Date: 12/23/10 05:23 am Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
:O this story doesnt suck!! please finish it and mayb u should make tom quit and start their own life farr awayy =P
“A happy story,” he promised quietly
HAPPY ENDING PLZZZ! sad ending suxss
and omg ur writing skillz r just awsome this tom is so loving and caring
Author's Response:
:) Naw, thankyou! oh, good idea! :D
LOL, well, i'll let you in on a little secret: i most likely, 99.99% will end this happily, BUT i promise i'll definitelty finish it :)
But, between now and the ending of this story, there's most likely going to be drama, conflict, and sadness before there's the happy ending.... i guess that's just how i write :\
THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING!!
OH THANKS! i honestly doubt my writing skills sometimes, so your kind words are extremely appreciated!
Yeah, he is pretty caring and loving O.o i was wondering, do you think it might be too OOC?
Oh, i'm about to update :)
Date: 12/22/10 11:25 pm Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
OMG NO I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE :()
Author's Response:
Oh, don't worry! I was just saying i lost motivation for a while, but so many have reviewed this chapter, and my motivation's back. I would have never not finished it though, cause i know some of youse actually love this story. :D So thankyou for worrying about the story! X) And thankyou for reviewing in my time of desperately needed motivation :)
I'm about to update now :)
Date: 12/22/10 10:42 pm Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Naw thankyou! I'll try my best to give youse a happy ending :)
Thanks for reviewing!
I'm about to update :)
Date: 12/17/10 09:03 pm Title: 24th - 28th July, 1941
so major character is it tom? and i loveee this fic! its so sad and cute at the same time XD
Author's Response:
Tbh, i'm not even sure myself lol, i'm still contemplating whether this story will end with their death, or their freedom(sad ending or happy ending?), so idk....I haven't finished writing the story yet, but what i'm up to-- in writing it-- he's still alive....I just put the major charcter death there incase other readers consider characters other than Tom and Mila to be main characters, and incase those other charatcers die in the sotry.,,,does that answer your question? lol, sorry, I didn't explain that very well :]
Oh, thank you! I'm really happy that you're so fond of it :) And I really appreciate it that you reviewed... that means so much to me :)
Oh, I just updated.
Date: 12/14/10 07:40 am Title: July 23rd, 1941
Haha I'm not sure if I should keep expressing my love for this story or just continue on with our little paragraph conversations(: I'm excited for the climax, seriously, I love reading this story and how their together after their duties in the war are done for the day because the hope they hold for each other is heart warming :D shit. I'm really getting attached here heh. But this story is so worth the wait, the short chapters, and the long ones, so its whatever;) And yeah, I hate science...I have the biggest crush on my teacher coz he's really hot and listens to Metallica and AC/DC, I dunno why that's a turn on..but it is and it freaks my friends out haha but I don't care, he's awesome. I just loath the subject he teaches. It's evil, I swear. But! I have to pass and get credits to graduate and blah blah blah. Just two more years of this bs and then it's college :P weee! But I keep forgetting to ask you this, even though it might've been mentioned in the story somewhere, how old is Mila? Tom is his original age...I think haha I know when he was listing his girlfriends he was saying ages, but it kinda slipped my mind. And now I'm rambling and writing you my own short story haha sorry. Can't wait till the next chapter though, till then! (:
Author's Response:
Hahaha, both is good X)
Lol, Well i'm extremely glad you're getting attached, because i've come to love waiting for your thoughts on each chapter :) lol, and I appreciate that you've taken the time to review every single chapter :) Thank you, love.
OMG LOL, my old science teacher (i dont' do it anymore) was extremely hot too! haha, he looked like Craig David, and his ass, OMG! his ass is perfect lol.
Oh your science teacher has great music taste x]
What other subjects do you do?
Oh I have one more year left, and then it's university :) We're pretty close when it comes to schooling XD
LOL, Mila is 17, erm, I think I made Tom 23 in this story... haha, LOL, you can ramble all you want lol
I just updated :)
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Date: 12/13/10 08:24 am Title: July 17th, 1941
im loving the story its so welll written, seriously your a fantastic writter, i found this story yesterday and i got to say you have me hooked :) keep it up lovly, i hope you get more reveiws too cause you deffs deserve it :)
Author's Response:
OH THANK YOU! lol, i do try to write well :)
haha, more reviews would be nice, lol, but tbh, as long as the readers enjoy it i'm happy :]
I hope you continue to like it, i just updated.
