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Reviewer: CharlotteRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/12 10:35 pm Title: " don't look at me that way, it was an honest mistake.."

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter and personally i would love to see more of Dani in the future! Update soon!

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/12 06:54 pm Title: "How can you say You're pullin' for me, hopin' for me Every day When I'm movin'on and gettin' on in Every way But I don't know where to start..."

why they all have to be that childish and bad tempered
it's tiring

Reviewer: suffused Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/12 11:57 am Title: "How can you say You're pullin' for me, hopin' for me Every day When I'm movin'on and gettin' on in Every way But I don't know where to start..."

Oh no! poor Andrej, poor Tom? This was a feel good chapter I can't wait to read the next! Hurry please :P

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/12 08:40 am Title: "How can you say You're pullin' for me, hopin' for me Every day When I'm movin'on and gettin' on in Every way But I don't know where to start..."

That picture of Dani is so cute. I can't believe that Tom nearly hit Andrej and then just left. Maybe Andrej did get a bit hysterical and overreacted but those pictures were pretty damning and also Tom wasn't very understanding that Andrej is feeling insecure about his looks and getting older and also because Tom already cheated on him once. I feel really sorry for the kids having to listen to them fight. I do hope they sort everything out and that Tom doesn't cheat again with Danila. I'm really into this story as I was with the previous one and I'm looking forward to your updates. Great stuff.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/12 03:36 am Title: "We Found Love In A Hopeless Place..."

Danila is hot, but Andrej is prettier by far. I can't believe Tom cheated on him and he went with Rick, that is so sad. No wonder Andrej has jealousy issues, especially thinking his body is ruined after having Dani. I'm a little bit confused about the time frame here. Zephyr was 7 wasn't he in the previous story, that makes him what 13 or 14 now, and Dani about 6? And Milo's about 17? Is that right? Anyway, great job and I'm looking forward to an update soon.

Author's Response:

yeah but it's like later in the year because it's seven years since they got married, and they got married about Dani's birth, so andrej is about 26. tom is 32 (he had Zephyr when he was 18), Dani is 7, Zephyr is 15 and Milo is about 18 - 19 (legal adult age)

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and YES danila os very hot, i picked him because i thought they sort of looked alike but in different ways and i thought that would be something that Andrej would play off of, that tom could just replace him with a younger version of him. I'm also thinking about bringing Rick into the picture.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/12 10:07 pm Title: "We Found Love In A Hopeless Place..."

I love that you almost always put a face to the names. *hugs*

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/12 10:04 pm Title: "And it's okay All the suffering obliterates at speed But don't you wait (don't you wait) For the faster you let go you will receive What you need And it's okay..."

Andrej will be so sassy singing Countdown XD Especially the part 'if you leave me you're out of your mind' lol

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/12 05:54 pm Title: "And it's okay All the suffering obliterates at speed But don't you wait (don't you wait) For the faster you let go you will receive What you need And it's okay..."

I loved Maybe I can Learn to Love Again, and this is a great opening chapter to the sequel. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/12 07:45 am Title: "And it's okay All the suffering obliterates at speed But don't you wait (don't you wait) For the faster you let go you will receive What you need And it's okay..."

loove it but i wish i could read the follow up od Matris Amor and the story in which Tom is going out with a slave girl

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