Date: 06/28/11 06:37 pm Title: Back Again
Yay!!! You updated again. I loved it. This was a really good chapter the end become suspensefuli thought for sure that they lost Mihn I would have been do sad. They came with the idea of getting themselves and everyone else sick by injection I was like"whoa omg!! That's so weird" lol. I can't wait to find out what will happen next and how they all can get back in time. Please keep up your superb writing and update real soon!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I haven't decided if I'm going to let Minh live.... hmmm we'll have to see... ;)rn
Date: 06/02/11 06:15 pm Title: Náufrago (Castaway)
I loved it! It was really good. It did make sense a little but I can't wait to find out what will happen next. This is starting to get really good. Oh man that sucks! How does something like that happen? ha.ha.ha Please keep up your delightfully astounding writing and update real soon!!! :D
Author's Response: lol i dunno... shit happens i suppose. im in summer school right now (i rarely pay attention so ive been handwritting alot to play off notetaking lately) but by the end of the week i should have the next chapter up and running :-)
Date: 05/27/11 03:14 pm Title: Náufrago (Castaway)
I LOVED IT!!! It was really great. I loved how Hellion pushed Georg into the water ha.ha.ha Oh I wonder what Jorge has to say about Tom and Bill's dad? Please keep up your stupends writing and update real soon! Your screen is falling? what does that mean lol
Author's Response: haha yeah my laptop screen is falling off its hinges :s im hoping i can get through the story before it falls clean off! lol
Date: 05/16/11 08:49 pm Title: Luck
YAY! I'm so happy that you're back and as well as your computer lol I've been wondering when you would update again.
I can't believe that Hellion's part in leaving the ship was so seduce and have sex with the captin I would have punched Tom in the face too xD lol I hope Bullet it okay and will live, it would so suck ass if she died :( Anyway please keep up your fantastic and marvellous gamer inspired writing and update real soon!! ^x^
Author's Response: lol i'm trying to get as much done as i can before it breaks on me again (screen's falling off). thanks for the review hun!
Date: 04/10/11 05:54 pm Title: Revelation
Goose, Billow, Gigi, and Asshole xD Well I'm a real bitch aren't I?
Awsome update!! i think the beeping nosie is coming from a time bomb >.>
Author's Response: no you're not a bitch... i prefer the term 'eclectic' haha!rnrnhmm it could be a time bomb.... do they have time tho? hmmm.
Date: 03/27/11 09:26 pm Title: Back to Life
Ooh crap zombies!! What if angel is one? And do the ones that come in contact with them like the way Tom did, do they get infected?
Author's Response: hm... is she? do they? i'll never tell! lol
Date: 03/26/11 07:22 pm Title: Back to Life
lol The weird thing about Bullet is that she and I act the same!! xD "You still get to watch those naked people." I died right there.
Author's Response: haha! i did too. i was thinking of ed again. i'm weird like that. ;)
Date: 03/26/11 06:11 pm Title: Back to Life
I rather read this then actually play video games that are like this haha its great imagination ha.ha.ha.ha. Awe I hope Tom is okay and I so badly want to read the next chapter to find out what happends to Angel!! AAHHH UGH! cliffhanger xD. Please keep up your wonderful writing and update real soon!! :)
Author's Response: lol i had been playung left 4 dead with a buddy of mine and was like 'omg this would be awesome if i...' and it kinda went from there haha!
Date: 03/15/11 08:42 pm Title: Packages
I loved it! Especially the new character..I like her already but boy I tell ya I wouldn't have been able to guess that new character. And I can't wait for that super duper sexytime xxxploit now you got me all curious eep!!*winks* *smirks back* keep up the writing and this keeps getting AWESOMER and update real soon! :)
Author's Response: oh the curiosity will ensue for a few more chappies.... but i think it'll be kinky enough to satisfy :)
Date: 03/15/11 05:45 pm Title: Packages
lol Thanks so much leibe!! :*
P.S. I love Ed!!! You are amazing!!
Author's Response: *^_^* i was going to introduce this character after the first time u had asked i just didn't know how to introduce her... ;) glad u like!
Date: 03/14/11 07:48 am Title: Waiting
Hopefully Angel will be fine :( and poor Minh they always beat him up :( it didn't seem like his fault. Bill needs to receive the money quickly to fix angel. And it's kinda sad also any of them can die any time. It's like you can't get to emotionally attached in fear of losing the other :( I wouldn't be able to live in a world like that so much pain and hurt.
Anyway this was a great update, your writing is very descriptive, update soon!
Author's Response: what's really sad is that there are actual people that live that way some where in the world... Minh will pull through though... he's a trooper ;) thanks for reviewing me!
Date: 03/13/11 10:55 pm Title: Waiting
It was a nice shot though lol. Oh LA LA some Georg and Hellion sexy time ha ha. Oh no I really do hope Angel will be okay poor Hellion :(.
I know Bill try hard to save Angel. I loved it a really great chapter. Please keep up the great writing and update real soon. Its getting good! :D
Author's Response: yay sexy time! lol. i have a super duper sexy time xxxploit saved up. u'll know it when u see it (insert sneaky smirk) :)
Date: 03/13/11 10:42 pm Title: Waiting
I'm gonna kill that bitch/bastard who tried to kill Angel!!
BTW Love the update :)
Author's Response: :D thanks!
Date: 03/04/11 04:25 pm Title: Transmission
Awww how cute!! I want parents like Jorg and Simone xD
Sorry if I'm bugging you, but can I still be a character?
Author's Response: *shrug* ;)
Date: 03/04/11 03:51 pm Title: Transmission
It was a great chapter even if it was short. That call was a bit surprising but not much lol. I really do feel bad for Tom and Elize not being able to get pregnant :(
Anyway keep up the excellent writing and update real soon :)
Author's Response: yeah i didn't think it'd be that surprising, but i gave it a shot. lol thanx a milli!
Date: 03/04/11 02:51 pm Title: Transmission
Oh shit so this bushido dude is some bad ass motherfucker huh? Well let's hope everything turns out ok. And I lol'd Tom keeps shooting blanks can't even knock the girl up XD. I hope Bill is doing ok. Jorg seems kool.
Author's Response: bills alright... tom probably is full of blanks (or is he?) and yes bushido is bad ass... :)
Date: 03/01/11 03:00 am Title: Relocated
Wonder who the call is from hmm and u don't like the idea of the others venturing out alone its a bad idea splitting up.
Author's Response: i love the idea of splitting them up! it makes it so suspenseful! haha!
Date: 03/01/11 02:54 am Title: Discoveries and Miracles
Omg what happened for a moment there I thought the dead body was going to rise and eat them like a zombie sorta like resident evil lol
Author's Response: maybe i need to watch resident evil... a lot of people are saying that too! haha!
Date: 03/01/11 02:47 am Title: One More
I hope Minh really is there to help then hmm I'm suspicious.
Author's Response: hm.... is he? we'll see... *insert evil laugh* :)
Date: 03/01/11 02:40 am Title: Lights On, Lights Off
Uh oh! Shit just got real, this virus thing is really starting to scare me.
Author's Response: aw snap! realisticness! lol