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Date: 12/13/10 06:28 am Title: July 23rd, 1941
i'm lovin it. it's so emotional and it makes me feel like the war still exists and somewhere in Russia this love story actually takes place. Your writing style is amazing...keep doing a good job!:*
Author's Response:
:) Naw, that's sweet of you to say.... Tehe, thank you! I will :)
Oh, i just updated.
Date: 12/10/10 08:38 am Title: July 22nd, 1941
Eeek. I loved this! I'm reading it in world civilization while I'm supposed to be watching a movie and your little explination of the MCD made me more at ease coz I was hesitant to stop reading cooozzz...I'm a big baby and the last story I read on here that was depressing made me sad for days but I get what you mean about the story and I'm gonna have to suck it up and wing it with this one and hope for te best xD and yes, do tell me what you got on your test, I hope you did well (: I just took a Earth science test yesterday and I'm pretty sure that was the epic fail of the century haha anyway! Take care and I can't wait for the next chapter! Till then :D
Author's Response:
XD Hahaha, i guess the movie was kinda boring if you didn't pay much attention to it and chose instead to read my story LOL
:\ Awe, that sucks that you feel you get sentimental quite easily, but at least you put so much devotion into a story, so that's the good thing about it :) dw, i get quite sentimental when reading stories too, and they also interfer with how i feel, hence, being a little dpressed for days, haha.
but yeah, winging it sounds good XD
Oh, i hope you did well on your earth science test (lol, i've never been quite the science gal, which sucks, cause i actually kinda like science)
Speaking of the next chap, i'mabout to upload :) i hope you like it, it's kinda short, but i'll let you in on a lil secret: it's leading up to another small climax :P
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Date: 12/07/10 06:32 pm Title: July 17th, 1941
ahhhh! i knew it'd be good! well amazing! :D i saw it and i knew i had to read it! :D i love anything/everything you write :D simply amazing! i always love how you always make the characters seem so real! and i also love your choice of words/imagery... so yeah, bascially i LOVE it! :D x
Author's Response:
Nawh! Yay! I thought that you might read it; i'm really glad you did :) and i'm extremely glad you like it.
Yeah, i think the hardest part about creating characters is making them seem real and not Mary-Sue-like or clighe, so i'm happy you think them 'real' XD
Thank you Laura for reading and reviewing :)
(Erm, I'm just about to update)
P.S. I don't know if you just haven't had time, believ me i understand that problem, but i did reply to your email :) I'm just making sure it wasn't marked as spam, b/c i know you've been having problems with your email accounts.... so yeah. lol, id did reply XD haha
OH! and i watched Atonement, and absolutely loved it! It was such a heartbreaking, yet beautifully breathtaking sotry! So sad i actually cried.... and usually i don't really like Keira Knightly, but i actually kinda respect ehr as an actress now, she's quite talented and i loved her, and the main guy character in the movie...... It's like one of my favs now XD
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Date: 12/05/10 02:13 pm Title: July 21st, 1941
so my review got cut off. o: I basically said I love the story (like always) and I thanked for the update annd, good luck on your test and..I said-'I hope Mila and Tom don't die' and then I saw the major character death and I was like....fuck. :P haha..yeah.
Author's Response:
oh, hahaha, i hate it when that happens :\
:) Well thank you, i honestly am extremely happy that you seem to love every chapter :)
Haha, yeah, that test was such a fail -.- lol, nah, i honestly think i did alright.... lol, i'll tell youse all my marks when i get them back XD Thanks for wishing me luck!
Hahaha, erm, the major character death, i put that there purely just in case.... see, i've written most of the story, but i haven't finished it entirely, so i don't know at what event in the story it will finish, if you get me.... :\ But plus, it's there just in case people consider certain characters other than Mila and Tom to be 'major characters'.
