Date: 03/03/11 08:11 pm Title: May 27th - Late June, 1942
This story never ceases to amaze me! :D awe
Author's Response:
Thanks... naw, it's a bumma your review got cut... but at least i have it on fb (review on there, when i finall get on) X) i wonder why that happened though O.o
I just updated, Rissa XD
hahahaha, thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 03/03/11 04:19 pm Title: May 27th - Late June, 1942
oh my god. i'm almost sleeping on my keyboard but i just had to tell you that t was amazing, please let them both live till the end:) good job!
Author's Response:
Naw, that's so sweet of you to do! Hahaha, almost asleep and you still review!! naw, well i appreciate it a lot!! And thanks X)
hahaha, well, you'll just have to find out ;)
Thanks again for reviewing! I just updated :)
Date: 02/13/11 10:39 pm Title: January - April, 1942
I really love this story, I hope that Tom and Mila find each other!!
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you :] I'm glad you like it!
Well, you'll just have to keep reading to find out XD
Thanks for reviewing and reading btw x)
I just updated :D
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you :] I'm glad you like it!
Well, you'll just have to keep reading to find out XD
Thanks for reviewing and reading btw x)
I just updated :D
Date: 02/13/11 07:30 pm Title: January - April, 1942
Oh poor Mila! ]= I was so on edge with this chapter but mainly the memory with both Bill and Mila almost made me cry. I still felt so bad for Mila though. *sniff* intense and hella amazing chapter once again my dear! You always brighten my day with these lovely chapters of yours ^^
And oh yay! Now we can chat some time (: we'll have to figure out time differences and stuff especially since we're gonna do a collab. [: and no you didn't reply to the email but we're already talking on here, facebook and soon MSN so, I'm sure we're good xD but yes. This story is seriously one of the best, it's my favorite and it will be a sad day when it ends ]: but we'll both have a new story to latch onto when we start ours, hopefully, yeah?
And I just thought I'd use my German 1 skills on you for a bit haha I'm not fluent or anything. JUST started the class this school year haha but your welcome [:
Author's Response:
Yeah, poor mila :( naw, dammit, almost, maybe next time ;)
Naw, thank you. Naw, really? Well, you always brighten my days with these fabulous reviews<-- not just sayign that X)
Haha, we still haven't figured out time differences yet, we'll have to organise an msn session when we do.XD
Nawwwww, you're too kind! X) Yeah, even i'll be upset, i got really attached lol.... but YES! OFCOURSE! we'll have a new, drugo story to latch onto ;) haha
Hahaha, that's cool :) feel free, i want to learn German anyway.... naw, you're so lucky you do German, i'm so jealous :P
x) well i just updated Rissa X) talk to you on fb, and hopefully msn soon :) xxxxxxx
Date: 02/13/11 04:02 pm Title: January - April, 1942
missed it, read it, loved it :)
this chapter was amazing, although it was sad, at least they're both alive. the story so far is unbelievable. your ideas and your writing style is exactly my type, because you sometimes focus on complicated feelings, like pain and sorrow, without neglecting happiness. you've been doing a great job, please keep writing:)
Author's Response:
LOL, well i missed you reviews :)
Thanks, yeah it was quite sad, i was wondering how people would react to what happened in this chapter.
Naw, thankyou!!!! Yeah, i do try pretty hard with trying to portray all emotions, i'm glad it's paying off XD
Naw, thank you! Your kind reviews really do help :) I've gotten pretty atatched to this story, and maybe i'm just judging myself to harshly becuse i'm so close to it, but it never seems 'right'... so thankyou for reviewing :) And i will!
I just updated :)
Date: 02/12/11 11:14 pm Title: January - April, 1942
I love this story!!! I feel so bad for Tom being forced into Nazism and Mila being put in a concentration camp! I love these kinds of stories, I want a happy ending so badly!!
Author's Response:
Naw!!! THANK YOU! you have no idea how you have totally made my day! XD
Yeah, it's pretty sad about the camp and Nazism :\
Haha, yeah, me too! I love anything relating with war, as bad as it sounds, but i just find it so interesting :)
Haha, well you'll have to keep reading to find out X) I think you pretty much know how it's ganna end though.
