Date: 03/04/15 02:22 am Title: Bill
It was extremely difficult for me to imagine Tom acting like that, like so unconcerned about his brother's misery... saying that he deserved it. It was so out of character, I believe. I'm already reading The Recovery, so I know he actually regrets what he did (or rather what he didn't do) but I just wanted to come here and say that. :p I'll leave a review at The Recovery whenever I'm not struggling with procrastination and homework. BTW, I love Georg!
Author's Response: Thanks! This version of Tom is quite an OOC version, I think. There's something just a little bit wrong with his brain, to make him act the way he does.
Date: 02/10/15 01:52 am Title: Bill
OH my... Oh my, my, my... :-D This was good. Really really good. I have a huge thing for darkfic and this just pushed most of my buttons, I have to say. I love how it was Gustav. It makes perfect sense what with how much more muscular than Bill he is. It just came together wonderfully to me. Every word just flowed together. I loved it. Truly loved it. It goes into my favorites this for sure! Thank you for a SPECTACULAR read!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. The feedback for this one has been pretty mixed so far, so it's nice to get an unequivocally positive review!
Date: 01/09/15 11:01 pm Title: Gustav
id like a georg fixes bill one
i had an idea about Tom
Tom POV:
Tom has been in love with Bill since before he knew what love was.
He has hid it all these years but as time passes, it gets harder and harder to hide his feelings, until he finally snaps and rapes Bill.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'll keep the idea in mind, but I don't think love comes into a scenario like that. When you love someone the last thing you ever want to do is hurt them. What you've described sounds a lot more like obsession or infatuation, which definitely could lead to rape and abuse.
Date: 01/09/15 05:11 pm Title: Gustav
Gosh i wasnīt expecting THAT!! In a good way i mean ( sorry for my bad english) So glad that Georg found Bill. I canīt imagine IF not! Round TWO? i wanna punch and hurt Gustav and Tom so BAD! YES RUN RUN RUN BUT gosh i hope they will be found and theyīll get what they deserve. Holy Crap. I canīt believe what Gustav did and esp. Tom. They are sick so so totally sick.
I love Georg so much right now. I donīt know how he will help Bill... IF he can! Just be there for him... talk to him... i donīt know...Bill can stay at his place as long as he want to. FOREVER! OHHH Georg somehow will track Gustav and Tom and then BILL can have HIS revenge????
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't know if revenge will be a part of the sequel because Georg doesn't strike me as the type to fall to their level, but it's something I'll keep in mind. Gustav is definitely sick, he has no remorse or guilt for what he did. Tom... he's a little more complicated, I think.
Date: 01/09/15 12:59 am Title: Gustav
I'd love to read a sequel about Bill's recovery.
Author's Response: I'll start working on it when I get some free time. I don't know how it'll go yet.
Date: 01/08/15 11:49 pm Title: Gustav
It looks that Bill was not the only victim of Gustav's. Is Gustav a serial rapist?
Seems a bit weird that both he and Tom would jeopardize the band for a piece of ass. I guess Gustav is a sociopath. I cannot even guess what is wrong with Tom.
It started as an interesting story, but it ended rather abruptly as nothing got resolved.
Author's Response: You know, I didn't plan this at all so I don't know about Gustav. He might be a serial rapist. He certainly acts like one, and his plans suggest he's had some practice. Most rapists are serials though, so it makes sense. As for jeopardizing the band, well, his intention was to make sure Bill never talked to anyone about it. He's pretty clear about that.rnrnI think the story resolves nicely enough though - Bill is going to be taken to hospital and be cared for by Georg, while Gustav and Tom go on the run until the cops catch up with them. I'm sort of thinking about a sequel though, focusing on Bill's recovery and the guys on the run.
Date: 01/08/15 10:26 pm Title: Georg
OMG FUCKIN ASSHOLES how could they Tom he said your brother !!!!
Author's Response: Tom's just not a very nice guy, y'know?
Date: 01/08/15 09:56 pm Title: Georg
I still cannot believe that Tom can do this to Bill and then leave Bill like that. He would have to really hate his twin to do so. How did it come to this?
So glad that George got to Bill on time and persuaded Bill to call David. Bill needs professional help and immediately.
Author's Response: Some people are just really messed up. Tom is one of them. You never know what people are like under the surface, and love and hate are very closely related emotions.
Date: 01/08/15 08:07 pm Title: Georg
Thank god for Georg. I hope they'll get out of there and that Bill can somehow begin healing. He'll never be the same, of course, but maybe he can find some kind of life with Georg's help.
I'm really looking forward to next chapter, your writing is really good, I could feel Bill's fear and pain and the how shocked and disgusted Georg must be because of what happened to Bill.
Great job so far, can't wait for next one!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter might be a bit of a wrench since it's goes back to focus on what Tom and Gustav are getting up to while Georg is trying to save Bill's life. It looks like I'm going to have to write a sequel to this story though, so that people get to see poor Bill recover with Georg's help.
Date: 01/08/15 04:15 pm Title: Tom
OMG... OMG,,, i canīt caaaaaanīt breath right now. Poor Bill and JESUS Gustav is just, canīt find words. But Tom? Heīs Billīs Twin. HOW can he let THAT Happen? PLZ PLT write another Chapter. Canīt wait. OMG i think Bill is broken now
Author's Response: Bill is pretty definitely broken by this, but I think Tom in his own way is also broken. Something in him doesn't work right since he didn't want to protect his own brother.
Date: 01/08/15 03:46 pm Title: Tom
I see true potential in this fic I'm in utter shock
Author's Response: I think that means you liked it. I'll take that.
Date: 01/08/15 12:37 am Title: Tom
This Tom is a truly horrible brother. I hope Bill will never talk to either Tom or Gustav again after this rape and leave these two monsters behind forever.
I do want someone to put Bill back together. If Georg can do this, it'd be great. I am not interested however to read about Tom and Gustav going at it. I want them to pay for what they did to poor Bill.
Author's Response: I don't know if they'll ever pay for what they did. Reality is that justice for rapists is rare and inadequate at best. I might yet write about Geo putting Bill back together, but he won't ever be the same after this. That's just the way it is.
Date: 01/08/15 12:29 am Title: Bill
Poor Bill. Gustav is horrible, should be put behind the bars.
Author's Response: It ain't meant to be a nice story. Sometimes real life is nasty and brutal like this.