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Reviewer: MinervaDr Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/13 07:42 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow,they're in love indeed...look how they talk to each other!It's nice.A good proof that romance is good even at its simplest form:)

Author's Response: Wow! thanks so much for reading! Unfortunately I never really finished this one! But I'm glad you liked it! :) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kreahy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/12 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good kelsey, but 8th paragraph from the bottom 'tracing us and down slowly...' tracing UP and down slowly... :152;

Author's Response: Damn it you! :P you made an account just to correct my stuff didnt you? :P I will fix it

Reviewer: Nena110189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/12 04:26 am Title: Chapter 1

ah so cute there fighting about how loves eachother more :)



Author's Response: awe well thank you! this was the first real fanfiction i did and i havent worked on it in forever! perhaps ill work on it a little since i'm getting reads :)

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