Well, i just updated :D
Thank you for reviewing x
Date: 02/04/11 10:12 pm Title: September - December, 1941
3 WEEKS WITHOUT INTERNET!? HOW R U STILL ALIVE? XD oh gosh this chap was sad..=/ tom is a major? HOT! X'D anyways it was a sad but good chapter update soon! ^.^ btw u pretty! =P
Author's Response:
LMAO! I KNOW RIGHT! oh, but i did have access to facebook, but that's it :\ I was at the beach everyday, so it was alright :)
Lol, yeah, i was thinking, i should probably give him a title, haha, major sounds hot! X)
thanks :) I just updated, eeep, i think you're going to think this one's sad too! But next chap, i think, i hope! you're going like :)
haha, naw thank you! :D
Date: 02/04/11 04:43 pm Title: September - December, 1941
I MISSED YOU WOMAN! :D
Haha yeah I got your email and I replied, added you on facebook and all that jazz ;D still gotta add you on msn though! :o and yes! Rissa and Simone's conversation/reviews/review responses are started up again! ^^ tis be amazing missus! Anywho! GREAT chapter, as always! It was so sad and Tom's memory was SUPER cute ): poor kids! But yay! Happy ending! I'm excited for it and I'm dreading it haha coz I dont want this to end but it'll have to happen eventually lol sigh.
UND DU BIST SEHR SCHÖN! :D jajajajajajajajaja! ^^
Author's Response:
MISSED YOU TOO! as you already know :)
Oh, idk if i replied to the emial O.o, but i did add you on msn, i hop it worked, now we just have to get on at the same time :|
lol, yay!
haha, yes! i was aiming for cute with his memory :) i think the next chapter, by the way, i just updated, and i think that chapter has a lot of memories in there too, let's hpe they're cute as well ;)
yeah, i got attached to this story too, it's taken up a lot of my weekend time :) but, not sounding arrogant or anything, i actually like the story as well, and am also dreading it ending, but at the same time i want it to be finished lol X)
LMAO, i had to google-translate that! hahaha, thank you!
Date: 02/03/11 07:40 pm Title: July 18th, 1941
love this chapter :) i've been having the worst week ever this week and i knew if i read part or one of your fics it'd make me feel better! and i was right :D love it! :D its an interesting story! its brilliant :D xxxx
Author's Response:
Oh that sucks! why has your week been bad? Are you stressed? :(
LOL, haha, that's awesome! I'm glad it cheered you up!!! X)
oh, thank you! I'm trying hard to make it intersting, glad it's payign off :)
Hope your next week is much much better <3
Date: 02/01/11 10:47 am Title: August 3rd - August 12th, 1941
i'm so sorry that she lost one of the few people that she cared about, but i'm more scared about what happened to Tom. please don't kill him, please, pretty please, they survived bravely until now, their story can't end like this. "On a totally irrelevant matter" I wanted to tell you that I'm happy for you taking the braces off, it must be an awesome feeling to get rid of them :) please don't give up on this story, it's far too beautiful to be abandoned
Author's Response:
Yeah, i was sad that i killed off sandra too, idk why i did it exactly, but i pretty sure it's to capture to sadness and horror of WW2.
LOL, i haven't killed him off...... yet
;) no don't worry, i haven't killed him off :)
Haha, it's still got a few more chapters before it's finished, so anythign can happen between now and then :)
Nawww thankyou!! And YES! It's made me incredibly happy! I can eat apples now without worrying there's pieces of it caught in my braces x)
Oh, i won't :) It's become somethign i think about constantly, and i actually enjoy writing about it, and am so looking forward to that feeling you get when you finish something :) Naw, that's really sweet of you to say :)
I'm about to update (sorry for the absent month, as well)
Date: 01/06/11 07:38 pm Title: August 3rd - August 12th, 1941
ahhhhh I loved the chapter, it was so sad though! but happy ending later at least. :D
annddd that is true. every just kidding does have a little truth in it XD he's such a sexy mannn thoughh! and i'd love to talk to you on msn! add me please! that would be splendid! Im trying to remember everything you just said in the last two review responses so just remind me if Ive left anything out and yeah, our schooling is slightly different but its still school and school is boringgggg (unless you have a hot teacher xD) but i really thought this chapter was sad and I want mila and Tomi back together soooonnnn! Hope you get it all in order my dear. ^^ Thanks for the replies and updates! add me soon!
