Date: 03/29/09 06:30 am Title: Kiss and Freedom
I love this! I just hope they are not going to die.. And if you kill them, I'll kill you! *evil laugh* You already killed Georg and Gusti.. *cries*
Date: 10/22/08 06:02 pm Title: Kiss and Freedom
Ahhh! It can't end here! O_O
OMG I love this story =)
You wrote it so well.
Date: 09/30/08 10:01 pm Title: Kiss and Freedom
This is so good.
Can't wait til the next chapter!!!!
Date: 09/26/08 05:23 am Title: Kiss and Freedom
Oh, right, my e-mail is ebil_sin@yahoo.com
Date: 09/26/08 05:22 am Title: Kiss and Freedom
Morrreeeezzzzz!!!!! Hey, I'll do your beta, I'm not official, but I can do it. But since I'm in Houston, my Internet's been acting a little weird. It won't let me send new e-mails. Only read and reply. O.o So...I'll do it!!!!!!!
Date: 09/25/08 06:15 pm Title: Kiss and Freedom
FINALLY! but I have a half suspision that they might die, from blood loss and all. Hope not though
Author's Response: :OrnYou'll have to wait and see!
Date: 09/25/08 04:35 pm Title: Kiss and Freedom
O_O so like... it seems like it's over ;__;
Date: 09/25/08 04:28 pm Title: Elevator and Noose
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *SQUEAL* NUUUUUUUU
Date: 09/25/08 04:19 pm Title: Screams and Cells
omg X__x it's... omg... I love this story though... but I keep seeing the word "threw" instead of "through" X__x sorry... thought you oughtta know...
Author's Response: >< That is why I need a beta so bad. .-.!!!
Date: 09/25/08 03:41 pm Title: Kiss and Freedom
I loved this chapter, I woudld beta, but I'm horrible at english, at least that's what everyone tells meh, so yeah!!!
Author's Response: Your probably better at English then I am. xD, really I could use anyone right now. If you want just email me and maybe we could work it out.
Date: 09/25/08 02:49 pm Title: Kiss and Freedom
aww yayyy! they got out!
:D
:D
Date: 09/25/08 02:21 pm Title: Kiss and Freedom
Ooooo.. r they gonna die?!?!?!?!?!?!
Date: 09/25/08 01:07 pm Title: Kiss and Freedom
Oh wow...
I LOVE IT!!!!
The action, made me so scared for Bill and Tom! o;
Author's Response: :O! Thank you!
Date: 09/25/08 12:28 pm Title: Kiss and Freedom
Gosh, thank goodness they've got out of that awful place! And aww at Bill kissing Tom. Too cute :)
Author's Response: :D I knowww
Date: 09/24/08 10:06 pm Title: Poles and Blades
omg!
O.O
cliffhanger!
cant wait for more!
Author's Response: :DrnThank you!
Date: 09/24/08 08:35 pm Title: Poles and Blades
EEKKK!! what happens next?!?!?!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 09/24/08 08:22 pm Title: Poles and Blades
I'mn not sure if I can stress this enough, but while you were having Gordon and Tom talk earlier, I couldn't help but go: "Wow, that's kind of sudden... That whole change of behavior... Needs explaining; a better explanation..."
And, you know, the whole rant on stopping to smell the roses.
Author's Response: That will be explained later, I thought about that too and wondered what was I thinking. I think your very right in me needing a beta, and I will try to get one asap for the stories I write in the future. Thank you, very much, for pointing out my mistakes.
Date: 09/24/08 08:09 pm Title: Elevator and Noose
Blahhh.... It's so very fast-paced. You need to slow it down, take some time. Smell the roses!!!
Date: 09/24/08 08:01 pm Title: Voltage and Blood
That was definately one of the more interesting things I've read so far... but it was so very face-paced. And very short. The scene was very well-described in some areas, but kind of blank and on the edge of poor description in others... I still push in the fact that if you don't already have a beta, you need one.
Date: 09/24/08 07:51 pm Title: Screams and Cells
You never mentioned Bill and Tom taking Gustav with them. And I'm pretty sure he didn't just pop out between the bars and into the elevator without them seeing.