Date: 08/26/15 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
very nice ;)
Date: 08/26/11 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I'm really sorry, but I'm gonna have to leave you a bad review. The grammar was off, there were typos, the plot was unrealistic, and I couldn't finish reading it. I just find it really really unbelievable for them to have their first kiss and then have this amazing new connection and then fuck in the same night... especially since they are brothers.
Please think about the timeline of your plot better next time, and whether anyone would actually act this way IRL.
I'm sorry for the review. Your writing wasn't entirely bad, but everything else was so unrealistic that it kind of ruined it IMO. Forgive me for saying all this stuff. :(
Date: 06/14/10 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was an amazing read. Kept me entertained.
Author's Response: yay, that makes me happy :) Thank uu
Date: 05/24/10 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
aww
Author's Response: :)
Date: 04/08/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
it was great. the best part was the first kiss. i actually wrote a smiliar story, basically the same almost, before i read this one o:
Author's Response: Lol, love when that happens :P
Date: 06/19/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww
Author's Response: xx
Date: 04/24/09 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Damn... Sorry, I'm still dazed from this one het story I read... I'M TRYING TO REGAIN MY SLASH MODE BACK! This story is doing a good job.
Author's Response: yay :D thx
Date: 04/23/09 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Your first one and so good! I liked it a lot because not only sex is involved but, above all, love and a special one,too. They love each other and they eventually become one again! **heart-shaped eyes**
Author's Response: Aw, thanx xox
Date: 12/08/08 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
You did so well. Better then I would have done for a first time slash! I'm so jealous of your skills! Very hot, not the blood part but the feelings and the fucking. Brilliant!
Author's Response: Aww, im so glad u like it - I'm quite proud of it for my first slash :D
Date: 09/09/08 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
he IS the love of his life and always will be.. no matter if in real life Bill and Tom don`t share this EXACT relationship they`ll always have each other and never tear apart. Even if one of them (or both of them) get married and if something happens they could still get divorced but they always will be brothers and never separate even if they want (which is not probable). Truth is noone,NOONE could ever love Tom more than Bill and vice versa... ( I am a large,tremendous,immense,huge , gigantic and enormous fan of Tom Kaulitz and believe me I don`t say things like this so often..I used to believe that I was the only person that loved tom so deeply and powerfully and of course I was silly and WRONG)
sry I got so deep in thought but fictions like this really get me into a lot of thinking... though this brotherly relationship is so amazing I still hope this twincest between bill and tom does not exist...so all of us -> the fan girls could have a little peace of them eventually or at least dream to have because this relationship between the 2 charmers is dream crushing for the little fans out there ... like me for example ... anyway..
I really loved ur story =] good work with that (writing the story in both bill and tom`s POV) I have always wondered what both of the lovers are thinking during a lovescene and there u go ;]]
Author's Response: Aww, thanku :DrnYeah I hope they keep their hands off eachother aswell, but who knows what goes on in the darkness.. We'll never know :)
Date: 03/20/08 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh! That was greeeattt... If I were a boy I'd be hard, believe me xD
And... Uhh, I am speechless.
Author's Response: Aww, thanku ;)
Date: 03/01/08 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED IT! *dies*
Author's Response: Awwie, thanku so much <3<3
Date: 01/18/08 02:54 am Title: Chapter 1
God im sitting her , in my fucking classroom, and cause of this... im fucking horny!!! very good work here!!!
Author's Response: Lol aww, I'm sorry for hornyfying you in the middle of class, but just couldn't help myself.. Thankyou so much for reading and for the review <3
Date: 01/08/08 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Oohh...!!
I love this story!!
Thank you :D
Author's Response: Oh, thankyou for reading :D
Date: 11/26/07 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thats was so good, keep up the awesome work, I love your stories!
Author's Response: Wow thanku <3<3
Date: 11/25/07 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg i freaking love it! =D hawt!
Author's Response: Aww thanku xx
Date: 10/20/07 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story very much!! You are a good writer! Intense (;
Author's Response: Thankyou so very much.. I have to give a lot of credit to Carrie for the idea :D
Date: 09/29/07 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy shit!!! This is so crazy!!! I love this fic, it's just perfect!!! God, you really know how let some one with butterflies in stomache!!! Loved it a lot and besides, it's so cute ^__^
Author's Response: Aww thankyou so much, I'm so glad :D
Date: 09/01/07 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good fan fic. very intriging. i have no idea if i fucking spelled that right. u inspired me.
Author's Response: Aww thankyou very much.. :D
Date: 08/23/07 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1
that was a reallie good story!!! it was a little confusing at time but it was still reallie good!!! u have just enough detail to get me into the story..i hate it when people over detail the story...it just gets boring..thank you so much it was a greeat story!! you should add onto it!!
Author's Response: Well thankyou, I'll be careful with the details in the future then, lol...