Date: 11/19/10 03:45 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
I loved it. That was such an amazing remix! I like the original a lot too, and adding twincest to it was just perfect. I enjoyed it a lot.
Date: 11/10/10 07:46 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
Fantastic! I loved it! I love how you took such a simple plot and gave it so much subtext. :) Way to go. Not to mention it's ridiculously hot and I would love to see a continuation of it. ;)
Date: 11/10/10 10:51 am Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
Such a good remix, this is really a great take on the original. I enjoyed it very much, and I'm excited to see who you are!
Date: 11/06/10 11:20 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
oh gosh, this was sooooo good. but i wanted the smut, though.
Date: 11/06/10 06:47 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
I actually went to skim through the original since someone else mentioned that you added the Tom element to it and I agree that it was a nice way to add to the story without subtracting from the original one.
Date: 11/06/10 12:22 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
This was funny lol I liked it a lot, even though it's not often I read slash. It kind of reminded me of the On Defense/On Offense series [: Great fic!
Date: 11/06/10 06:16 am Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
There's not much to say except...I loved it! I thought it was brilliant how you turned it into Bill/Tom, that's something I would never have thought to do with the story...you can't go wrong with twincest XD Anyway, this was well written and I wish you luck in the challenge! :D
Date: 11/06/10 01:08 am Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
I'm favoriting this. I loved it. It wasn't too mushy but still plenty sexy.
Date: 11/06/10 12:49 am Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
wow...i dont think i've even ever read the original, but this was awesome! like, really cute and sexy and wicked clever!
Date: 11/05/10 09:40 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
This remix was SO good ! I adore what you did with this, the original is awesome and so is this fic! You can't really do wrong in adding twin love to a story! I really like how you include this pairing, with Bill filming the whole thing only to make Tom realize what they both want. It was a really clever and original idea! I can't wait to see who you are, I'm convince I've read fics from you and if I haven't, I will definitely read your stuff in the future! It's all very intriguing :)
You did an amazing job with this remix. It was interesting, sexy and very well written!
Date: 11/05/10 09:00 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
haha the end line had me chuckling xD this was a wonderful entry to the challenge! I really enjoyed reading it, it was sexy and made me smile :) you took on Tom's character really well, too. I liked how we saw his point of view, poor guy, angsting all over Bill and his sexual tirade xD wonderful fic, it was lovely to read!
Date: 11/05/10 03:43 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
.....hot. That was hot! I liked this quite a bit! Good luck in the competition!
Date: 11/05/10 03:00 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
Oooh *o* You did an amazing job with this! I loved what you did with it, how you made it into Bill/Tom and with the camera and everything. Very clever!
Date: 11/05/10 02:36 pm Title: Running a Mile to Make the Next Step
I don't even know what to say. I am so blown away; firstly that you picked this, which was what I was hoping for the whole time, and then your take on it. I'm also super tired, so I probably won't make much sense or rant.
I loved it all. Ahh, everything. I adore this take on my story, and that you focused on twins and Tom. Your writing is amazing, too, I never wanted it to end.
You did the original justice, definitely. I take the privileged of being the judge of that. I never pictured this story behind Bill's actions when I wrote it (because I just wanted some Bill/Team D. porn for Onerva, haha) but now, this makes so much sense. I'll always be a twin girl when it comes to fiction and this, was a perfect twin twist on the original.
And no, thank you for an amazing remix! I'm excited to find out who you are now, so I can hug you senseless. And demand the rest. I'm blown away.