pm Title: Arabian Nights
Not going to lie, but I ran to my kitchen to mix milk and honey after reading thing "when the milk is so full of honey that it slides down your throat in hot waves of pleasure. Thick and rich" sweet baby jesus, it does actually taste pretty good!
Author's Response: lol, I know xD my mom used to make it when we were sick when I was little, but I never liked it because she would heat up the milk, but like this...yum ,p and imagine that taste mixed with the creamy skin of the Kaulitz twins...that's like heaven <3
Date: 11/13/08 09:42 pm Title: Arabian Nights
Oh my gosh! so hot! What an orgional idea for a story: having someone "force" slave bill and tom to pleasure each other. You're a genius!
Author's Response: hihi, thank you so much, that means a lot to me !!! and I'm so happy you thought the idea was original! I tend to write what I want to read, but no one seems to have written before, and then I can wait half a year and read it myself and it's like someone is writing just the fics that I like xD stupid, I know, but it worls ,p
Date: 11/13/08 06:46 pm Title: Arabian Nights
I really loved this story! The atmosphere was great and you really transported me to another world. You change tense halfway through the story though which is quite distracting.
Author's Response: thank you so much for this! I know I changed tenses there, I realized when I re-read the story, but I think it just happened because the scene with the smut was more intense than the rest and I got carried away. But if I were to change either half of the story into another tense now, I think it would ruin it, but maybe I could work on macing the overlap smoother. again, thank you so much !!!
Date: 11/02/08 11:27 am Title: Arabian Nights
Great Ö
Author's Response: hihi, thanksies ,)
Date: 10/30/08 07:01 pm Title: Arabian Nights
so, so good! I seriously love you! hehe..It was so cute that they had to be with eachother and neither with Dakota:) another thing I loved is that you could have written this story like a long story with many chapters with all the forbidden feelings and so on..but the way that you wrote it, so short and sweet without going too deep in to their feelings was just wonderful and just..wow! sortaXP know what I mean? hehe..
anywho..I think I'm really tired now, so I need a little help with the ending; Dakota helped them to run away, right? and Simomí understood that, or? or what was the message behind the pink flower? that Billi had run away? oh yeah! *get's an idea* 'cause she said that not all wishes come true, but by getting what she wished she understood that he had gotten what he wished, right? or? haha..tell me if I'm lost here!
so sorry for rambling so much!! I just really liked this one:D
Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked this. And that you felt it seemed like a whole story written into a one shot really makes me smile, it's one of the longest one shots I've ever written ,p you are quite right, Dakota did help them run away, after seeing the love they held for each other. and you got the thing about the flower right too, it was what Simoni wished for, and by getting that, she also knew that Bill had gotten his wish as well; freedom. thank you so, so much for this, means a lot to me <3 love, lucy
Date: 10/24/08 07:08 pm Title: Arabian Nights
awii!
cute :3
and and! Pineapple : D x )
Author's Response: lol, thanksies ,) means a lot !!!
Date: 10/06/08 09:09 pm Title: Arabian Nights
Really good but I don't get the end, BUT IT WAS REALLY GOOD!
Author's Response: when Tomi and Billi realizes that Dakota has left, there's all this talk about a rope, and the balcony of the room they're in leaning slightly over the walls, that's to indicate there being a possibility of them to use the rope and get outside the palace walls. And then all the talk about the streets and the desert being able to hide footprints, that was to indicate them not getting caught. Finally, the flower was a way to tell simoni that Billi had gotten his freedom, because that was what he wanted, Simoni wanted a pink flower. Get it ? I like being a little vague about those things, but I'm so very happy you asked ! and it's so nice to hear that you liked it, thank you <3
Date: 10/03/08 02:02 pm Title: Arabian Nights
I am still really honoured that You dedicated it to me... :O
"you're without a doubt one of the best reviewers I've ever come across"... Blushes... Really? I am? Thank You! I try my best...
You have convinced me that you never write about badly treated pleasure slaves, but that were never any question in my mind about that!
My qualms about slavery goes much deeper than that.
It is all about the free will... A free human always has a choice, no matter how horrible or gruesome ( or wonderful) it is, the choice is always there, when he or she is forced to do something they do not want to do, But, A slave doesn't have that! A slave is always forced to do it, sometimes not even death is a choice...
You already knows this of course, but I wanted to tell You why I do not like slavery!
To me, no matter how good or loving a slave-owner treats the slaves, he or she are still badly treated just because they ARE slaves.
Am I making any sense?
No matter how good or Hot or funny a story about slaves is, it will always leave a small trace of bitterness in my mouth!
