Date: 03/31/14 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 7
She should have let Georg die.
Date: 03/20/14 01:13 am Title: Chapter 6
How can Tom not even look at her, I mean no eye contact whatsoever no acknowledgement nothing. I would've fell in tears.I feel so bad for her :( *sigh* wtf is Tom waiting to do, did he really just give her up just like that? And I can see that Tom handles gently I mean Ria still has her spark so he has gotta be sweet just like he was with her :3 gahhh :) please pleaseeee update soon and my condolences for you and your family Kinetix
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up at the start of next week, and thank you for your reviewing!! The answers to your question will be revealed in the next chapter or two...and thank you for the condolences! : )
Date: 03/19/14 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
I don't get the Bill character
Author's Response: That's atually what I'm going for! I'm trying to build up so that his character is a giant puzzle and then his true motives reveal in a big way, but that isn't going to happen until the last few chapters! Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 03/03/14 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
She should try to run away during the performance when the lion is unrestrained. Just use the lion to create a panic in the audience and take off in the middle of it.
Georg bit up her so badly. Why would Bill permit this? She is no use to him all blue and injured.
Date: 03/03/14 07:17 am Title: Chapter 5
This story is so good! Definitely my current favorite on this site. It's so well written, and let's be honest - a story like this is really hard to pull off and make believable... I feel kind of giddy everytime I see that there's an update.
Anyway, so Tom's plan did not work at all... And wow, your portrayal of Georg is so fascinating to me. And I also found myself wondering what kind of handler Bill would have been, when he made that comment about doing it himself... I mean, there must be a reason as to why everyone respects/fears him so much. Don't see how he could be much worse than Georg, though. I practically cringed at every single sentence of that scene, poor girl. I am a little worried that she'll get pregnant, but then again they'll probably just try to remove it, right? So excited for the next chapter, I can't shut up, haha
Date: 03/02/14 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Omg I hate Tom how can he just I don't understand. :( I feel so sad for her :( and then what Georg did its just omg so bad :( *sigh* I can just imagine how she will look after that night. Just omg completely destroyed and like he said completely broken. Tom would have some nerve to see her.
Date: 03/02/14 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Georg signed his death sentence.she is gonna get pregnant for sure
Date: 02/22/14 03:35 am Title: Chapter 4
This is quite a different story than anything I've read here, so I don't like to make predictions. But I will gladly get surprised, as soon as possible. Please go on!
Date: 02/21/14 12:32 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG OMG Why doesn't he just run away with her and take Ria too, I like Ria shes nice to Kyla :) its the first time I like Ria usually in every story I read she's made out to be a bitch XD lol
Date: 02/19/14 09:51 pm Title: Safe and Sound
I Didn't know what to expectations i m so pleased. What a plot i love it: the characters all.
Date: 02/18/14 06:21 pm Title: Safe and Sound
Can't tell you how excited I was that you updated already! That was a slightly more realistic first time than in many other stories on this site, which I loved. Tom seems like a good guy. I find it kind of funny that Georg is pictured as such a bad guy here, but somehow that also fits. And of course Bill... He's always kind of type cast as a good guy, and here he's like this evil maniac. Love that. Curious to see the fallout of Tom's actions though
Date: 02/18/14 05:48 pm Title: Safe and Sound
Poor girl. At least her first time was with someone who cares about her.
Date: 02/18/14 04:48 pm Title: Safe and Sound
He was kind of forceful and cold but Kyla is sweet. I wonder whats up with Bill can't help but shake the feeling that he has this hidden motive.
Date: 02/18/14 04:25 pm Title: Safe and Sound
Tom seems to be a nice guy, even though he works at a fucked up place... I feel sorry for Kyla, but I'm glad it was Tom and no one else.
I'm really worried over what the catch is though, I don't think Bill would just let Tom have her without wanting anything back..
Update soon please :)
Date: 02/18/14 09:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I'm so into this story! It's so good... But yeah.. Although I'm happy that there's going to be some action going on between Tom and her, I'm kind og curious as to why Bill would let him have her. I thought he was planning on making a lot of money on her virginity. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Don't worry! You will find out in the next few chapters what is behind Bill's generosity! Thanks for commenting : )
Date: 02/18/14 03:48 am Title: Chapter 2
I was dreading the performance because I knew she would have to sleep with a total stranger and because I think Tom and Kyla have a special connection but OMG its TOM!! ahhh! and yeshhh I am a Tom girl :) please please update soon! :(
Date: 02/18/14 03:19 am Title: There's only two types of people in this world...
OMG Just found this, Bill is sick and somehow I think Tom feels bad about all of this :( poor Kyla. :( your chapters are super LONG which i LOVE on to the next chapter this is new. Never read something like this before.
Date: 02/18/14 02:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh that was an evil cliffhanger haha! But I love this, it's really interesting and your writing keeps me hooked :) Please update soon!
Date: 02/18/14 01:50 am Title: There's only two types of people in this world...
I haven'r read anything like this before and i love it! Hope you keep writing!
Date: 02/17/14 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very captivating story!