Date: 03/30/19 04:59 am Title: "I've got a surpise for you tonight, Tomi..."
this was a really good story!!
i hope that you did a sequel to this
Date: 08/30/12 08:57 pm Title: "I've got a surpise for you tonight, Tomi..."
This was pretty good. I don't know the exact history of when gypsies became known to the western world, but that doesn't matter too much for this story XD Oh, and one thing: The dresses the servant girls were wearing at Folkert's house? Yeah, no self-respecting noble would have allowed his servants to walk about in rags. Patched clothes, yes. But raggedy dressed? Never. Apart from that, I really liked this ^-^ It was a good story, and I can't wait to read the Gusti one and the Georg one XD
Date: 08/30/12 08:13 pm Title: The Gypsy Girl
As a history geek, I just have to say this: First, one would NEVER had inquired after the "restroom" in high society for two reasons: One, they didn't exist. There were outhouses, and chamber pots in bedrooms. Two, it was simply rude, for many years (and still is in some places) to ask where the bathroom is. For a long time it was the fashion to excuse oneself as going on a walk to disguise it, and I expect that's what Tom would have done, since he didn't care about being rude (one would not have left the table for anything but a messenger, probably, in those days, if one wanted to be polite XD)
Date: 11/18/10 01:59 pm Title: "I've got a surpise for you tonight, Tomi..."
wow So cool and interesting I realy enjoyed reading...
Date: 10/07/10 08:03 am Title: An unwanted engagement
I loved this chapter =) Poor Bill though =(
Date: 03/16/10 09:04 pm Title: "I've got a surpise for you tonight, Tomi..."
That was so cool! Having the past and the present. :) I'll be looking for your sequel!!
Date: 12/02/09 04:32 pm Title: The Gypsy Girl
*flutter claps* awesome! I love the image of Bill bellydancing OMG so hot! I like how the story is progressing. So far seems fairly organic. I could see this being the case. Bill's only survival. And Tom being intersted. But now he has to choose a girl to marry.
Date: 12/02/09 04:31 pm Title: The wedding night
The world you set up seems that women and servents aren't supposed to have power but Tom's wife throws a fit and Tom says he won't enslave servents. Both allowing Lara to throw a fit and Tom to care for people of a lower station takes away from the logic you set up.
Tom is too nice to Bill. And who does Tom expect to clean up the house if he doesn't hire servants and Bill doesn't do it?
The violin would be out of tune in a few days with weather changes. And where did Tom's amazing musical skills come from? We haven't heard about them before ever.
Date: 12/02/09 04:23 pm Title: An unwanted engagement
The writing is great the story is starting to loose favor with me. The logic is kind of shakey. Bill being found out quickly after Tom discovered is kind of suspect. And the servent asking a question out of turn doesn't follow with servent logic. Still good but losing it's edge.
Date: 12/02/09 04:16 pm Title: "You left me..."
ok unexpected twist. I though for a very long moment that I had some how switched stories. Ok I can go with vampires but I don't think it was necessary for the story. I think they could have just been in the middleages and been ok.
Date: 12/02/09 04:05 pm Title: Mr. Folkert's Ball
This is very interesting. I'm hooked. Awesome! Nice to see a well written story, they tend to be few and far between.
Date: 03/26/09 03:58 pm Title: "I've got a surpise for you tonight, Tomi..."
Like the sudden twist in the story!!
I know the song so I kinda had the idea they were..
you know..
Yeah!
Keep on rocking!
Date: 01/20/09 08:05 pm Title: "I've got a surpise for you tonight, Tomi..."
OMG I LOVE IT!
YOUR IDEA OF VAMPIRES IS AWESOME!
i LOVE IT SO FUCKINīMUCH!
Date: 01/19/09 01:37 am Title: An unwanted engagement
Lol i just started this story and i'm determind to get to the end even though its like 1:35am haha and i have school tomorrow =[
but LOL when i saw "Bilhelmina" i THOUGHT it said "Bulhemia" haha i was sooooooo confused for like 5minutes till it clicked! Wow i'm dumb =[
But i love this story so far! Kinda confusing but GOOD!
Date: 10/14/08 09:24 am Title: "I've got a surpise for you tonight, Tomi..."
Kawaii!! Wow, definatly luffed it. Theres was sumit almost cute about it...
I can sorta see how you extended this from Nymphetamine (that song is amazin)
~jumps about nd goes 2 read the sequal~
~Luv~
Date: 08/29/08 07:21 am Title: "I've got a surpise for you tonight, Tomi..."
hmmm. very interesting. very intriguing.
Date: 05/13/08 10:33 pm Title: "You left me..."
This is my "Aha!" moment. I was really confused for a bit. This is beautiful.
Date: 04/12/08 03:56 pm Title: Lara's Return
Lol, I'm VERY confused about the chapters with the "present" Bill and Tom XD But I suppose I'll get it towards the end... Nice story though!!
Date: 04/06/08 06:05 pm Title: "I've got a surpise for you tonight, Tomi..."
I loved this story. It was really good. Thank you for a great fic!
Date: 04/06/08 05:57 pm Title: "Tooommmiiii..."
Right..? I don't get it Oo