Date: 05/01/23 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 10/01/15 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
I just found your story and i read it fast because i could not stop myself from reading, i loved it!! Thanks, very lovely!
Date: 08/11/14 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 15
Hahaha!! The end was priceless and I'm so glad Bill was ableto see in the end! :)
Date: 03/31/13 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 15
I soooooo loved this story..... :)
Date: 02/04/12 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This most definitely did not suck! I loved it. The instant connection between the twins was adorable, and if anyone was listening in on me reading this I'd seem insane since I was audibly aww-ing every few paragraphs. Blind Bill fics are always really cute when Tom's his protector! :)
It was a little confusing in parts due to small grammar issues but other than that it was lovely. The only thing I would have liked is the Jorg/Tom abuse to have been mentioned a little more, like how it affected Tom and how Bill reacted etc... but I always have been a sucker for Hurt!Tom and Comforting!Bill so I'm probably a little bias there. :)
Lovely little fic, thank you for sharing. xo
Date: 10/19/11 12:44 am Title: Chapter 15
it didn't suck
LOL
that was great
that was kinda a fic prompt that I wanted. Thank you
Date: 10/15/11 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
ROFL
i can totally see Bill on Tom's back asleep
"giggles"
Date: 10/15/11 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
thank you for this
I have been wanting another story about Bill being blind
Date: 09/04/11 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Normally I get really bothered by mistakes and loose focus on the story, but this time I didn't. I spotted just a few mistakes, mainly relating to use of an incorrect tense. And I think the story is interesting enough. I am curious to see what happens next. So far, I am completely loving it.
Date: 09/04/11 03:39 am Title: Chapter 15
That was sweet! I enjoy the story, though I do find it leaps quite a bit between ch 14 &15, would love to see details! But still , the ending is great, I am totally happy-ending-fan :D
Date: 09/03/11 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 15
This end was really surprising! The last two chapters were maybe too fast, but it still makes sense so I like it!
Iīm happy that Jorg is in the prison. Told ever Tom to Bill what he do to him? And Simone wasnīt the best parent too. She didnīt seem to care.
Bill can see! And TH exist! Hooray! xD
Date: 09/03/11 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, itīs good! And Iīm sure itīll be even better. Iīm going to read next chapter.
Date: 09/02/11 09:29 am Title: Chapter 15
*Tries not to cry*
How cute!! They are engaged, Bill can see, TOKIO HOTEL EXISTS!! Jorg has been arrested, they are friends with the G's...
Everything is perfect!!
Author's Response: i had to make it a happy ending *nods and throws sparkles in the air*
Date: 09/02/11 09:26 am Title: Chapter 14
Jorg put Tom in the hospital?! Okay, the elephant is on his way.
And the end of this chapter was sweet!!
Date: 09/02/11 09:23 am Title: Chapter 13
Now I am just going to get the elephant myself and force him to eat Jorg up. He is such a meanie!!
Date: 09/02/11 09:21 am Title: Chapter 12
Ahh a car accident...
And they are kissing again! Goodness gracious they need to make a decision on where they stand with each other don't they?!
Author's Response: *nods* the car accident didn't help, his vision was already going by the time that happened 3: *snickers* they're conflicted boys xP
Date: 09/02/11 09:18 am Title: Chapter 11
So if he wasn't born blind does that mean something happened? Or did it just...like, appear?
Author's Response: it just appeared, like some cases. slowly, through-out his life his vision started getting blurier, he couldn't really see things clearly and the next thing he knows, he's legally blind :c
Date: 09/02/11 09:13 am Title: Chapter 10
Bill is being a bitch!! I hope that they make friends.
And ooooh, he came out to Shayla o: