Reviews For A Broken Line
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Reviewer: Monsoon_483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/08 12:58 am Title: "Yes."

its amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by far the best story on here

Author's Response: Thanks soo much! I really appreciate it:D:D Thanks for reviewing and reading:), I will update soon lol.

Reviewer: belong-to-bill Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/08 09:25 pm Title: "Yes."

did Tom die?

Author's Response: No, Tom didn't die, he's still in a coma.

Reviewer: YouCanCallMeZara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/08 12:16 pm Title: "Yes."

OMG O_°
I'm crying here,,, :(
*can't form any sense making word right now*
Update really soon Please!
Xx

Reviewer: tomismine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/08 08:27 am Title: "Yes."

aww poor bill and tom!

Reviewer: jhirki69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/08 01:22 am Title: "Yes."

that's sooo sad!!!
poor Bill, Poor Tom, poor Cammy. this is so bad. I hoping it'll get better, so update soon.

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/08 09:00 pm Title: "Yes."

Oh, wow. Yeah...sad chapter indeed. I reeeeally hope that was like, a dream or something. If not, I'm gonna be like, upset. Totally wasn't expecting a character death...and there was no warning...so...

Yeah. The only thing I can say is NO. Can't be true. =( *sniffles*

Reviewer: tomismine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/08 11:28 am Title: "The line's dead, Bill"

I love this story the enticing story line.

Reviewer: tomismine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/08 11:11 am Title: Pleasure and Pain

OMG !!!!

Reviewer: jhirki69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/08 02:46 pm Title: "The line's dead, Bill"

this is soo heartbreaking! i hope it'll end up well because in this pase bill's gonna end up in a mental institute or worse, dead..:(
why doesn't he go to the hospital to visit him, it might do good for the both of them
*some ray of hope will be nice*

Reviewer: YouCanCallMeZara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/08 02:45 pm Title: "The line's dead, Bill"

I'm so sorry for Bill,,,
he is suffering so bad,,,Gott,,,
More! X

Reviewer: linjoh27 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/09/08 09:39 am Title: "Locked in."

the story is awsome:D love it!!

Reviewer: YouCanCallMeZara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/08 08:29 am Title: "Locked in."

oh gott :S
let everything be alright at the end please,,,
MORE! x

Reviewer: Anna483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/08 08:34 pm Title: "Locked in."

Ohhhmyyy..whats gonna happen??..continue!!!

Reviewer: linjoh27 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/08/08 06:59 pm Title: "Notice me"

please get it online here now!! for god's sake:D

Author's Response: It is currently uploading, and i am writing more chapters!! :D Sorry if its taking long, but it should be up there, tommorrow at the latest, so please keep checking back. :)

Reviewer: MidgeMyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/08 04:03 am Title: "Notice me"

oh my...
please continue writing
...
i am sad now

Reviewer: MidgeMyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/08 04:00 am Title: "Hope forever died."

wow
very dramatic
i love it!

Reviewer: MidgeMyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/08 03:55 am Title: "I'd give my life"

i'm shaking
i wanna fucking know what happends

Reviewer: MidgeMyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/08 03:53 am Title: Pleasure and Pain

oh my GOD!

Reviewer: MidgeMyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/08 03:47 am Title: "I'm left here in the dark, no memories of you. I close my eyes, and it's killing me."

ooooh! what did he have in his hands!? maybe it was something for cammy? i dunno, lets go find out!

Reviewer: MidgeMyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/08 03:42 am Title: "Every lonely night that I sit and pray."

wow! i wonder what that was all about, bill couldn't have meant it! love it =]

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