Author's Response:
Yay! My conversations with Rissa are back!! :D
Yep, officially decided, it's gonna end pretty happily :)
Well, i replied to your message, so idk if you'll read it before you read this, but if you don't, basically i explained my absence, and why i haven't added you yet.... AS SOON AS MY MSN IS WORKIGN I WILL THOUGH! :D
LMAO, so true! Hot teachers, and hot guys make school heaps better.... except when you get caught perving, then it's slightly awkward :P
Yeah, so do i, lol, i haven't exactly written them back togetehr yet, but i've got it all worked out XD
I'm just about to update :D <3
Date: 01/05/11 05:10 pm Title: August 3rd - August 12th, 1941
new hell is worse!!!! T.T poor tom poor mila and all those plp =/ YAY 99.99% happy ending! awsome chap! i think its a lil OOC for tom =P just a little gratz on getting ur braces off! update soon!
Author's Response:
Yeah, i know. ww2 was awefully sad:(
lol, yep, 99.99%...aw, thanks
Oh, yeah? I always worry about OOC, i guess i'm too close to the story to actually tell the difference whether it actually is OOC or just my nerves/ imagination... but thank you for telling me! I really appreciate it... well i've already written the next chapter, I'm actually bout to update it---sorry for the lateness of it---and idk if his OOC in this one, but for the next chapters i write, i'll keep it in mind to portray his character more better X) Thanks for the feedback
Haha, THANKYOU! I'm so glad they're off! XD
Date: 12/28/10 11:13 am Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
Well well! They did "it"! There were no pervy details but I respect that ;) Is it lame that my emotions flow with the story? ): I feel like a sap! It makes me even more sad though that your losing motivation for this amazing fiction. I hope you don't drop it and if there is anything I can do to help, puh-leeeze! Let me know(: I would personally adore a happy ending as you know. I'd love to see them get out of the war safe and sound and in lovvee!!! but Im going to be sad when we can't have our long review chats on hot science teachers and other things. I don't even know you and I think your awesome! Dammit. I got attached to the author AND the story. How pathetic Rissa. ;_; I think I need to stop reviewing for a while and just sit in a corner and think about my actions haha but im very much in love with this chapter and I can't wait for more (: till then! :D
Author's Response:
Hahaha, yes, they did. LOL, i was contemplating whether to let my sexual creativity out and really detail the scene, but then i thought that this story doesn't really give out those kind of kinky impressions and feelings, so i cleaned it up a bit :) But i'm glad it worked out :D
LOL, of course not! I read like that too xD This is going to sound lame, but the reason i usually get emotionally attached to fictions/books is because i kinda picture myself as one of the characters, lol, it sounds extremely sad out loud, but it's what i do :)
TBH, i think i just had one of those 'emotional weeks' but i'm over it now x) and thanks to everyones' reviews, they've definitely motivated me further. and you don't have to worry because i would never drop a story, even if i lost motivation completely! ^.^ I'm the type of person that if i start somehting, i have to finish it---it can be annoying, but i guess in this case it's good X)
I think i want a happy ending too n.n i just have to figure out 'how' they get out of the situation :\
LOL, naw, i think you're awesome too! (^_^) LOL... i could always gove you my msn, and we could definitely chat on there! I'm sure we could work around the time differences, and even if we couldn't, there's always email where we can have our long chats about, well, anything! XD
Naw, well, as you already know, i appreciate--and always look forward to--your reviews x)
I'm about to update in a second. <3
Date: 12/28/10 11:11 am Title: 24th - 28th July, 1941
So i thought i reviewed for this...i remember typing out the review and everything. Oh well. This calls for a new one. (: Ah, I'm happy my reviews are appreciated my dear ;D and oh my! Your science teacher must've been quite a site, yeah? Haha and yeah, he's pretty badass that man is. Now I'm just waiting for him to leave his horrid wife and confess his love for me xD my friends are sure that's never gonna happen but ehhh, a girl can dream right? :D
And my other subjects consist of-
World Civ
Algebra
U.S History
German 1
English 2
And my amazing Earth Science class :D
Oh really? Sounds fun and scary :o
I have two more years then I want to go to school in Chicago :) and yeah we are pretty close! ^^
and I like distant age differences, hence my 15(sixteen next month)-year-old crush on my 30-year-old married(but it doesn't matter till he has kids I always say! Haha I'm joking. Promise. I'm awful but I'm not a whore.) science teacher (:
And I'm glad I'm allowed to ramble somewhere haha I swear it's fun talking to you (: I look forward to your responses! Now I have to go make another long review for the next chapter :D
Author's Response:
Oh, i hate it when you type out a long review and it doesn't get posted :\ Well thanks for retyping! X)
Oh yeah he was, :) && his ass! oh my *drools a bit*... X) i can't get over his firm bubble but!
