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Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/20 01:44 am Title: Bill strode down the street...

OKAY THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE WHY HAVEN'T I READ THIS BEFORE SERIOUSLY OMG.

you're so funny in your writing, dude. so funny. like wtf! I just. yeah. FUCK YOU IT WAS CUTE

I DEMAND SEQUEL

Author's Response: Look, I'm considering a sequel... maybe kind of? But thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed :D

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/20 03:43 pm Title: Bill strode down the street...

nice save :)

Author's Response: *tips hat*

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/20 03:15 pm Title: Bill strode down the street...

just one question. if tom was living back with mum, why did he have to mug someone?

Author's Response: That is an excellent point. I fixed it! Thank you for reading <3

Reviewer: Reginleif Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/20 10:57 am Title: Bill strode down the street...

That was so funny. Tom is hilarious, I loooove him. I really want to see a sequel of that, so you have to get writing hehe.

Author's Response: Thank youuuuu! Look, the first thing I thought when I finished it was how I could follow it up with a sequel. I love Bill and Tom in this and I don't think I'm done with them yet. Stay tuned hah! Thanks again, I'm glad you liked it <333

Reviewer: Absinthe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/20 10:53 am Title: Bill strode down the street...

“If you don’t mind, I’m going to decline your very polite request and say no, thank you.” He pushed off the wall and began walking.
OH MY GOD
I didn't expected that and burst out laughing

“I’ll beat you up!” The teen said, but he didn’t sound very sure of himself, the end of his sentence rising in more of a question than a statement.
Hahahahaha
I can actually HEAR it and. Yeah. It's hilarious actually.

“It’s nice to meet you, Tom,” he said, adding, “Though I could have done without the circumstances.”
Oh. My. God.


“Found out my partner was cheating on me,” he mumbled, “I had to move out of the apartment because he wanted his new boyfriend to move in, so I moved back in with my mother.”
Okay that doesn't excuse the (very failed) mugging but. Poor thing.

Okay that was super sweet actually. That was unexpected (see what I did there ?? hehe)

I loved it < 3

Author's Response: Ahhh, this review is so sweet, thank you so much <3 I'm glad you liked it. This literally just... came out this morning, no idea where it came FROM but here it is. Thank you thank you thank you for reading :D

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/20 01:59 am Title: Bill strode down the street...

Uhm, fuck you? I'm too cold hearted for this kind of sweetness this early in the morning ok.

I love it and I love you! Thank you for this!

Author's Response: I will melt your cold heart one fic at a time! :D I'm almost at 20 stories so expect more like this hah! Thank you for reading <3 Love YOU!

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/20 09:50 pm Title: Bill strode down the street...

That was very unexpected ... Dine with your near robber. At least she was able to save Tom from committing a crime.

Author's Response: Ahh, we all know he wasn't ACTUALLY going to rob him, he's too much of a teddy-bear. Thank you for reading <3

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