But, yeah, thanks for reviewing :D I'm about to update in a second :) x
Date: 12/05/10 02:10 pm Title: July 21st, 1941
ooh, I almost cried just then. ): I .>
Author's Response:
oh, sorry, that wasn't my intention.... at least you held back from letting them escape ;)
Date: 12/05/10 05:56 am Title: July 21st, 1941
It seems like what ever words come out of our fingertips leave me in awe. Ever story of your that I have read has ended up being one of my favorites. I really love this one and honestly I can't give you a concrete reason why because my favorite thing changes so frequently. Overall though I think I just love the concept of a Nazi soldier falling in love with someone he is supposed to be killing. It makes the hopeless romantic in me go double D'awwwww. I really love the addition of Bill's story to this chapter and No he isnt OOC, I think you did a wonderful job of molding our favorite German singer into the Era and situation. Thanks you for writing these amazing stories... and Good luck on your Modern History Test :D
Author's Response:
Oh, thank God you like it! haha, i was wondering, oh geez, i'm chaps in, what if she's read it and hated it LOL but thankfully, the concept of a Nazi falling for the enemy has captured your interest :D
awe, thanks, i;m glad his story worked out :)
Haha, I think i did alright with the test, i think...... ;)
Thanks for reading/reviewing :D
(erm, i just updated)
Date: 12/03/10 09:05 am Title: July 20th, 1941
oh, i like it...unspoken love is amazing. please post the next chapter really soon, although everything's been good from now, I'm afraid something wrong will happen to her...
Author's Response:
:) Agreed, unspken love's the best, hmm, i think it's the secrecy.
XD I just updated.
Oh, i don't want to give anything away! but i understand your worry, lol, i hate reading a story and feeling that worry for a character.... but i guess what happens next is a secret ;) you'll have to wait and see.... plus, our definitions of 'wrong' could differ entirely :\
Date: 12/03/10 08:25 am Title: July 20th, 1941
Asdfghjkl;
So as you know, I'm devoted to this story. Committed and in love xD its wonderful, jsyk(:
Author's Response:
(^_^) Naw, that's awesome... i love the feeling of commitment to a story, so i'm ecstatic that you feel such positive feelings for one of my stories.... :D
I just updated :)
Date: 12/03/10 04:30 am Title: July 20th, 1941
YOU UPDATE FAST COMPARED TO THE OTHERS. THANK YOUU.
Author's Response:
LOL, I just updated again.... haha, i'm takign it it's a good thing? haha,you're welcome!
and thank u for reading/reviewing
Date: 11/28/10 04:29 pm Title: July 19th, 1941
I think this story is fantastic. I love both Mila and Tom in the story.They are so sweet.
Why does Tom care so much about Mila? He treat her like his family.
Author's Response:
Awe, thanks, i'm glad you like the story and characters :)
haha, well, I think it's just the strong connection he feels towards her O.o
XD I'm about to upload the next chapter. :)
THANK YOU FOR READING AND REVIEWING
Date: 11/28/10 10:35 am Title: July 19th, 1941
Weeeeeeee. :D love'd it, of course. You put a lot of thought into this story and it shows. Good job (:
Author's Response:
(^_^) I'm glad you loved it! Yes! I put heaps of thought and time into it, lol, i'm happy it seems to be paying off! :)
I'm about to upload a new chap :)
...OH! thank you for reviewing! n.n
Date: 11/28/10 08:19 am Title: July 17th, 1941
well...here's a new reader, though i'd call myself addicted to this story because it is so...amazing. I like the fact that you took your time in finding the correct information, and you didn't made things up, well..except of their love story, but hey, who knows that a long time ago smth like this didn't happen?:) anyway, i like the way you write and the plot is fantastic(and original, which i appreciate). Keep doing a great job! I enjoy every chapter of this story!:)
Author's Response:
Naw, THANK YOU!! Yeah, reserchign was fun.... took long, but I, as you said, didn't want to make anything up.... haha, except the love story :) But, yeah, Lol, maybe something like this DID happen?
Oh, thank you so much fro takign the time to read and review with immensely inspriring words XD I definitely appreciate it a lot! :D
Erm, i'm about to upload another chap :)
Date: 11/28/10 05:56 am Title: July 19th, 1941
Omg, I love this story/plot. So nice
Author's Response:
OH, thanks for the review XD
erm, i'm about to upload another chapter :)
Author's Response:
OH, thanks for the review XD
erm, i'm about to upload another chapter :)
Date: 11/25/10 01:36 pm Title: July 17th, 1941
Oh. don't worry about the doubting stuff too. It happens. But your doing an excellent job so far.
Author's Response:
Naw! THANK YOU!! :) I don't want to be an attention seeker asking for reviews, but it's difficult to know if you're doing alright when the reviews for the story is like 0 lol, so thanks for you very kind words XD