LOL, well, i wish you luck with that little fantasy of yours XD Agreed, and sometimes dreaming's all you need.... at least until you can get it for real ^_^
oooh, I wish i did German :( But we only had the iption of Italian and Vietnamese :\
Your subjects seems quite different from one another, what do you wanna be when you grow up? haha, that sounds so kiddish, i'll re-phrase, 'when you leave school?' n.n
Hahaha, 'behind every joke is some truth!' ;)
I enjoy rambling with you too! X)
I guess i ramble with you soon! :D xx
Date: 12/24/10 07:16 am Title: July 17th, 1941
I am totally devoted to this story.Tom is a positive character (I am surprised,I was used to him being a bit more rough) and Mila..wonderful character,yet I find her a little too sensible.I was hoping that she would be a bit more stubborn and actually amaze Tom with her determination.Oh,nevermind,keep up with this story because every chapter takes me unprepared xD
Oh,and,of course,happy ending! Their love story is too beautiful to fade :)
Author's Response:
:) I'm happy you feel that way about the story :)
Yeah, tbh, i was thinking that Tom might be a little OOC, but i wasn't sure :\
Oh, well we've still got more chapters to go, who knows, maybe she'll surprise him in the end ;)
Naww, thank you, i definitely will keep writing X)
Thanks for the review, and sorry about the belated response, i thought I already responded to your review, but, guess not... oh wells,
Thanks for reading :)
Date: 12/24/10 02:25 am Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
go with a happy ending please! Ive done so much research on ww2....im tired of hearing about all the crappy endings...
Author's Response:
Oh, i do a heap of research on ww2 too, and yeah, i agree, most of it's sad :S
All i have to do, if i'm going with the happy ending, is figure out 'how' it ends happily, i have a few ideas in mind, so i guess it's just a matter of writing it.... Thank you for the review, and your thoughts x)
I'm about to update. :D
Date: 12/23/10 03:18 pm Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
I liked this chapter alot... it was nice hearing more about their families. I think it would be cool if this ended Happily.. most of your stories end sadly and I think it would be an interesting thing to hear about how they could get out of the current situation.
Author's Response:
Oh, thanks! I have to admit, that i do enjoy writing about their families XD LOL, oh gosh, most of my stories DO end sadly, don't they? Hmmm, in that case, i might have to end it happily; just to make it different from my others. :)
Now all i have to do is figure out HOW they're going to get out of it... oh, boy :|
Well, i guess we'll see how i go X)
Thanks for the review!
I'm going to update any second now.
Date: 12/23/10 01:14 pm Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
I love how their love keeps them strong, it would be a shame to have a sad ending, I vote for the happy one :D I'm sorry you lost your motivation, it's a great story and you're doing a great job!
Author's Response:
I agree that it would be a shame :\ But sometimes i just can't help myself with ending it sadly. But i think, like most of the readers, i want this to end happily. So i probably will.
Naw, thankyou.... oh, geez, you know exactly what to say to motivate someone xD
Thanks for reviewing, and the inspiring words :)
I'm going to update in a second.
Date: 12/23/10 10:54 am Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
I love this story. & a happy ending would make me happy.
Author's Response:
Naw,....I shall try my best at endng it happily :)
Thank you so much for the review!
I am about to update any second now X)
Date: 12/23/10 08:17 am Title: July 29th - August 2nd, 1941
Please give them a happy ending. Or yuo could also goo with something where Mila got hurt first, I dont know. But just please, dont let Tom die in war.
Author's Response:
Hmm, i might take you up on you Mila-getting-hurt idea O.o
Naw, i'll tell you, for now(and most liekely for the rest of the story), i have no intention of killing Tom :)
I'm going to add the next chapter any second now :)
Thankyou for reviewing by the way X)