Date: 05/12/15 10:31 am Title: "It was only a little flirting"
ooooo this was so so hot! I love jealous, possessive Tom, this was great!
I love your writing so much :)
Date: 10/28/11 07:41 am Title: "It was only a little flirting"
this was a good story!
Date: 06/30/10 04:12 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
haha Bill!!!
Date: 03/17/10 03:20 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
*stares and pants* God, I effin love rps and twincest. And this? It was just perfect. God
Date: 01/28/10 07:41 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
Oh dear, Bill liked the punishment. Tom is only digging himself in deeper. Figuratively and literally.
Date: 01/04/10 11:51 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
Incredibly Smexy this has to be tha first story I've read where Tom is DOM Bill and I loved it to death!
Date: 09/05/09 09:10 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
Tom is such an ass. It would be an HONOR to have Bill teasing me... ;)
Date: 08/07/09 03:56 am Title: "It was only a little flirting"
I loved it!!! :D
xx Chi ^^
Date: 06/13/09 07:19 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
This was good, especially love the ending!
Date: 04/28/09 06:33 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
Good god this is like the hottest story on this site.
As far as I'm concerned anyway. This is absolutely my favorite kink with them and NOBODY writes it. Not like this, anyway... disciplinary together with sexy smut together with love. I tried to write it myself because I couldn't find it around, but something always blocks me from writing explicit twin sex, so the story wasn't really what I wanted to read. This though, this is freaking PERFECT. I'm saving it to my computer so if the Internet vanishes tomorrow I'll still have it. Lol.
Great story! A sequel would be amazing :)))
Date: 05/25/08 05:02 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
Greaaaat story! I love the spanking
Date: 05/16/08 07:05 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
fuck this was hawt.....
Date: 05/12/08 05:47 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
Yum yum yum. I love Diva!Bill and Omg, I'm your daddy!Tom. Moar, because it was just so sexy.
Date: 05/01/08 07:34 am Title: "It was only a little flirting"
oh he is such a cheeky brat!!!! i love this one. i really do.
Date: 05/01/08 07:02 am Title: "It was only a little flirting"
I asked Majestrix for a fic with a jealous Tom, and this was what I got.
And it was totally what I wanted. Awesome!
Thank you.
Date: 04/11/08 07:04 am Title: "It was only a little flirting"
Guh. Brain has exploded from the hot smut. I would leave a more coherent review, but...but.. *gestures wildly at brain*
Awesome job. XD
Date: 04/07/08 09:13 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
Good god. Deja vu. I used to read this series of fanfiction based on the anime Ai no Kusabi, called Taming Riki. This sums it up. Suddenly i want to go read those again. Hmm. Gaaaah. I'm not sure if it disturbs me here. Although it was written awesomely. XDD.
Author's Response: It disturbed me a little to write it, but I like to challenge myself with my one-shots. I wasn't sure I could do a Dom!Tom.
Date: 04/07/08 01:38 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
yes!!
that was very cool
more like this.
we need it
Date: 04/07/08 01:01 pm Title: "It was only a little flirting"
awww god this is awesome
Date: 04/07/08 10:21 am Title: "It was only a little flirting"
I'm givin this a 5 because although you didn't have a butchered piece of work, I found this really hard to read when it came down to Tom telling his brother to get on his knees.
I find it cruel that Tom was treating him the way he was. Even though this was kinky, the part with Bill sobbing made this fiction go from interesting to cruel; even though Bill got stimulated from it (are you insinuating that he is perhaps a sadist?)
Very ooc. I don't mind ooc either, but how cliche can we get? Tom is bothered by his little brothers' tantrums so he hauls him to the hotel room and spanks him? That I have to admit is amusing. If he were my little brother I'd've spanked him to; but however, when you began speaking on how Bill started sobbing- that was just going too far.
I gathered that this small one-shot of yours is not to be taken too literally into account. After all, typically a pwp one-shot is made to be all crack and nothing else.
You did fairly well and I'm pleased that you don't have grammer mistakes dancing along your paragraphs.
Author's Response: You opinion is your opinion, and I've always said I've been open to constructive criticism. However, I wish you'd been a little more constructive with your criticism and there are some points I don't agree with. rnrnOOC is a difficult thing to gage when we are dealing with a fandom where the “characters” real personalities are not actually know. We have sort of established an artificial set of cannon personalities for the boys of Tokio Hotel, but know one knows for sure if that is the reality of things. The only time I'm going to put an OOC tag on anything is if the characters behaviors go beyond the realm of possibilities. Bill and Tom being a serial killers = pretty much beyond the realm of realistic possibilities. Bill and Tom getting off on a little kinky play = realistically possible. Maybe not likely, bu plausible. rnrnI'm getting that you were bothered by Bill's sobbing and the overtones of sadism and masochism. However, your interest or disinterest in a particular kink or genre has no bearing on the actually quality of the work. The scene was meant to be harsh, cruel, and intense. It was not written to be a light playful spanking. If that's not your thing, thats fine. That's why it has a heavy kink tag. rnrnYou know, my writing is far from perfect. There are so many things I am working to improve and I still have a tendency to make a lot of mistakes. What's interesting is that you haven't pointed out any of the flaws in this piece that I was already aware of. You haven't pointed out anything relating to the mechanics or style of my writing, just a dislike of the general plot and genre. rnrnI noticed you've only given one other review here which means you're probably pretty knew. It's great to have another reviewer here who isn't afraid to give their real opinion. However, you might want to stick to real constructive criticism and not nitpicking about genres.