Date: 05/03/11 02:23 pm Title: Anger
Sorry, I pushed the wrong button.
So, Adam doesnt even know what he gets himself in, and nobody bothers to tell him (how can they??). Seeing as you started, I dont see too much of the action involving him in the future, but this is up to you.
For the moment, I think Bill is paying too much for just one mistake, this wouldnt of happened if Tom would have his one night stand!!!!
Well, Im kinda preocupied....
Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Ahh wrong buttons the bane of our existence. Thank you for your review(s). Right now Adam I know hasn't shown up much in the chapters but I think that might change for a little bit. And I know that things are kinda really angsty for Bill's mistake, but for me this is realistic. He feels completely awful about giving his virginity to someone else while drunk when Tom himself actually stayed faithful. I hope that made sense. There will be another update fairly soon. I won't be taking a week and a half to get the next update out like this one. I swear, my muses take the longest coffee break. I hope you stick around to find out what happens :D
Date: 05/03/11 02:12 pm Title: Anger
Damn, I cant stop thinking about the whole development.
You wrote very well the way the way Tom and then Bill are tormented by the events, and then Adam is just showing up only ... do the deed and to get the punch in the face.
For such a great love, Bill proves to be a bit too shy to open up (also literally) to Tom and Tom is too much in a hurry to go out and find someone else. One would say he is gonna wait for Bill.
On the other hand, this is completely understandable and human, to just go grab someone else.
As for Bill, he is of course hurt by Toms betrayal and he doesnt know the actual betrayal doesnt happen.
So here comes Adam who wants Bill but doesnt know him
I can
Date: 05/03/11 01:29 am Title: Coinky Dink (for Amy)
Well, if Tom is even thinking to go back to Bill, then I can forgive you for the whole situation ... *big grin*
Lets first see where this leads.
And for the punch in the face, as much as I like Adam Lambert, it gave me such satisfaction!!!!
Cant wait to see how you are going to develop this, its getting better.
Author's Response: *Giggles* all will be revealed in due time my dear. Just stick around if you will *clings* please?... erm *cough* haha I'm glad that this update was enjoyable. Everyone seems to love Adam's pain, love or hate him haha. I personally love Adam, but yeah I admit, the thought of Tom getting pissed and jealous, oooh yeah lol. Thank you for the review!
Date: 05/02/11 08:14 pm Title: Coinky Dink (for Amy)
ahhhhhh Tom you douche! That was a bit of a silly thing to do! pfft. angry cornrowed boy. grr. :P
I feel sorry for Bill. He should have kept his pee-pee in his pants though! :P
Awesome update as usual. thank youuuuu.
Author's Response: BWAHAHAHAH! lol well Tom is rather silly, wouldn't you agree? And well, technically Bill did keep his pee-pee in his pants he should have kept his legs together (geez i cant believe i said that). Thank you for the review I'm glad you thought it was awesome :D
Date: 05/02/11 07:07 am Title: Coinky Dink (for Amy)
ROFL. I couldn't stop laughing. Tom is so bad XD
Author's Response: XD I'm glad that this is entertaining for you. Thank you for the review.
Date: 05/02/11 04:11 am Title: Coinky Dink (for Amy)
Thanks for the update! I'm glad Tom punched Adam, because if he is that angry it means he still cares. =)
Author's Response: hmmm well you do have a point there *continues to stuff Adam's nose with tissues* Poor fella doesn't even know what's going on lol' Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 05/02/11 12:54 am Title: Coinky Dink (for Amy)
omg jealousy tomi....... they need to work this out
Author's Response: *nod nod* they really do. but I'm not entirely sure when that's going to come about.
Date: 05/01/11 10:59 pm Title: Coinky Dink (for Amy)
Can I just say? I really do feel sorry for Bill and I feel sorry for Adam, too, but they still brought this upon themselves and whether or not Tom should have punched him is irrelevant because I still enjoyed it far, far too much. :B
Great chapter, Heidi, I can't WAIT to see what happens!
Oh, and Bin Laden's dead. >.> WILD. xD
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much twinny. I'll have to get on writing the next chapter very VERY soon me thinks. But I want to point out Adam didn't bring this upon himself. Adam doesn't know the twins are together and doesn't know the trouble his and Bill's little midnight romp has caused. So the punch to his face really was out of the blue. Juuust saying lol. Haha I know you enjoyed that punch to the nose a little too much ,and that's alright because I knew you would. I must get started on the next update soon XD and btw, I know Bin Laden's dead, I told you that silly twinny!
Date: 05/01/11 09:45 pm Title: Coinky Dink (for Amy)
Tom came out of no where! Lol! Poor Adam....kinda. Im glad you updated!
