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Reviewer: bubbles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 08/03/09 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
it's really good :-) but so short! write more :-)
Reviewer: starburst Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/08 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 05/27/08 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
O_O -cries-
I loved it. But :( poor Bill
You should definitely write more.
A bit more constructive criticism. I know you wrote it for school, so it probably only had to be so long. Next time put more into it, for more than a half a year going by and it's 10 paragraphs. But you did well in description and grammar. Good job.
Author's Response: I'm glade you liked it, i have 2 other stories if you whish to read them ^_^
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