Date: 08/13/08 12:24 am Title: The Dirty Bed
Oh man so awesome!
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Date: 08/12/08 11:31 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
YES!!! OMG OMG OMG. this is actually EXACTLY what bill needs right now! i was getting really tired of normal!Bill. XD i can't wait for the next update! OMGGGG *faints*
Date: 08/12/08 11:07 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
AHH!
omg!
leave me hanging. Now I'm dying to know what was on the bed!
Ah!
This story is amazing!. :D
I can't wait until friday.
Date: 08/12/08 10:46 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
HOLY SHIT.
Is it Tom? .-.
I mean, we all know he's not human.
It's so obvious, lol
God, I can't believe I have to wait until Friday for another update! D:
Date: 08/12/08 10:12 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
AHHHH!!! I wonder what kind of non-human creature it is!!!!! I wonder why it's bleeding and why it went to his house! Oh man!
By the way, do you mind if I comment each chapter? Because there was that update thing about commenting stories a lot, so I was wondering. If it's annoying, I won't comment so much.
♥
Author's Response:
Leaving a review for each chapter is fine. Most authors really appreciate that.
The announcement was about people leaving dozens or even hundreds of reviews for a single chapter. We had someone leave over 100 reviews for one chapter of a story. That's all the announcement was talking about. Leaving a review or each chapter is still appreciated :)
Date: 08/12/08 09:26 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
Aaaactually, I thought you meant Tom's surprise would be a revelation of whatever non-human thing he turned out to be. But! I loved, loved, loved Tom's date. It was so sweet, and so totally perfect for Bill, even if he did ruin it by trying to be normal.
Anyway! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT OFF LIKE THAT!?! What on earth is on Bill's bed? I hope it's not Tom. And if it is, I hope it's nothing life threatening.
Gosh, dammit! Three more days until Friday. Hopefully those days will go by fast.
Date: 08/12/08 09:17 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
is that Tom...? >_< I can't imagine if it is...
Oh holy schiesse...
Date: 08/12/08 09:09 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
OMG!!!! Wat is it?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Date: 08/12/08 09:05 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
0_____________0;;;; why did you stop!?!? ahh!! another cliffhanger!! *dies*
Date: 08/12/08 08:46 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
omg omg omg. ah. this is like my favorite story ever. ah i love this story. =)
Date: 08/12/08 08:40 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
I DID think it was sex. Especially with the date at the beginning? I was all excited for them banging while a ghost watched.
I miss old Bill, I hope whatever is on his bed will bring it back out of him.
Date: 08/12/08 08:32 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
AHHHHH what is it?! Is it....like Tom or something!? Oh my gosh why is it bloody!? I cant wait til friday!
Date: 08/12/08 08:26 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
Man! No sex?! Well, that's alright because this was another awesome cliffhanger that'll keep me anticipating Friday's release!
Date: 08/12/08 08:25 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
YES! YES YES OH GOD YES! I. AM. SO. EXCITED. about the non-human thing!
Date: 08/12/08 08:10 pm Title: The Dirty Bed
>.> I knew you guys meant aliens. xD.
And i cant believe you led us up the last chapter, and then it turned out to just be a freaking theatre, and now this. What this gonna be? A dead dog? Those arent human you know. -.-' *sigh*
I really do love this though. ^^ Awesome job guys.
Date: 08/11/08 09:35 pm Title: The Old Telescope
OMFG. I KNEW IT. TOM IS AN ALIEN.
Aw. I HATE NORMAL!Bill. It's like lacks any motivation in life. ARGH, parents!
Date: 08/10/08 05:09 pm Title: The Old Telescope
Oh man I can't wait to see what's in the room. :) Awesome as always!
Date: 08/10/08 11:08 am Title: The Old Telescope
awwwwww omggg I lovee this fan fic pleaseee write more every hour I check this page to see if chapter 11 is heree
Date: 08/10/08 09:14 am Title: The Old Telescope
So being in a whole another time zone has screwed me up hella bad, but one thing remains constant: I love this story.
And, also, OMG cliffhanger! D:
I don't have time for a long review because my internet is a whore -- correction, my neighbor's internet is a whore, I'm stealing it for the time being until I can get mah own -- but aaw, bitter!resigned!normal!Bill. D: He makes me wibble. And not in the good way. I think its time for Tom to sex the weirdness back into him, yes it is. :3
Lots of things I like about this chapter, but I think I like the Simone-Bill interaction the most, which is odd considering there wasn't anything direct at all. I just thought you guys played everything out very realistically - Simone *did* lose her cool and she *did* go a bit far, but it makes her human. And I think she's bound to feel guilty and try to make it up to Bill somehow later on (hah, telescope, I was right) and it made it easier for me to see their conflict impartially since the chapter was in Tom's POV, because he sees both sides. I think Bill's reaction is normal for one so abnormal as himself, though the resignation hurts a bit to read.
"the other was something that wasn't going to be leaving." Love that line; it says a lot about Tom's commitment to Bill that he thinks it that way. And that reminds me of how I appreciate the fact that you didn't jump into their relationship because the change in Bill's personality was a more important topic to discuss.
And, um, um, aaagh! So many things I want to discuss. This is why I hate leaving reviews when I don't have time to look things through carefully, but I'm backed into a corner here. And I figured I should let Froggamuffin know I was still alive. :3
(Enjoyed the Hints in this chapter too, btw. Going on my List they are.)
I'll be back with better feedback and hopefully a less exhausted mind once I get internets of my own. Till then, much love.
Ella
Date: 08/10/08 12:03 am Title: The Old Telescope
Cliffie! Nooo! Poor Bill, he's not supposed to be normal. :(