Date: 10/20/10 07:26 am Title: When Bill Became a Butler, and When He Became My Butler
funny...it's amazing how you can change your appearance and not be recognized...and of course tom got his way...it's a valid point though...he wanted bill cause he was different...I'm glad that there was a compromise...
Author's Response: Haha, well in Tom's case, it was partially that he didn't want to recognize Bill looking so un-Bill-ish. XD;;; But yeah, Tom got his way. x)
Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 10/20/10 07:04 am Title: When Bill Became a Butler, and When He Became My Butler
Oh, wow, this is still great. :) I love the interaction between the two of them and I can totally understand how distressed Tom was when Bill looked the same as everyone else. Hell, I'm doing it with that damn short haircut right now since you can't see his septum and earrings from far away. -____- I want dreadlocked Bill back, uwaaaa. ;_;
Anyway. I can't wait to hear about them being more than friends. ;)
Author's Response: Haha thanks. :) The more than friends bit won't be for a few chapters... I think... o_o;;
Date: 10/15/10 01:18 am Title: The Day I Met Bill
you're doing a great job with first person!!!!!!!! keep it up!!!!!!!!! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/14/10 06:03 pm Title: A Starting Point of a Sort
NO!!!!!!!!! DO NOT SHORTEN THE SUMMARY IT'S HILAROUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great beginning though, really makes me want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i would now, but..... boyfriends and food await!!!!!!!!!! XD
Author's Response: Haha thank you! I'm glad you think so! :)
Date: 10/12/10 12:22 pm Title: The Day I Met Bill
YES! IT HAS BEEN UPDATED PEOPLE!!! XD *prances around like an idiot*
for some weird reason, i can't seem to imagine bill as smelly :/ but it's not like i've smelled him before XD you know what i mean..
thanks for updating! :) that was faster than I thought.. :D
Author's Response: That was a fast update? Haha, well okay then, relish in it because I can't guarantee that future update will be that 'fast.' XD;;
I honestly couldn't even picture Bill at all the way I wrote him to be. I wrote him like dirty faced, a bit of scruff, smelly, big clothes, and yet in my head I was still seeing Bill as the Bill we all knew. So I agree, it's very hard to picture Bill as... non-Bill-ish. XD
Thanks for reading! I will try for another update soon! :3
Date: 10/10/10 08:33 pm Title: The Day I Met Bill
you're doing an excellent job, my dear...this is so interesting to me and i can't wait to read on...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/10/10 08:03 pm Title: A Starting Point of a Sort
i like...this is different and i'm intrigued...reading on now...
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 10/10/10 05:03 pm Title: A Starting Point of a Sort
Hey!
thanks for the update!
brilliant story.. imo you are rocking the "whole first person thing"...and i'm loving the monologue in italics..
aww i love that tom saved bill from the streets!
odd question..but how old is bill? how many years older than tom is he?
i can't wait for the next update
take care of yourself xxx
Author's Response: Thanks for reading the update! And thank you! I'm honestly still trying to get used to writing in first person, but I'm happy to hear that it's coming along okay. >.>
As for Bill's age, in this past flashback thing, he's twenty and Tom's nine, making them 11 years apart. XD;;; I considered having Tom later find out that Bill was lying about his age, and then just have them be a bit closer age-wise, but I'm still thinking about it. I dunno, we'll see. Haha. x)
Thanks again. :)
Date: 10/09/10 11:59 pm Title: The Day I Met Bill
god, I love ur Azn series! n im so happy you're doing this one now!! YAY!!! and lol, i laughed so hard with this phrase "I liked to think of it as an extreme version of hide-and-seek." I simply loved it! XD
Author's Response: Haha! The Azn Love series was actually started by the awesome parallelheartz, so it's not exactly mine. It's just that practically all the stories I write fit into it, even though we both have an equal number of stories in it. XD;; Anyway, thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it! :)
Date: 10/09/10 01:33 pm Title: The Day I Met Bill
I just adored reading about how Bill & Tom met. I love this. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/09/10 12:02 pm Title: A Starting Point of a Sort
This also like the anime/manga Kodocha. A little rich girl takes in a homeless man to be her personal assistant and she crushes on him.
Author's Response: Haha, how interesting! I should look into that one..
Date: 10/09/10 11:38 am Title: The Day I Met Bill
@_@ Wow! This story is... wow. In a good way! wooow. I hope there will be more soon! ;)
Author's Response: Haha! Wow at your wow-filled reaction! XD Anyway, thanks so much! I'm working on this fic more than I should, so hopefully I can get the next chapter up some time next week! :3
Date: 10/09/10 08:56 am Title: The Day I Met Bill
Awh, this is just too sweet. I love how nine-year-old Tom is being such an angel and sticking up for Bill. It warms my heart. Reminds me of how Tom is in Safe In The Arms of Death because he's so convinced that Bill is cool and awesome, and he's going to defend him from the police and everything. XD Plus he's younger so it's perfect. I'm always wondering what it would be like to read that kind of a Tom somewhere else. :)
Bill made me smile, too. Being all "Leave me alone. >.>" and stuff and then being all happy when he can stay in the house. Geez, that means he's like twenty-eight in the present. I wonder if Tom's still going to go after him. Well, duh. Of course. XD
I'm still wondering about these powers of Bill's. ;)
Great work, bb. ♥
Author's Response: Age doesn't matter in a relationship. Love knows no bounds~~~~ Course they'll need to wait until Tom is legal to really do anything, but that's why this is only PG-13. I mean, whut.
Bill's powers and the rest of his background story will all be slowly revealeddddd..
Date: 10/09/10 08:00 am Title: The Day I Met Bill
It's so good!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 10/09/10 07:00 am Title: The Day I Met Bill
I don't like the fact that Bill is older than Tom, is a little bit of a turn off for me, but the plot seems nice.
Author's Response: I'm actually a sucker for younger Tom or like bottom Tom, so yeah.. >.> But uhm, I'm glad you like the plot? XD Thanks!
Date: 10/09/10 04:29 am Title: The Day I Met Bill
Love it babe~~~
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)
Date: 10/09/10 04:03 am Title: The Day I Met Bill
I'm loving the first person thing, it's amazing here. xD I can't wait for mor love!
Author's Response: Oh yay! Thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/07/10 02:08 am Title: A Starting Point of a Sort
Feels weird reading in first person, too. I usually lean away from first person.
And I hope it's just Tom's opinion - and not yours as well - that what the bf did was cheating. He told him. Cheating is carrying on two or more sexual relationships for a period of time. What he did was simply find someone he was happier with.
Lol, if you know this already, I'm sorry.
Author's Response: Haha. I'll be honest, I hate writing in first person. Now that I'm trying to turn these random writings into an actual story, I find first person POV a pain in the ass. Not to mention I keep writing like 'he' instead of 'I,' so I'm really just having problems just getting into it. @-@ But at the same time, I really feel like this particular story needs to be told from only Tom's point of view with all his own thoughts on what he goes through, so I'm just hoping I'll get better at all this. @-@
And yeah, that was all just Tom overreacting. XD
Date: 10/06/10 12:33 am Title: A Starting Point of a Sort
No, I personally adore it. It drew me in and made me love this. I wonder what's going to change that makes Bill leave Tom's side...
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Haha, things will slooooowly be revealed. ;3
Date: 10/03/10 07:26 pm Title: A Starting Point of a Sort
i hope u update soon.......like now
Author's Response: Haha thanks! An update for sure on Thursday. ;)