this was a nice story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

I was finally able to catch up on the last chapter, and wow. I'm really loving how you played all these different emotions off of each other, and continued to do so in this chapter. This was an amazing BDSM fic, and I hope to read more from you in the future!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. There will definitely be more to read in the future in the way of BDSM fics. I love writing them. There's just so much raw emotion.

*fills love into the review box* hey =)
I can’t decide if I want your stories to be made in a movie starring the real Tokio Hotel twins, or not. Because if there would be a movie I couldn’t enjoy your wonderful style of writing. But on the other hand a movie would be well epic.^^ We should ask them if they would be into it^^
I love Bills thoughts at the beginning! “And yet he felt his happiest at the feet of another man, his twin none the less” – so sweet. Oh, poor thing – Bill whimpering and moaning… hm – what a delicate thought.

“I thought you wanted me to get cleaner, Mr. Kaulitz. With you in here things will only get dirtier” – good point. Hihi.
“I don’t like being lied to, little one.” Arrr – Tom’s so sexy when he says stuff like that. Or that: “On your knees.” Well I could now quote practically everything he ever said.^^
Hehe. “Please, Tomi!” – “No.”
How he teases Bill – whoah… so hot…I guess Tom likes to see Bill whimpering and moaning as well^^ But let’s be honest, who wouldn’t like that?

Finally poor Billa get’s to come. He’s so cute asking: “W-w-why did you take it off?” I love how he stutters.
Hey, I have a good idea for a spin off story – and I would call it “the record” – I’d even make you a banner^^
Liked the ending, very sweet. Bill asking to stay in his collar. *sigh*
btw : I want it forever. I want your stories forever^^
Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Okay first off a movie about this. . .*faints just thinking about it* I love to make Bill whimper and moan if you haven't noticed. ;) After things like the candygasm I can just imagine. . .yum! I have a better story in the making actually. . .*insert evil laughter here* It's about Bill and Tom and they. . .well I'll tell you later. Thanks for reviewing!

Kinky yet sweet xD

Author's Response: Thank you!

Here goes:
Waking up and not finding Bill beside you is a bad feeling I can relate to that^^
Oh Bill only wearing an apron – I do like that!
Well, David Jost really sounds like an asshole – a pretty stupid one too. Bill is right. Everyone would love to work for them – with the millions of fans they have. We may be a bit crazy and pretty kinky but we are very supportive^^
Poor Bill though. I just love it when Tom is that protective. And how he says “I know you could have”, even though he things the exact opposite.
Do you care the fact that you made some really small mistakes in the German parts? If you want you could always ask me. I speak it almost like it would be my mother tongue^^ Feel free to ask for any sort of translation.
Oh, the fire alarm buzzes of… mine does that all the time – it drives me crazy^^
Oh, the sweet little Bill crying – sooo cute!
Oh I like how Bill organizes his clothes.
Hihi – I love the “watch the attitude, little one.”- part.
“Get upstairs and get undressed right now!” – how do I wish that’s something I could say to him!
Oh, Tom is sooo sweet. “Bill! They will have to pry you from my cold, dead hands. I’m never leaving you! Ever.” – so cute!
As usual I loved it and thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Yay another Teresa review! Thanks so much! We always have the same favorite lines! Please correct me on the German. I was going to ask you for help, but I didn't want to be a bother. I know Jost sounds like an asshole. I honestly didn't mean it to end up that way. I just wanted to show off the twin's relationship! Thanks for reviewing!

After a long few hours i have finally read it all.
I´ve become a slow reader i guess.
I usually don´t like anything that has to do with punishment.
And eventhough i cringe cause i can physically feel the pain when reading about said punishments.
There is something about how you wrote this that captivated me.
I may be reading between my fingers as they cover my face.
But i still keep reading.
I see the fluff as my big reward.
Reading about the twins talking and cuddling never gets old.
Anyway.. keep on with the good work.

I´m a sucky reviewer i know. LOL

Author's Response: Not sucky review at all! I'm so happy that you gave it a chance even if you don't like punishment. And you liked it! Yay! I really don't see myself as being a good fluff writer so it means a lot to me that you liked that part! I'm finishing up the next chapter now and it should be up really soon!

I must say these stories of yours never get old :D The fandom needs more of these I say

Author's Response: Aaww thank you! I'm trying to write more great stories for you guys!

