Date: 03/23/14 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Cool story! Want more in this universe...
Date: 01/23/11 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this so, so, so much.
Date: 03/08/10 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Tom talking to his crotch made my day :D
Date: 01/31/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww.... A cute aww and a perverted aww too.
Date: 08/09/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like how Tom is always talking to Little Tomi. Lmao.
Date: 05/03/09 02:08 am Title: Chapter 1
awwwwwww, the end was entire cutness *w*
laughed soo hard with this one XD
Date: 01/22/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
He patted his crotch gently in apology. - *snorts*
As he made his way back to the girl, he decided that if he ever wanted to get laid on a regular basis, he'd have to get Bill laid, too. It was the only way they could both be happy. – funky boy logic ha ha
unable to tear his eyes away from Bill's crotch. 'Snap out of it,' Tom scolded himself. 'You weirdo.' - *grins*
"Tom," Bill said, turning to his brother. "Why do you suck so hard?"
They stared at each other in silence for a few moments and then both broke into uproarious laughter. - *smiles*
Tom growled, actually growled, and attached his lips to Bill's neck once more. Bill moaned out, body arching up. – uh-oh drunkenly getting into it. Oops.
Bill scoffed. "This isn't how you have sex."
"Mmm," Tom hummed. He put his head on Bill's chest and yawned. "This is how we have sex." – when drunk Tom is a good sharer.
Tom watched Bill leave and adjusted his pants. "This is bad," he said to his crotch. "Really bad." - *covers mouth and giggles* I’m really enjoying Tom’s conversations with his penis. *giggles*
"I suck," Bill said, his eyes flashing.
"Whoa, no," Tom said. Bill smiled and plucked at the buttons of Tom's pants. "Bill…"
"It's just us, and we're both horny and you did such a good job with me," Bill said. Suddenly, Tom's pants were open. - *Grins* it means something else now doesn’t it?
He felt hands slide inside his boxers and he gasped. "Careful, nails," Tom warned.
"I'm not going to use my hands," Bill said. He grinned and ducked his head down. - *bounces in chair and grins*
Tom closed his eyes and thought, 'This is bad, this is bad, this is… so fucking good.' - *giggles and claps*
Tom licked Bill's lips, didn't kiss him. They never kissed. - *makes a face* they will!
Suck it," Tom said. Bill strained against Tom's hold. "Suck it, Bill."
Bill tried to pull back but Tom wouldn't let him. "I can't."
"Try."
Bill's cheeks flushed and he parted his lips. He looked up through his eyelashes at his brother and Tom knew that he was going to lose it. Bill's tongue pressed wet and hot against Tom's cock.
"There you go," Tom said soothingly. "Open up."
Bill did and Tom pressed him down. – I like their game!
"You need to get laid, Tom," Bill said.
Tom knew he did. He looked at Bill and licked his lips. "I will, don't worry. We both will." – Tubby uh-oh!
"Will… I do? Am I the right person?" – *grins*
and kissed his brother full on the mouth. – I knew they would!
Date: 11/30/08 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1
rawr that was so hot
Date: 10/08/08 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this! So hot! Definitely going in my favorites.
Date: 06/02/08 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked your story!
Virgin!Bill is... adorable. He's so adorable, that Tom just needs to help *-*
Date: 03/24/08 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
...Tom talks to his crotch?
Brilliant.
Date: 02/23/08 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sexy! OMG! I really enjoyed that one!
Date: 11/18/07 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
aaw this one is soo cute, and sexy, I have to admit that ^^
Date: 11/09/07 02:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw i enjoyed readin this a lot. I read half of it and then i had to go out but was thinking about it the whole time hehe but it was a great read, you always have awesome stories (:
Date: 10/15/07 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
i fuckin love it!!! you're a really great writer, so write more now! =] xx
Date: 10/11/07 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't remember if I have ever given you any response on this story, but anyway I'm doing it now!
- Just wanna tell you that you are really talented. I like how this story ends up. It's so sweet and Tom is totally being the best brother to Bill EVER! Well.. Please write more stories, 'cause i've read all of yours.. Your deffently one of my favorite writers at this place!
Date: 09/22/07 06:08 am Title: Chapter 1
One of a kind!!! I loved it. Keep doing stuff like this ok? This rocks