Reviews For Little White Lies
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Reviewer: jumbomarshmellows Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/14 01:33 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm hanging from a cliff here! I can't hold on much longer! lol.

Author's Response: You will have to hold on till Sunday! Don't fall! haha

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/14 01:28 am Title: Chapter 2

Tom would have to do a good job to convince his mom that he is "really" gay....and that he is dating Bill. that can be interesting and hopefully he won't kill him for that hahhahaha

Author's Response: Yeah, it will be a pretty hard lie to commit to, but he's determined now haha. Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Gatt0fMischief70k1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/14 01:16 am Title: Chapter 2

Yaaayyyyy! Update!!! So happy!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Next chapter will be up early Sunday :D

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/14 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Holy shit! Gosh Tom what have you gotten yourself into, but the relationship is so sweet between him and Bill almost a bit weird with the jokes haha. Amazing chapter can't wait to see what happends next.

Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, yeah, Bill and Tom are close, maybe a little too close? They are about to get a whole lot closer haha. Thanks for reviewing! It won't be long for more!

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/14 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1

wow! so interesting already! i cNt wait to see how this turns out! :D *tracks*

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :D

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/14 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

BAM! And there you have it. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks! More shall be up fairly soon! :D

Reviewer: jumbomarshmellows Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/14 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh the cliffhanger effect, I love it. I can't wait to see what the next chapter will bring. Good writing too, I only saw very few mistakes, and I'm only saying that because I have dyslexia and I make a lot of mistakes when writing. Not bashing on your story though!! I just thought you'd like to know that were some mistakes because I've written a book and always liked it when someone told me I messed up somewhere. And I don't know if you like to know when there's and error or not... And I'm... I'm sorry, if I offended you! This is just the first story I've ever reviewed on and I get nervous about it 'cause I don't wanna offend people. So I just.. I'm sorry. Here's my review, its good. I hope you'll put up more.

Author's Response: No worries, you didn't offend me, I appreciate the honesty. I don't have a beta reader so a lot of the times little mistakes will get by me. Feel free to point anything out and then I can fix it :D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/14 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

nice :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/14 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

well that's one way to get his mom off his back. looking forward to more.

Author's Response: For sure, although I don't know if she will quite let it go yet. Thank you for reviewing! More shall be up soon :D

Reviewer: Gatt0fMischief70k1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/14 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooooh What has Tom got himself into? Can't wait for updates! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! More shall be up soon :D

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/14 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1

This story sounds fantastic! Great start. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I appreciate it :) More shall be up soon!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/14 04:36 am Title: Chapter 1

PERFECT ....!!!! I'm not Tom and Simone was pissing me off ....!!!!! I wanted to slap her ....great job update soon

Author's Response: I know, I couldn't imagine having a mother like that haha. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/14 12:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha oh Tom you just got yourself in a bind there. Great start to a story! I'm so excited to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! More shall be up soon :)

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