Author's Response: curious and jealous and angry Tom, gotta love him. LOL poor Adam gets no sympathy.. glad you enjoyed the update.
Date: 05/01/11 09:01 pm Title: Coinky Dink (for Amy)
I'll leave a proper review when I get back from the store, but FUCK YEAH TOM!!!
Author's Response: bwahahahah! how did I know you were going to say that? *giggles* Thank twinny. cant wait till you do another review XD
Date: 04/23/11 03:11 am Title: Sleeping (Without You)
Poor boys, so miserable w/o each other. Thanks for the update, I hope your dad is okay.
Author's Response: I know right :( thank you so much for the review. another update should be up soon as possible. And thank you, he's home now and raising hell like usual. so it should be safe to say he's alright haha.
Date: 04/19/11 09:17 pm Title: Sleeping (Without You)
Argh! I totally meant to write more than that but my computer was an asshole and only posted some of it! :(
What I meant to say was, Wahey! thank you for the update. Tom is a douchebag and should have turned around and given Bill a big smooch! Silly boy! Think he's got those cornrows too tight!
& I hope your dad is okay! & I feel your pain with Job hunting! It's a pain in the ass.
Author's Response: haha thats alright, I was wondering if you'd meant to post more. You're welcome, and thank YOU for the review. Hmm, maybe he does have his braids a bit too tight. It's a possibility. And thanks, I'm not sure how bad things are atm but he IS on the phone with my mom right now. Boo freaking job hunting. Can't I just stay home and write fanfiction the rest of my life? :D
Date: 04/19/11 07:48 pm Title: Sleeping (Without You)
Wahey! Update!
Author's Response: *pet pet* patience dear. There will be another update soon. I'm going to write on it here in a few minutes. thanks for following along! :D
Date: 04/19/11 05:19 pm Title: Sleeping (Without You)
I'm sorry to hear about your father. I hope he is ok, and as much as we love to read, your personal life comes first.
Author's Response: Thank you. Right now all me and my mother know is that he's still in the Emergency Room. We probably won't know anything until he's transfered to a room. So to keep my mind off of everything I'll most likely write.
Date: 04/19/11 03:35 pm Title: Please (No Excuses)
Hey, I didnīt think I would like it but here I am. But not because of Adam Lambert, I never liked him.
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you for giving it a try. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Though, I have to say I love Adam. I've loved him since his Idol days lol. But don't let that stop you from reading! Thank you for the review :D
Date: 04/18/11 01:05 am Title: Innocence Lost, Regrets Gained
uh oh...god bill!! ;_;
Author's Response: *pet pet* i know... i would say it gets better, but better doesn't happen for a little while.... thank you for the review!
Date: 04/17/11 11:44 pm Title: Please (No Excuses)
I reallyyyyyyy don't like not being able to choose sides. XD I want to smack Tom for being a douche, and I want to smack Bill for bringing this upon himself, and then I wanna smack Tom again for causing Bill to bring this upon himself. And now I want to smack Bill again for bringing this upon himself. And I'm sure in there somewhere, I'd smack Adam too. >.>
Author's Response: HAHA! well you can't really blame Adam too much. All he did was get equally drunk with Bill. He didn't know that Bill was taken haha. But yes I know. I love how you can't really choose sides yet *cackles maniacally* thanks for the review (and beta!) twinny!
Date: 04/17/11 04:17 pm Title: And the Thunder Rolls
oh, God, I have tears in my eyes and my stomach hurts! How shocking and yet human!
It is a little too dramatic for my taste, but you write it very well, I cannot take my eyes from the page...
Author's Response: *hugs tight* oh don't cry sweetie! Thank you so much for sticking around to read this. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I know it's a little rough right now, and kinda really depressing but there will be happier moments *snuggles* just try and be a trooper until then.
Date: 04/17/11 08:47 am Title: Innocence Lost, Regrets Gained
Oh, so cruel and unnecessary!!! As much as I like Adam Lambert, it doesnt beat my love for the twins. Thank god it is just a fiction...
Well done!
Author's Response: haha you're actually not the first person to say that. Hope you stick around to see what happens on this little adventure ^___^ thank you for the review!
Date: 04/16/11 11:34 pm Title: Please (No Excuses)
Haha! OR another game plan; I smack Tom and snuggle with him and you snuggle with Bill therefore they won't be thinking about each other therefore problem solved! Huzzah!
Also. Update? Pretty please? I'll love you forever!
Author's Response: hehe, I like the way you think *nod nod nod* As long as I can snuggle with Bill I'm all good. Muhahaa. And of course I'll update soon. I was actually telling AmyJean76 that was about to start working on ch.8. Yay for random inspiration! :D