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Reviewer: blush Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 10:20 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

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YAY you are back
and holy fuck bill talks

Reviewer: BloodyMonday Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 01:22 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

Noo! How can you leave it there? That's just cruel! I love this fic so much.

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 08:55 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

HE TALKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 07:46 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

interesting. ooh, he talks. huh. :)

Reviewer: Dianqa2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/11 11:28 am Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

more more moreeee!! :D:D:D love it!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 11:35 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

Ahh Haa, the food was impreding his ability to speak wasn't it?? I'll bet it was. These were two amazing chapters. I was really missing this fic, and I'm so glad you are back! I can't wait to see more! Keep up the spifftaculat work!

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 10:17 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

Bill spoke. You have to keep writing. Amazing......

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 10:17 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

Bill spoke. You have to keep writing. Amazing......

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 07:43 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

Yay ur back! & o wow, Bill spoke! xDD Can't wait til u post again!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 04:56 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

This is a very interesting story. I think you should get a beta because as the daughter of an english teach, your sentence structure and use of commas make this hard to read at times. but I love the plot and i love the characters. I don't usually like 1st person either but you make it work. keep up the good work, i look forward to more!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 04:49 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

Aaaah! Bill talked! So cute, and intriguing at the same time. I really can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 04:44 pm Title: Delta 3 and the step backwards

Nooo! Poor Bill, that was mean of Tom, using the collar. But I can understand his confusion and all... gahh this story is so good!

Reviewer: tomoeandikr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 04:39 pm Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

This story its great!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 04:39 pm Title: Delta 3 and Andi

Oh they kissed! I like how needy they both are. This bond thing is quite fascinating!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 04:21 pm Title: Delta 3 and the sleep over

They are so adorable together! This story is really interesting and I enjoy every word of it =)

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 04:14 pm Title: Delta 3 and me

Aww! So adorable how protective Tom is of his Bill already =) Loving this story so far!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 04:03 pm Title: Delta 3

That's a very interesting first chapter! I really like the idea of it, it's original and I'm intrigued to read more.

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 03:15 am Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

Awww poor Bill was depressed and sad that Tom hurt him. Bill's heart was broken ;( At least in the end Tom came to his sences. I knew it though. I knew Bill could learn to speak or that they could all along. They are so cute.

Reviewer: bob Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 01:58 am Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

Wo so bill can talk?! Omg please update with ice cream and cherries on top

Reviewer: mairasm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 01:58 am Title: Delta 3 and the ... What was that?

I am really happy i started reading this and thanks for the fast update!!
Lovely work!

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