Date: 11/12/15 02:16 pm Title: Epilogue.
Gosh!It's so sweet,I could die from diabetes.Tom is perfect. Bill is adorable and I'm all fuzzy. :)
Date: 08/30/14 08:49 am Title: Epilogue.
I forgot to ask, where's this sequel? It's been years. Don't say there's going to be a sequel when there isn't one. I hate when people do that, I was so looking forward to reading it.
Date: 08/30/14 08:47 am Title: Epilogue.
What a sweet story. I loved how over protective Tom was over Bill.
Date: 08/30/14 08:37 am Title: Chapter Five; I wont let anyone hurt you.
Sweetheart is one word, for future reference, if you didn't already know that.
Date: 08/30/14 08:34 am Title: Chapter Four; He wants to help Bill.
THis story isn't that bad. Simone sticking up for her ex husband who abandoned them and now just showing up out of the blue to fix Bill, which is, well impossible. Not trying to complaine but this story really needed a beta or something because you have a lot of punctuation and grammar mistakes, in some areas you seemed to forget your apostrophies ( ' ) and some capitals. But I still enjoyed this.
Date: 09/03/13 03:34 pm Title: Prologue
where's the sequel? love your story!
Author's Response: Awww! I'm working on it hun. I'm trying to finish up Caught Off Guard, and another story i've had planned for years. But i will get around to the sequel soon :)
Date: 06/25/13 09:24 am Title: Chapter Four; He wants to help Bill.
He tried to ignore the rage inside, and shit his mouth.
shit his mouth.
Lol at first I didn't think that was a typo.
Date: 03/26/12 09:40 am Title: Epilogue.
this was a really good story!
i cant wait to read the sequel to this~!
Date: 02/17/12 08:42 am Title: Epilogue.
This story is so unbelievably adorable! and the ending is so perfect
t :D i loved it so much :) I honestly cannot wait for the sequel!
I hope you can find something that restores your will to create. You have a gift :)
Date: 09/01/11 03:58 pm Title: Prologue
Please write a sequel!
This will always be one of my favourite fics! I've read it like, 900 times!
Author's Response: Omg! You reviewed this back in 2011 and i never got around to replying! I'm soo sorry!!!! I'm actually working on the sequel :) I've just gotta get my other fic, Caught Off Guard finished up first.
Date: 04/17/11 03:33 pm Title: Epilogue.
Lovely story.
You totally had me at the very begging. I'm such a fan of protective!Tom, and you did a great job writing him out.
I would definitely love to read this new chapter in the twins' lives. Seems interesting.
Thanks for sharing.
Take care!
Date: 03/31/11 03:21 pm Title: Epilogue.
That was such a sweet story. I loved it.
Date: 02/25/11 08:32 pm Title: Epilogue.
I want more it was cute
Date: 02/17/11 09:58 pm Title: Epilogue.
This was beautiful, really emotional and the romanced fluff was spot on!!!
Thanks for sharing!!!!!
Date: 10/13/10 10:34 am Title: Epilogue.
Aww... That was so cute!
Date: 09/29/10 11:39 pm Title: Epilogue.
It was amazing story, I love it
Date: 07/14/10 10:48 am Title: Epilogue.
uhhm whats the sequal gonna be called
Date: 03/13/10 04:13 pm Title: Epilogue.
I want a sequel now!
Date: 01/17/10 05:06 pm Title: Prologue
awww so cute, love it already ! Gonna reat the rest now :)