Date: 05/03/14 08:45 pm Title: we clawed, we chained, our hearts in vain
This is becoming one of my favourite stories, definitely one of the best I've read on here in a while :) I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it, I love this story and am excited to get more chapters loaded soon!
Date: 04/28/14 11:56 pm Title: Don't you ever say I just walked away
Literally the best thing I've ever read.. Pleaseeee don't stoppp.. (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!!! I don't plan to, just a little slow with writing this one out!!
Date: 03/22/14 08:27 pm Title: Part III: Yeah, You, You Wreck Me
Wow, this chick makes me so angry. It's impossible to like her, because she's so stupid. Even after all that, she's not even angry... He slashed her open with a belt when she was only trying to protect him. He's a freaking murderer, how can she be so stupid... Other than that I like the story and the other characters.
Author's Response: More of her development happens in the progression of the story; right now she is supposed to be a bit naive, and the belting is addrressed in the next chapter. I hope you stick with until then, thanks for the review!
Date: 11/26/13 06:48 pm Title: ...and now you're not coming down.
great story .i like the fire between these 2 . hope Georg isn`t really a bad guy , really like him . Glad it is a georg story , not many i have read .
Date: 10/10/13 07:39 pm Title: We jumped, never asking why.
Very interesting. Good job honey
Date: 10/07/13 03:59 pm Title: We jumped, never asking why.
Oh my hot daymn....I like.. wow yea I need more!
Date: 10/03/13 10:07 pm Title: we clawed, we chained, our hearts in vain
I really love your writing style. This was a great first chapter. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! And thank you for reviewing, the next chapter will be up on Tuesday. :)