Date: 01/12/16 09:27 pm Title: NO LONGER ON HAITUS.
Welcome baaaaaaaack
Date: 12/29/15 09:19 pm Title: NO LONGER ON HAITUS.
Oh ! You are back finally and give us an end to this amazing story.
Thanks so much then. It was a beautiful story of love, strong love, true love, total love and the way you translated it, when such a relation can be hard to explain or even to understand, is just perfect. You found the wright words and I could feel every emotion that Tom could feel. And it's really uneasy in such a 'different' kind of relationship.
Bravo ! again for this.
Date: 12/28/15 08:08 am Title: NO LONGER ON HAITUS.
So, so happy to see you back. Loved the tenderness in this chapter, really showed the love between the twins. Hoping you'll post more now. Love Helen xx
Date: 12/15/15 11:12 am Title: Patience and Rewards
OK, righto! Now I've read everything you've put up and it's incredible. As per usual. I haven't read anything from you for a while (don't know why), but what jumps out to me as always is how you can just dig into a characters mind like that and pull out everything and display it for your readers. It's an amazing talent.
As is your talent from writing steaming hot sex-scenes that go on for ever. *lol* Because that is basically what this is. The entire fic is a BDSM-scene of sorts that just won't end. :-) I do like the back flashes you through in here and there. And, especially, the fact you throw in the subs subspace. Because that is so very rare that writers to that. That and safe words are such a huge part of BDSM, it should never be forgotten.
Also botTom. I'm all over it. To the point of reading twincest. X-D But you know that already. ;-)
Love you, woman. And your writing. I'll work with you with the rest if you wish me to. *VIKING-HUGS*
Date: 01/23/15 06:22 am Title: Safety Nets and Words
BDSM is not my scene, but I find that I rather enjoy learning the psychology behind it.
I like that the big revelation of what Bill wanted from Tom all this time was just for him to use his safewords! Aww.
Yeah, if the submissive doesn't speak up when things are too bad, that throws the whole balance out of sorts D:
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I enjoy exploring the psychology behind this story, almost more than the physical! It's interesting. PS: I've also updated!
Date: 02/14/14 08:01 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
ok
whew
hugs
Date: 01/17/14 06:24 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
well if you said "permanent hiatus" does that mean your never comeing back?
Author's Response: I should have worded that better - right now, I'm not going to add any more. I'm definitely not abandoning it, and I'm not going away. It's just going to take some time for me to get through this complicated period of my life, and then come back to writing. This is a very intense story to write, as I'm sure you can imagine, and it needs a certain headspace which I don't have at the moment. I really want to continue this story though!
Date: 01/08/14 03:37 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
That's a shame, but I guess you have to do what you have to do. I hope, first and foremost, that you get into a better emotional frame, and that you are okay because these are the important things. The story can wait an I find it admirable when an artist is able to say stop, not only for the sake of their well being, but also for that of their art.
Have a good time and rest plentifully so that maybe, one day, you will come back to this and conclude it.
Date: 12/22/13 09:22 pm Title: NO LONGER ON HAITUS.
why didnt you just end the story instead of putting it on permanent hiatus?
Author's Response: Because ending the story properly would require writing more - a lot more (at least 10K, if not more) and as much as I would love to right now, I'm not in a good enough position to be able to do that. All that I could write right now would be basically, "it was all a dream," and I'd like to think that my readers deserve a bit better than that. And that this story does too. I'm not being short with you, that's the truth. I'd love very much to come back to it and finish it properly but at the moment, it's not possible.
Date: 12/22/13 03:01 pm Title: NO LONGER ON HAITUS.
I'm sorry you're putting this on haitus, I really love your writing, but thanks fot the brief update.
Author's Response: Thinking of coming back to it once I've written it to the end, so there'll be no waiting for it to be done. I'm not abandoning it, but right now, this story is a little too intense for me to keep working on when I feel so fragile. Thank you for the many many reviews though :D
Date: 12/05/13 11:31 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
hehe. I thought it would fit this story or a sequel. Donno why but i just felt it fit
Author's Response: It definitely would in a sequel. I have noted it down :P *nods*
Date: 11/25/13 10:13 am Title: Safety Nets and Words
I just finished reading the last chapters, in the middle of the night. It was so intense, I couldn’t let go.
Tom assumes so many things from Bill, his submission is so incredible and we can really feel the love and confidence he has in Bill, to give himself over to Bill, totally.
Even ask permission to go to the toilets. It killed me. We feel that sometimes he would like to make things on his own but he never crosses the edge because it would break their entire lif. The way you write it is so amazing and it explains it so clearly.
