Date: 08/27/15 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I see this one is old, but it popped up on random stories ;) Well...... I liked it..... No, I, uhm..... loved it. hehe. it was naughty and hot!
Date: 06/17/11 01:16 am Title: Chapter 1
that...was so not hot..
Date: 06/13/11 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1
*o* aweeeeeeeeeeeeeesome
Date: 06/06/11 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
You didn't do good. . .you did great! I loved is! This story was so hot!
Date: 06/06/11 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a bit harsh. Not much love, even if it was S&M, I was hoping for some more indication that Tom wasn't just a huge asshole. Lol. Oh, and this should definitely be labeled NC17, not R.
There was a naughty side of me that liked this though... Bill being younger, Tom punishing him, heehee. Hot.
Date: 06/06/11 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, since I read this while thinking in a British accent it wasnt so sexy as funny to me... Though I will give you credit for dirty talk and spanking!;)
Date: 06/06/11 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was so fucking hot!!!
Date: 06/06/11 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
only one word can describe this...HOT HOT HOT! *-* i loved it *-*
Date: 06/06/11 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG! I'm such a pervert u_u
that was so hot!
good job!
oh my dirty mind! xD