Date: 01/04/12 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow :o That's amazing, totally one of the best short stories ever! I love the plot and the way you write, it's perfect. Very sad, though :c I love it anyways!
Date: 06/28/11 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story was truly brilliant. It should have probably disturbed me, at least a little, but it didn't, not one bit. I found it quite fascinating and the emotions sweeping over me as the story progressed were changing like seasons. You built it really nicely and I was amazed how "normal" Bill's state of mind and his overall condition seemed to me. Sorrow and heart break can sometimes break you for real indeed.
A plot like this could have easily turned into something overly dramatic, kitchy and cliche, something written with a single purpose to shock, scandalize and disgust. Your writing skills turned it instead into something incredibly beautiful and very, very interesting. Great work!
The only thing that puzzled me somehow was how on earth could Bill dig Tom out from his grave by using only his hands and then the title of the story... other than that I loved your story very much and it goes straight to my favorites.
Date: 05/21/11 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was a very powerful and sad story about love. In this case - the love beyond the grave (Czech phrases). I'm crying. Perfect work. J. :o)
Date: 05/21/11 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh... So much sadness. So utterluy sad and heartbreaking fic. I don't know, I should feel disturbed sinmce this was disturbing fic, but mostly IO just feel wordless sadness. In a way, I think I can understand. Somehow I can... oor babies... :(
I never before managed to read this, but I'm happy that I ffinally could. I feel sad and wordless right now, but I want to thank you for writing this heartbreaking story of the love that not even death could kill.
Date: 05/17/11 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Everything about this story was so vivid and descriptive. I'm really curious as to what the picture was that you saw that inspired this, and which images came from your own mind. Your writing is really one of a kind.
Author's Response: I totally thought I responded to this! The picture was the one I used for the banner (before the nails were manipped of course)
Date: 05/15/11 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh..wow.
Thank you, Raiju, for yet another compelling, cliff-hanger of an ending. I truly love how you do this. You never take the safe, happy, sunshiny route; you drag us through the mud and gore and leave me, at least, satiated.
Date: 05/15/11 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is very well written you know that. But damn this was a damn sad story. I hope no one has to go through this EVER!
Date: 05/15/11 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
what a way to end the story.....this was sooooo damned creepy!!!! it was so creepy, but goodness, i love it. i love how even though the entire scene of Bill in Tom's grave was so creepy and horrible, i still get that sense of closure with him, like he finally has his twin with him forever, despite his physical form. you made it seem like such a strong love story even though it's really hard to read. amazing how you pulled this off.
Date: 05/15/11 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
I absolutely love your stories and adore your style! :)
Date: 05/15/11 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
PS: I just realized that the ending reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe or Lovecraft. Heh, that sort of disturbing.
Date: 05/15/11 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oho.. >.< This gave such a sick feeling. This was so excellently and wrenchingly written, but I think I need to get my mind off. I hope that's what you were going for.
Date: 05/08/11 01:54 am Title: Chapter 3
You...yes, you! FINISH THIS..ITS GONNA DRIVE ME INSANE. INSANE-ER** Mwahahahaha *falls asleep*
Date: 05/08/11 01:44 am Title: Chapter 2
no necrophilia...heeheeeheeeeeee.. IM SUCH A CREEPER I'm SORRY! I was looking for something to fit my creeper ways today and this seems to be doing the trick
Date: 02/23/11 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
This deserves more than one review on this chap, so I'll go ahead and do one.
My gosh. All this pain :(
What's interesting is I had thought this was a oneshot when the first chapter went up.
Date: 02/23/11 10:06 am Title: Chapter 3
That must have been rather awkward when the police pulled the two apart and found that they were naked 0_o poor Bill
Date: 02/20/11 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Didn't know you updated this...poor Bill :'( *dabs at eyes*
Date: 01/28/11 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. This fic is giving you an emotional break from King of Kingz?
Twisted, Raiju, twisted.
Just the way I like it!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 01/27/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
ooh! double thumbs up! bam! that was good for me too! *sigh*
Date: 01/26/11 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
O.O
this is....something else entirely.
Date: 01/26/11 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just want to scream at him to give Tom CPR, breath for him, do something!