Date: 05/01/23 11:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 06/03/15 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Whaaaaat you cant just end it there!! This was super intense and really twisted how Tom was so charming at the cafe but then so fucked up. I'm really curious as to how Andreas worked out who Tom was and what happened when Bill tried to run away and was caught. AHhhhh so many unanswered questions!
Date: 09/05/13 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh, you have written one twisted, sick little piece of a great story. And you wrote it in the best possible way. You story telling skill is prime, you know... I was sitting on the edge of my seat. The whole time. Tom the psychopath and Bill the poor victim. The ending was quite chilling and had a great surprise factor to it. Very well done indeed. The biggest surprise for me came when I realized that Tom had gang bang buddies, Gs:S That part was quite revolting, to be using Bill like that... Disturbing but very well executed. I loved it!
P.S. Any update for your fabulous WIP coming soon? I have been missing your twins:)
Date: 08/29/13 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's really chilling! really good writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading
Date: 08/29/13 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sequel!!!! It was soo good!!!!!!
Author's Response: No sequel for this one. My fics tend to always dip in the Twisted category, so more to come, sooner or later. Glad you enjoyed
Date: 08/22/13 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yikes! D: That was almost too uncomfortable to read.
However, it was quite well-written, so props for that. And I like to think that it's an awareness/warning story.
Author's Response: If you'd like to consider if an awareness story, then by all means. I certainly I didn't, but whatever floats your boat. Cheers.
Date: 08/22/13 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I donīt even know where to start. I felt like I was there watching the horror. I would love another shot where Bill gets justice...or revenge!
Reading was extremely painful and I'll spare you the details...but this one shot is not only powerful but a good reminder for all to get and keep up with their own drinks!
Author's Response: I have a strong preference for rendering bill helpless, so a sequel for justice or revenge is not likely going to happen. I hope it wasn't too painful to read. I love to hear critiques, it helps my writing develop, so please by all means, do not spare me the details next time ;) thanks for reading.
Date: 08/21/13 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow this was really good. I don't even know how to review because I just liked everything about it - from Bill going about his day so innocently after a horrible night, Tom being crazy and pretending to be a gentleman, Andreas realizing a problem...The most significant part to me, though, was imaging Bill on the phone as Andreas is talking to him, being in his place, and feeling my stomach drop. That would be a horrifying experience. I would absolutely love a sequel (as long as Bill doesn't die...) because that was sooo good. If you're muse wills you, of course :)
Author's Response: A sequel for this fic doesn't seem likely. I've been stuck with the constant obsessive thoughts of bill being date raped, and so now it is out of my system. That's all this fic was. As I've mentioned in another review, my fics usually tend to hover around the same general Twisted themes, so there is always more to come down the road. Ill also add that I never kill off my main characters. I may torture them, but I will always bring my pairing together in the end. I have a pet peeve for depressing endings. They should come with warnings, in my opinion. Thanks for reading.
Date: 08/21/13 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I felt my heart drop a few cms XD
Author's Response: Well as long as it still functions..
Date: 08/21/13 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
No please make a sequel. Psycho tom is such an interesting character
Author's Response: Psycho Tom is my love, and there will always be more of him in my writing down the road. (I have more of him on my deviantart account. I don't post all my fics to THF, so please feel free to check that out) Thanks for reading.
Date: 08/21/13 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
more date rape fics please! :3
Author's Response: Oh, perhaps some day. Thanks for reading.
Date: 08/21/13 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so GOOD o.o
Maaaan
Author's Response: Glad you liked it xxx
Date: 08/21/13 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it, seriously loved it. One of the best oneshots I've ever read. Well done! :D
Author's Response: I appreciate hearing that, thank you. Glad you liked it.
Date: 08/21/13 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
oh wow, so it was Tom all along. good actor is he
Date: 08/21/13 09:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi, I have tears streaming down my face, because everything you've written, I could literally visualize in my mind. It's stuff I don't want to envision but it was so good, I couldn't help it. I feel kinda weird now, like squirmy and guilty. I don't know..
This was amazingly written, honestly it was perfect from start to finish. I couldn't take my eyes away from it, no matter how badly I wished I could. The structure of the whole story was really intriguing and so easy to follow and understand. You've got such a unique writing style actually and it's the type that has me captivated, wanting more. I really want to read some more of your work now. You're amazing. This is amazing. Well done:) xxxxx
Author's Response: Luring someone toward the 'dark side' leaves me with a sense of accomplishment. (We really do have cookies.) I hope I have corrupted your purest thoughts, and am thoroughly pleased to hear I've made you squirm. With that being said, I appreciate your insight on my writing. I work hard on the fics I post onto THF, and study hard to learn the ways of writing and literature, for the better sake of expressing the pent up, twisted thoughts in this scary mind of mine. Always more to come, down the road. Glad you liked it, and thank you for reading. xx
Date: 08/21/13 08:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I must say one of my favorite oneshots
Author's Response: How flattering. I'm so glad you liked it. Cheers
Date: 08/21/13 06:05 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG so good!!!!! *-* I loved it so much , you are amazing , you write the best rapes :D
Author's Response: And how utterly naughty of you to enjoy them. ;) cheers xxx
Date: 08/21/13 04:21 am Title: Chapter 1
This sounds so yummy :D gonna read xD
Date: 08/21/13 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Cool! Sequel please...
Author's Response: No sequel to this one. Thank you for reading. xxx