Date: 10/06/12 11:46 am Title: The raping
I honestly don't really know how to feel about this fic, it has an interesting plot but seems all too rushed and a bit off. I'm kinda disappointed at it to be honest, I liked it yeah but there was something missing :S
Author's Response: i'm glad to hear your opinion.rni can explain why it is the way it is, my plot was around 6/7 chapter each one deals with a phase of the story/plot/drama.rnplease keep in mind that the story is still not finished.rnthank you for your opinion ^*^
Date: 09/29/12 03:03 pm Title: The raping
are you still writting this story? it's too good to abandoned...
Author's Response: yes I am, but... college. I don't have much time, the story is all planed out, i have the next chapter almost written but there are still some bits and pieces to finish.rni really hope to finish this (maybe when i'm off college and without work X\)rni'm glad you liked it ^*^
Date: 03/19/10 04:58 pm Title: The nightfall after
oh, Saki is so sweet!!
Author's Response: wait for the next chapter and you'll see ... *evil laugh*
Date: 08/26/09 10:37 pm Title: The nightfall after
I found that the title of the fiction was a bit off.
I think that if you would have done it a bit more professonally then more people would read it.
but overall i think its a good fiction with an intresting plot
I rather liked Saki in this, as the role of big brother.I would have put more depth into his charictor.
and maybe made it a bit more realistic.
Author's Response: hi! i putted that title for a reason, if you keep reading this story every time i update it you will end up realizing why i gave the story that name. and about Saki, I must admit that i know almost nothing about him but i never intended for this plot to be realistic, mostly because there is nothing realistic about my story. and if you want to know more about Saki, then you must read the next chapter i'm writing, it's coming along slowly but it is.rnrnrn thank you for your review and i hope you say something about the next chapter when you read it
Date: 08/10/09 04:58 am Title: The nightfall after
xD I loved it!! Gott, Saki!! xD Looooollz, oh and btw, it's felt, not felted ;) I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: thanks!! and i'll try to correct it if i can find it.rnrnin any case, it is understandable for anyone, so ... it's fine that way! ;p
Date: 08/09/09 03:23 am Title: The nightfall after
I love when they are happy!!! XD continue!!
Author's Response: i don't know if they will be happy for a long time! only time will tell. but i will be writing more, soon!
Date: 08/08/09 07:54 pm Title: The nightfall after
update soon plz thx=]
Author's Response: i will hun, hope will read it as well! ^-^
Author's Response: i will hun, hope will read it as well! ^-^
Author's Response: i will hun, hope will read it as well! ^-^
Date: 04/01/09 05:45 pm Title: The day after - Bill's version
Ö Please continue soon! This is awesome *aka-great written* I do hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: thank you! i'll put on another chap soon. it's just that i had been full of work but now i'm free, so i'll continue this!
Date: 03/07/09 07:30 pm Title: The day after - Bill's version
plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: danke ^-^
Date: 03/05/09 06:59 pm Title: The day after - Bill's version
dont let bill kill himself
Author's Response: I'm still working on it so ~i don't know anything yet.
Date: 03/05/09 05:46 pm Title: The day after - Bill's version
meh, it was ok, there this combo of like, everything being ok and then everything not being ok, it doesn't seem very realistic, IDK, I'm in a bitch mood that could be the real problem.
Author's Response: i get you, but I'm thinking about what i wuld do if i was Bill.rn
Date: 02/11/09 07:24 pm Title: The day after
yay you finally updated!!!!i'm ao happy=DDD
thanks for the update, i really missed this story=(but now you're back YAY lol
anyway i do like how its turning out, oh god i usually wonder the same thing bill does, i'm really scared to be stuck in that fucking coffing forever *shivers*
Author's Response: I'm glad you're happy! that makes me happy! and i've been needing that lately!rni think i will be able to give a next chapter soon. (I realy hope!)
Date: 02/10/09 08:37 pm Title: The day after
It's interesting, you're on the right track as far as I can tell....
Author's Response: thank you!!! i'm glad to know thatrn
Date: 02/10/09 08:22 pm Title: The day after
This chapter was ok, I feel like Bill's actions speak louder than your explanations of them and you should just let them play out. Tom on the other hand needs to do something, a confession would be nice, or something. Something needs to happen. To push their relationship one way or the other.
Author's Response: keep tooned and maybe you'll get something!rnrni just don't know what. thank you for your review.
Date: 02/10/09 07:43 pm Title: The day after
more?
Author's Response: yes, it is to come
Date: 11/22/08 01:46 pm Title: The morning after
It's great!
Author's Response: thank youu! I'm working on the next chapter but things have been very complicated latly. Thank you anywAY!rn
Date: 09/01/08 10:25 pm Title: The morning after
AHHHHH I love it, I really do!!!! ^_^
Author's Response: ha, thank you! ^,^
Date: 09/01/08 07:44 pm Title: The morning after
I don't think he tried to kill himself. But that's what Tom thinks. He kinda needed that to let go.
Author's Response: Thank you!rn
Date: 08/31/08 03:00 pm Title: The morning after
bil is just floating isn't he....
Author's Response: hum, I would love to tell you but my lips are sieled. ^-^
Date: 08/31/08 02:55 pm Title: The raping
the plot was good, but I think you may consider getting a beta to check it over for errors :)
Author's Response: I've tryed it but they take too long ^^ I like things done at the moment. ^^