Did Tom try to hide to have release, Bill would know it anyway, but more of that, the confidence they have in one another would collapse and none of them wants that, so Tom accepts this relation and more than that, he wants it
The psychology developed one chapter after the other is really amazing. We understand that Tom needs Bill domination, that they have discussed that very seriously and that Bill is like drug for him, but a precious one.
And though, he sometimes wants Bill to give in and stands up to him even if he knows what will happen next, instead of using his safe words to have Bill understand that he can’t take any more. He goes on and here is Bill wonderfully intelligent.
First of all, applause to Bill who keeps all his self-control and overcomes his feelings, because I know he is all on Tom’s needs. It’s just incredible to see how he manages to concentrate on Tom’s needs more than his. I would love to know more about Bill’s feelings, to know if he sometimes feels angry or disappointed by Tom.
And it’s amazing that he uses his self-control to have Tom understand that he must use his words. Because Bill loves Tom and he doesn’t want to make him suffer more than necessary. He’s obliged to go further until Tom understands it. I still don’t know if Tom definitely has it, but I think Bill is wonderful not to keep it all for himself but share everything with Tom and he throws himself into this relation with so much care, because people probably don’t realize what that means to take care of another person 24 on 24. All Bill’s attention on Tom, it’s really beautiful.
This story is incredible and Tom’s submission is so clearly related.
Enemas, gott, the enemas ! Tom hates them and yet he lets Bill inflict them to him. It’s so paradoxical, I don’t pretend to understand him, but he finds his achievement in submission, despite the unpleasant things.
He cries, he suffers, he pleads… and it’s so strong !
Thanks XD
Date: 10/27/13 02:54 am Title: Safety Nets and Words
-fans self- Yes indeed, Thank You times a million for updating! Intense to the max
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Hopefully I'll finish this story before the end of the year :D
Date: 10/16/13 05:23 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
I have an idea for your story though
how about some fisting?
Author's Response: I don't think that would fit into this particular story, though it definitely bears keeping in mind for a sequel. Hmm... I've never written it before but it could be interesting! Thank you for the idea :D
Date: 10/16/13 04:00 pm Title: Safety Nets and Words
Hallo,
First of all, thank you so much for answering all my reviews, it's so nice to reed them ! And I'm glad that you keep in mind my suggestion about seeing them in their every day life. I hope you will write it.
So, for now :
I love the way Bill drives Tom from desire and need to tenderness and kisses. Tom seems to relax a little and after the tense it releaves even the one who read !
It shows more and more how Bill is in total control and that Tom is really conscious of that and approves it.
I think this chapter is very important because it's much about Bill. What he feels even if his self-control is very strong, his love, the really care he gives to any fact or emotion. The way he plans everything is so comforting.
The way Bill makes Tom understand that he has to tell what he feels instead of struggle is fascinating. He pushes him until Tom can't do anything else but say the word ; I love his strenght of will.
And Tom, so sad to have to pronounce it, worry to disappoint Bill and fail to be a 'good boy', it's so cute !
Really, I love this chapter very much. And they're nearly reaching the point... now than everything is clearly defined, they will have full pleasure I assume ?
I'll be there for the next one.
Kisss - kty
Author's Response: So, here we are a few years on, but I have finally updated! Thank you for your review. Hope you enjoyed the ride :)
Date: 10/04/13 12:21 pm Title: Safety Nets and Words
I'm not going to lie, I don't really understand the exact nature of the relationship these two have, so some of the trust issues and whatever confused me, but I'm not complaining. The parts I DO understand, I love. And you write this so well. I really hope you update soon :D
Author's Response: I don't think the twins' relationship is particularly accessible to everybody in this story, to be honest, and I don't think you're alone with not understanding it completely! I hope next chapter will answer some of your questions when I put it up soon! Thank you so much for reviewing :D
Date: 09/29/13 01:02 am Title: Safety Nets and Words
girl you take me to another world!!
sometimes i couldn't even breath properly
hahaha
sorry for not comment in the last chapter both of them have been just fckin Awesome!!
Thanks for share!!
and i think...that woow...this is an intense, magical, epic, sublime love. Some kind of perfection from another reality!!!i better shut up now
you have make me wish to live something like this and play Tom's part, a lot of times lol is so crazy
totally in love with the story!!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you for your very enthusiastic review! I'm glad that I'm drawing you into the story too - that's my aim! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter too when I put it up soon!
Date: 09/28/13 12:29 am Title: Patience and Rewards
i dont know
haha
Author's Response: Neither do I XD
Date: 09/27/13 06:34 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
ROFL ok haha
Author's Response: What? Uh....? *confused*