Date: 05/01/23 12:39 am Title: "I want you to break his heart"
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 11/24/17 09:12 pm Title: Epilogue
this was a really good story!
but sad to!
you should do a sequel to this!
Date: 07/27/12 04:23 pm Title: Epilogue
did she actually die...?
Date: 01/11/12 03:47 pm Title: Epilogue
OH MY .. WAIT FOR IT .... GOD! THIS IS LIKE ... OMG, I CAN'T EVEN DESCRIBE IT. I LOVE THIS FIC SO DAMN MUCH THO, GOOD FUCKING JOB!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 10/25/11 12:49 pm Title: "I want you to break his heart"
This story was so beautiful! It was sad,it was funny and it was a great love story. To me this shows that the concept doesn't have to be incredibly original to make a great story... I actually felt sorry for Lydia. She might have been a bitch, but in the end her heart got broken too and she obviously couldn't cope with that, which is incredibly sad.
Anyway, you did a great job !
Date: 08/12/11 08:42 pm Title: "TO- AHHH"
Oh my god! I fucking lov your chapter end note lol
Author's Response: lol XD
Date: 06/20/11 05:07 pm Title: Epilogue
Omg, seriously. I just read this entire story when I should have been repeating my geography! Damnit, this has been the most beautiful 2 hours of today :-D
I love this story b29;
Author's Response: Ahw thank you n_n hope you're still gonna do geography well though, I don't know what exactly you're repeating it for but good luck!
Date: 06/19/11 05:51 am Title: "I want you to break his heart"
Q~Q s-sequel pwease? cuz oh my glob...awesooome. but now i has a scared.
Author's Response: Aww don't be scared, it ends the way you want it to cause I left the outcome for you to decide. Will she die? Or will she survive and Tom eventually forgive her? I think the last...
Date: 06/13/11 10:56 am Title: "I want you to break his heart"
Both .__.
Date: 06/13/11 10:56 am Title: "I want you to break his heart"
Both .__.
Date: 06/12/11 12:40 pm Title: Epilogue
this Lydia was beyond stupid - to kill herself (or to try to do it) just to make a problem to someone? how can anyone be so shallow .... Bill was not much better, same stupid and mindless being concentrated mostly on himself, even using his mother sickness to explain his own shallowness. I liked Tom the most, beside being too emotional and girly he had some personality :) very good written, just pity that characters were so annoying!
Author's Response: What happened to Lydia is actually a true story... well, not her entire story is of course, but a friend of mine read about someone who killed herself because of a man and wrote 'my boyfriend is a murderer' on the mirror with lipstick. Well anyway she was meant to be annoying :') I'm still in doubt about Bill, meaning, I don't really know what to make of him myself. Glad you think it's well written though n_n
Date: 06/12/11 12:22 pm Title: "You're not a bitch."
falling in love and falling out of love seems so easy for Bill, really, depends on his mood it seems.
Author's Response: Hm... In the beginning, he really was in love with Lydia, and it didn't end suddenly, only very slowly. He slowly fell in love with Tom when he got to know him better, but tried not to show, especially not when Lydia and Bill broke his heart with that kiss. I think it's rather admitting being in love -or not- that is Bill's problem.
Date: 06/12/11 12:07 pm Title: "You used me"
this "Lydia" looks so cheap, with all this tan @@ and what about her icy blue eyes?
Author's Response: Yeah the eyes, I know. I can't help it, the model didn't have icy blue eyes but the rest of her seemed to fit so well C:
Date: 06/12/11 12:00 pm Title: "He's just ill"
is it strange that I don't feel sorry for Bill at all?
Author's Response: At this point, I don't really think it is. I didn't even feel sorry for Bill myself :')
Date: 06/12/11 11:54 am Title: "TO- AHHH"
Tom is such a girl!
Author's Response: Yeah he kinda is XD
Author's Response: Yeah he kinda is XD
Date: 06/12/11 11:37 am Title: "You really love her"
still, sick mother isn't an excuse for not using brain and acting rude and vulgar toward others @@
Author's Response: It isn't... I'm not sure if he uses that as an excuse though, he's just a jerk helping Lydia get revenge because... Well because he's an egocentric idiot?:')
Date: 06/12/11 09:06 am Title: "You're a bitch"
uhh, both Bill and Lydia are sooo brainless, suite to each other perfectly! hope that Tom can see a bit more that physical appearance and will realise that Bill isn't worth his interest.
Author's Response: They do right? Or it seems so, anyway... Tom's stupid to fall for someone like that, but then, you can't choose who you fall in love with...
Date: 06/11/11 06:41 am Title: Epilogue
Okay, curiosity satisfied but damn girl, a little heads up would have been nice XD
I finally managed to sit myself down long enough to finish reading and I actually found myself tearing up a few chapters back which isn't that hard but with people in the room I do try to keep that to a minimum :') You've done an amazing job with this story, it keeps you on your toes and wanting more...
Yes even now that it's finished, but ending it here seems perfect *nods*
And now I'm going to try and do something that others would deem useful... :')
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much ^.^ I wanted to end it here and not make this another chapter and make another epilogue because, well, stories that have a happy ending often get forgotten sooner lol. Hope it worked *g*
Date: 06/10/11 06:30 pm Title: Epilogue
WTF?! Weird end. xD No, itīs a good story, I like it. Their relationship was fast, but it seems right like this.
Oh, and I like phrase "fall out of love". In my mother language we donīt have something like this.
Does it have a sequel? This end looks like it.
Author's Response: Thanks ^.^ Yeah it was fast, but it was a revenge, and they were doing it for the wrong reasons... In the beginning at least. We don't have phrases like falling out of lovein my native language either, so maybe that's the reason why it sounds weird to me XD