Date: 05/04/09 09:33 pm Title: Epilogue
-sighs- Damn...
I chuckled when I read the very last sentence.
Date: 02/08/09 05:34 pm Title: Lust
That was hot. I am glad you started off with lust. Very very good choice!
You aren't from the U.S are you?
:] you use things like "trousers","They were a real fucker to get off", & "snog"
lol, very cute. i love it! thank you!
Date: 01/17/09 11:20 am Title: Epilogue
Awwww!
I like this story , because it has a very rare sad ending. You dont see that a lot anymore. Good job!
Date: 01/17/09 10:57 am Title: Prologue
I am actually glad that you wrote a prologue ^_^
Date: 12/29/08 05:52 pm Title: Epilogue
Ohhhh! That was so sad, and very heart wreaching, but it was still a great story!
Date: 12/19/08 05:17 am Title: Epilogue
Oh my God.. This story was sad! But yeah, I really liked it.. You're a very good author..! :D
Date: 09/30/08 07:57 pm Title: Greed
it wasn't really greed though, more like pride. greed for the materialism and crave for the spotlight, but pride for getting off off of how good Bill thought he looked =) that made me smile a little
Date: 09/19/08 11:25 pm Title: Wrath
woah....so much drama...idk if i can handle much more...its intense..very, intense...
P:
iloveit
Date: 08/13/08 06:16 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh my... 0_O I loved that :O
It felt so real...Now for some reason I keep thinking Tokio hotel actually did split up...hehe
Awesome story ^^
Date: 08/12/08 12:23 pm Title: Epilogue
The last line got me. xD
But I loved it. It was really interesting.
Date: 08/09/08 10:07 am Title: Epilogue
love that last line
Date: 08/01/08 12:29 pm Title: Epilogue
Ohmygod! That was an amazing story! I loved it! The last line made me laugh. "They came, they saw, and they fucked it all up."
^_^
Date: 07/27/08 11:20 pm Title: Epilogue
Not the ending I expected, but good none the less.
Date: 07/25/08 08:08 pm Title: Epilogue
RIP
Here lies Tokio Hotel.
They came, they saw, and they fucked it all up.
-> great ending!
I liked this story, nice work!
*thumbs up*
Date: 07/25/08 08:06 pm Title: Pride
This was so sad :(
I'm glad this is fiction! :)
Date: 07/25/08 08:00 pm Title: Wrath
WOW! *is shocked*
Tom cut himself!
*is scared*
Tom is violent!
*runs off, away from Tom and to the next chapter*
:)
Date: 07/25/08 07:54 pm Title: Envy
It's your own fault, Georg!
But still, I feel little pity for him.
Nice chapter!
Date: 07/25/08 07:45 pm Title: Greed
-*steals Bills credit card* (he took Toms wallet, so I can take his, nah! I can be materialistic too :P)
-Tsssk Bill, don't be so full of yourself!
Erm...moaning your own name when you come?! xD
-I love Tom being so responsible and telling Bill he has to go apologize.
Date: 07/25/08 07:36 pm Title: Sloth
Gustav sees all
Gustav hears all
Gustav knows all
And Gustav keeps everything to himself
Katjana read
And Katjana liked!
Date: 07/25/08 07:29 pm Title: Gluttony
Great chapter!
So well-written!