New chapter equals new review =)
I realized that they forgot all about their popcorn – that would never happen to me^^
I would also punish Bill for making a comment about my taste in movies. I hate it if people don’t like films I love. Bill didn’t even give the movie a chance – that just needs to be punished^^
Loved that sentence: “Maybe you don’t understand what submission is, Billa. Apparently you haven’t figured it out yet, but you’re sure as hell going to learn.” =)
I actually also don’t like spanking that much – but when you write about it, it sounds like so much fun^^
I LOVED their definition of submission – it’s really beautiful!
Uh, kissing Bill – I do wonder what he really tastes like – I do assume like smoke though =(
Poor Billa – not being allowed to come – reminds me of myself and that stupid cystitis – it’s killing me so I can relate^^ But I do think not being allowed to come is the perfect punishment for cheating – makes totally sense.
Haha – I wonder what Tokio Hotel fans would really do if they would give a press – conference like that. I wouldn’t mind – but then again I’m one of the most tolerant people I know. So that’s no indicator.
I also like what they say about being two parts of a whole – makes perfectly sense to me^^
btw: I also put of sleep with this website. just add about 8 hours and you know how long I keep myself awake for^^
Write ya! =)

Author's Response: Yeah the popcorn thing has happened to me before! Exactly why Tom did it, silly! Oh I know! That sentence just. . .so much fun to write! I make it sound fun? Really?! I have to tell my Dom that. He'll fall over laughing. It's actually my real life definition of submission. Yeah kissing Bill would taste a bit like smoke, but I smoke too. And plus it's Bill freakin Kaulitz! I would kiss him no matter what he tasted like to be honest. Yeah the cock torture in this fic is kinda brutal, but totally deserved! I think half the fandom would be up in arms, and the other half would be singing "told you so" and drooling uncontrollably. If any of the TH members were to come out of the closet I would be kinda sad cause that's one less I can dream of having. Although I have to admit that I have a thing for gay guys. I don't know what it is! They are just so damn attractive! Curse me for not being born a guy so I can have them! *pout* The two parts of a whole was actually taken from the twins themselves. They've said they were each other's soulmates too many times to count and they always talk about being inseparable. I feel so bad for keeping you from sleep! Go seep-a-seep right now!

Gah, I wish I could leave a good review, but I have been poutting off my homework to read this xD lol PROCASTINATORS! XD good story tho :P

Author's Response: Ahaha! I do that all the time! I put of sleep with this website too! I'm exhausted, but then I find an exciting story to read. Thanks for the review now go do your homework!

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Poor Bill always gets kicked out of the bed^^
I do wonder which one is Bills tightest pair of jeans – they all are^^
Although I have to say – I wouldn’t suspect anything: Bill wearing a collar is perfectly normal^^ But it’s a cute scene anyhow.
Oh, Toms a softy at heart – so romantic^^ it’s nice that they celebrate their anniversary.
I do agree with Tom – what better way to celebrate than having a naked Bill on his knees for three days straight. That’s how I want to celebrate my birthday next year^^
I can imagine a Bill gradually sliding from his chair and moving to kneel – and it makes me all fuzzy^^
Hehe. Bill is hungry for something, but not food… well now I am too^^ but I definitely wouldn’t say no to a crème brulee right now either.
As always: thanks for writting!

Author's Response: Oh yay! I get a comment! *noms on it happily* He gets kicked out of bed cause he's notorious for sleeping at all hours of the day. He's said on many occasions that he usually starts his day at like noon. Not all of them are super tight, but I was thinking of the ones he wore when he went out shopping in LA with Natalie. (http://justjared.buzznet.com/headlines/2010/08/bill-kaulitz-barneys-new-york-shopping.jpg) Yeah and I think a collar with sapphires would look absolutely amazing on him! And I'm pretty sure he's gotten interesting stares wearing his collars in real life. Yup Tom is a softie, but only for Billa! I see something in him about like through the player persona. He plays it off totally cool and nonchalant, but I think if he was in an actual relationship he would be a complete sweetheart. I just couldn't imagine anything more beautiful than Bill naked and on his knees. *drools* That's how I want to celebrate every single day! To hell with birthdays! And as always: thank you for reviewing! And for making my beautiful banner!