Date: 12/21/19 04:08 pm Title: Christmas Eve...
awww, this was super cute!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I had so much fun writing it, so I'm glad you liked it <3
Date: 12/21/19 04:05 pm Title: Christmas Eve...
__it had started a ten-year fling which had made them both insanely happy, and devastatingly sad.__
I really like this line, there's something very simple & elegant about it.
this is lovely! Biorg is such a rare pairing but you make it totally believable & super adorable in this. also, apart from Biorg, I really enjoyed Tom in this, seeing through them both but just keeping that to himself until they were ready, that was both funny & sweet :D
plus, apart from plot & characters, I really like your style, the sentences flow really well. thanks for sharing! :)
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much for your beautiful review <3 I LOVE Biorg, so lovely to explore, and I'm glad you've enjoyed it.
Date: 12/21/19 04:04 pm Title: Christmas Eve...
Oh my god oh my god oh my god THE END. I love it. It's perfect.
But honestly, this whole thing is perfect & soft & it made me so happy. It's so warm and hnnnng. I don't know what to say because I'm currently just a mush of feelings, but damn I love that.
Thank you for sharing your work, merry christmas to you too ! I hope to read again from you soon !
Author's Response: Thank you so much, for both reading and reviewing <3
Date: 12/18/19 12:23 pm Title: Christmas Eve...
sweet
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: 12/18/19 08:41 am Title: Christmas Eve...
this was beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3
Date: 12/17/19 02:56 pm Title: Christmas Eve...
Oh and I wanted to tell you there's a bit of a coding issue in a couple of places. It happens sometimes and we don't really know why, but you should read it through and edit those away :) (it adds a random "r32" at a few places in the text for... whatever reasons. Happens to everyone at some point lol)
Author's Response: Ah, I'll definitely do that, thanks for the heads up!
Date: 12/17/19 02:52 pm Title: Christmas Eve...
How to win me over? Write about Georg. Torg or Biorg, don't care which, just give me some Geo with one of the twins and I will forever be yours, and this, this was gorgeous!
I have so much to say I don't even know where to begin. The way you described the city, the constant sounds, never really quiet for real, the concrete, the smog.. I don't know, but there was something poetic about it.
And Georg, my sweet precious Georg, waiting like that, suddenly nervous when he hears the twins entering the house.. oh babe, how I adore him.
And when Bill saw it was him, damn, my heart! It was so sweet, THEY are so sweet, and then the movies and the talk and just... I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY! I can't find the words to describe how much I ADORE this!
I love this. I love all of it. I love nervous Georg, I love sweet as fuck Bill, I love protective big brother Tom and I just... love it all.
This is how a Christmas story should be, sweet and fluffy and just a pure joy to read. Thank you so much! I've had some real shitty days lately and this just made my evening so much better. Thank you!
Author's Response: Oh my lord, I'm so SO excited that you love this! I ADORE your fics (I've spent more than a little bit of time reading through your catalogue, haha). Fluffy is my absolute favourite to write, and for some reason, I love Georg with either twin too. Anyways, thank you SO much for reading and for leaving a review <3