I still want to read what ever You write about and I am going to read Arabian Nights ( and "Eyes betray the soul")over and over again, just because it is such a good story! Love it really... :)
The flower... OK! Divine intervention (again) Smiles... You do seem to have the Gods on you side... LOL
My Spanish isn't existing, so... quiero tu?
I'm to lazy to find out on my own...;)
I wish I knew all those languages I wrote thank you in...
Now I am going to read the seventh instalment of Wolf... Yay!!!
Anders
Author's Response: aw, you deserved it hun! and yes, you are one of the best reviewers, and not just because you seem to understand my stories so well (I'm still up in the clouds because you liked 'Stars in Space') but you mix constructive critisizm (which I am very grateful for getting) with questions and whishes for chaps and of course your way of making me blush from head to toe. It all just sums up and becomes this really nice feeling I get in my belly everytime I read you reviews <3 I both agree with you, and disagree. You are completely right, the most important thing that man can have is the power to choose, but I do not believe that slaves do not have a choise. you mentioned death, anyone can be killed, but you are the one that chooses if you will cry about it or not, you are the one who chooses if you will scream. I am TOTALLY against slaves, any form of them, and it pains me to see that the world hasn't yet understood that robbing a person it's freedom is some of the worst things one can do. Oh, quiestion though, say there was a slave, and it's slave owner made all the choises right. But these choises, they always made the salve happy, like, everything the slave owner told them to do would be things the slave didn't mind doing. (cook me some pankakes - slave has an obsession with pankakes and it makes him/her the happiest person on earth to make them) is it just as bad? I mean, they still do not have the choise, but they 'don't really want it', it's scary sometimes, having to choose. but anyways, away from this horrid subject. Lol, I seem to have th Gods on my side? I'm writing twincestual porn about real life characters, shouldn't it be more like the Devil's on my side xD quiero tu = I love you <3
Date: 10/02/08 03:38 pm Title: Arabian Nights
Hey babe of mine,
just missed the one shot stories of u
in fact i will miss u everytime.
just search to find ur name in the stories in case i missed one by my mistake.
Oh god
u left me speechless as always of course
just admire the description of the palace of the sun rise and lose my self in ur imagination and ur beautiful mind.
u travelled me again lucy
only u can lady.
trust me
about the tom/bill seductive sex action
just trembled all over
adored the sex orders and the boys s tenderness.
luce babe
do more lady
i need to give me whatever ur perfect mind had inside.
always ur fan
with respect and love
chris
Author's Response: aw, you missed the one shots ? well, there's more to come ,) not in this area, but I have more one shots waiting, gonna try to finnish one yp by the end of my vacation ,) I am so happy you liked this because it was a true pleasure to wright, it just came to me and I could do nothing but wright it down, you know? and it makes my stomach flutter to know that I managed to capture ou with the story, it means so much that you tell me these things chris. much love for you <3 yours luce
Date: 10/02/08 12:51 pm Title: Arabian Nights
There is no part to your writing that isn't complete perfection.
I savoured every word, every line of this story
I couldn't get enough.
it was so original and intriguing (sp?)
you're my favorite writer on this site, and I'm not kidding!
I can't wait for more of your stories!
Author's Response: *blushes...like, really, really badly* God, that was just...no words, love, no words other than THANK YOU SO GODDAMN MUCH ! this meant so, so much to me, hearing you say this, thank you <3 love
Date: 10/01/08 09:34 pm Title: Arabian Nights
this was really brilliant,i loved the whole idea,it was great!i really really liked it,congrutulations girl!
Author's Response: thank you so much, this made me so happy and I'm really grateful you reviewed !
Date: 10/01/08 08:32 pm Title: Arabian Nights
Holy wow, that was amazing!
I think I like this Dakota person. XD
Very beautfilly written, hun!
Although I must point out, somewhere in the middle you switched the tenses you were writing in. Not a big deal, but still. ^^
This is def going in my faves!!
Author's Response: lol, very glad you liked Dakota, he was my first original male character ever ,) I know I switched the tenses, it was just that I only realized it when I was reading it through before sending it to beta and to change it would mean to rewrite about six pages xD and I think sex gets more intens if it's in present tense anyway, don't you? thank you so much for this !
Date: 10/01/08 07:37 pm Title: Arabian Nights
I loved it, really! Great story!
Author's Response: thanksies ,)
Date: 10/01/08 07:32 pm Title: Arabian Nights
Oh I got worried for Bill for a second there but that was wonderful. Perfect. Love! :D
Author's Response: aw, thanks girl ,) this meant a lot <3