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Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/20/19 03:33 pm Title: Desperate times - Bill

Ahw, poor Billy! I hope things will turn out better for them and that he can eventually open up to Tom and start speaking again. Little baby :( xoxo

Author's Response: Ehehe someone is soft for little Bill. And not only Tomi ^_^

Reviewer: laci Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/19 07:41 am Title: Worth it -Tom

I love how Bill enjoys when Tom looks at him and knows Tom thinks he's beautiful, and I like that their relationship is slowly progressing. Aw, he embraced Tom first! His blushing and hugging Tom because he took care of his hand was cute.

It's so sad that Bill thinks he's not worth it :( I hope he'll do alright with meeting Tom's mom and when he has to confirm Tom's story.

Tom feeding Bill on his lap was so adorable :) I love what Tom told him at the end, so sweet. I really hope if Bill gets better someday, he'll still wanna be with Tom and can somehow reassure Tom of that. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this lovely review! I hope the next chapter will make you happy!

Reviewer: DreamMachine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/19 04:42 pm Title: Love in idleness - Bill

I’m behind again :( but still loving this loads!!! Hope things turn out well for them, can’t wait to see how this relationship will unfold.

Author's Response: Ah Naomi... always late,Naomi... like when I took a nap for 30 minutes until you got ready, Naomi... hahahaha, love you.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/19 10:40 pm Title: Worth it -Tom

This was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/13/19 02:02 pm Title: Worth it -Tom

Aahw, poor Billy :( I hope he'll be okay and that everything will work out fine for them. I want them to be happy. And to fuck, but that's my problem. Love you!

Author's Response: Ehehehe prepare to help Angiiiie.

Reviewer: laci Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/19 08:07 pm Title: Love in idleness - Bill

This story gets better with every chapter! I felt bad for Bill in the beginning when he thought Tom didn't want him but I'm so glad Tom finally told him how he feels. And I love how Tom is so sweet and gentle with him, and calling him little prince :')

I've noticed how Bill always talks about pleasing Tom and it's as if he doesn't even realize that Tom could do the same for him, probably because that was never a possibility with the men who abused him in the past, or maybe he doesn't think he deserves it so he hasn't thought about it. Hopefully Tom will show him how well he can be treated by a good man. I'm also hoping that someday Tom will be able to break through whatever mental wall is preventing Bill from talking.

I really hope Tom doesn't get punished so they will be able to be together and live happily ever after :D Can't wait to read what happens next!!

Author's Response: Well I have a soft spot for Tom calling Bill a little prince indeed... I do suggest you take a look at my previous fics, I guess you'd like them! Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/19 03:46 am Title: Love in idleness - Bill

This was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you dear!

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/19 03:19 pm Title: Love in idleness - Bill

Ariiii *whines* why are you doing this to me? I need to know if there will be a trial and if Tom will be prosecuted. PLEASE TELL ME OR I'LL DIE.
Yours truly.

Author's Response: You'll have to die, excuse me :P You'll have to wait I suppose

Reviewer: Gaby29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/19 02:51 pm Title: Love in idleness - Bill

Really likes your story can't wait to know whats gonna happen:D

Author's Response: Thanks so much my dear!

Reviewer: laci Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/19 11:18 am Title: In New Grounds - Tom

This was one of my favorite chapters yet! I liked when Tom was thinking about how he couldn't live without Bill rushing to hug him when he gets home. It's good that Bill doesn't seem afraid of him anymore.

I felt so bad for Bill when he felt like Tom was rejecting him and cried himself to sleep :( But I'm glad they're both starting to realize they have feelings for each other and that Tom is willing to wait for him and doesn't wanna hurt him.

Bill is so cute when he pouts lol, but it was interesting how he was acting like a little boy one minute and then flirting with Tom the next minute. It seems like he's in a mindset where he wants to act like a child since he missed out on his childhood but he also wants to act his age sometimes and falling in love with Tom is probably making him feel flirtatious :D It makes for an interesting aspect of the story.

I hope Bill will know how Tom feels about him soon and that they'll be together. And I hope neither of them will get in trouble!

I like how you describe their thoughts and feelings and I love their interactions with each other. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Your reviews are always so beautiful, thank you so much! Billy is in love... ah, yes he's cute. Let's see how things are going to turn out!

Reviewer: DreamMachine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/19 04:57 pm Title: In New Grounds - Tom

Oooh, this was so nice! Now I know this might make me sound cruel but I really liked this :p it was cute to see this new side of Bill and I can’t wait to see where it goes! Great work as always!

Author's Response: Hihih yes I know, you're the angst queen :P Thanks Naomiiiiiiiiiiii

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/25/19 06:26 pm Title: In New Grounds - Tom

OOOOOMG I NEED MORE ;O ARIII GIMME MORE PLEASE! I need to know what happens! I love it!

Author's Response: I will, Angie, I will. Thanks so much my darling.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/19 04:07 pm Title: In New Grounds - Tom

this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/19 05:42 pm Title: Blood on my hands- Bill

Poor Bill :( But great chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: DreamMachine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/19 09:57 am Title: Blood on my hands- Bill

I loved this! Finally something to satisfy my bloodlust 😂 it’s nice Bill finally got a chance to stand up for himself, especially in such a major way. I can’t wait to see what’ll happen next.

Author's Response: Glad to be of service to the blood thirsty miss :P

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/19 10:21 pm Title: Blood on my hands- Bill

this was a really good chapter!!
i can not wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much dear!

Reviewer: laci Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/19 08:26 pm Title: Blood on my hands- Bill

Poor Billy, he had to kill someone but I'm glad the guy is dead and that Bill didn't end up hurt instead. It's sweet that he was considering going with him just so Tom wouldn't be in danger.

I don't know if it was intentional but I looked up the meaning of a single white rose and it said it can be a gesture of strong emotion and devotion. That would be very fitting for this chapter given the fact that Tom is willing to say he killed the guy just to protect Bill. It also said a white rose can represent purity, innocence, sympathy, love and hope :')

It was sad when Bill said, "Why did I never tell him how much I love him?" I really hope he will tell him soon! And I hope Tom or Bill won't get in any trouble for what happened.

I love the way Tom treats Bill, how he holds him and is always so sweet to him and protective over him and how Bill hides in Tom's arms because he only feels safe with him. I can't wait to see what will happen between the two of them next!! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah the one single rose is something I really like. Tom is a sweetheart, I really like how his character turned out. Stay tuned for more, thanks!

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/19 06:07 pm Title: Blood on my hands- Bill

Ariiii *cries*

Why do you do this to me? Poor Billy :( you better make all of this shit better, or so help me God... POOR BABIES!

Please gimme more soon! Pretty please? xoxo

Author's Response: I guess next one will make you kinda happy... and you have work to do soooon (more like Bill soon, but yeah ahahah)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/19 07:54 am Title: A big brown gaze- Tom

this was a really good chapter!
i can not wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much dear, enjoy the next one!

Reviewer: DreamMachine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/19 12:24 am Title: A big brown gaze- Tom

Ooh how sad :( Tom is taking it really well though, I like his reaction! I’m also glad to see Bill is opening up, even if it does come with some sadness right now. A lovely chapter yet again. So I guess I’m all caught up now and I’m stuck waiting for the next one. Looking forward to it!

Author's Response: Awww you've been leaving some really nice reviews lately you know. Thanks sweetie. I'll answer them all I promise!

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