Date: 11/04/10 12:47 am Title: The Chapter Three
aaw sweet moment at the end ther :3
Date: 11/03/10 12:02 am Title: The Chapter Four
Anxious to read the next part. : )
Date: 11/02/10 08:44 am Title: The Chapter Four
more please
Date: 11/01/10 08:42 pm Title: The Chapter Four
i really like this. what if tom was a reincarnet of a wife bill used to have, his soul mate, and bill is feeling that, feeling connected to tom through a long forgotten soul-mate bond. im egear to see how bill and tom end up together
Date: 11/01/10 08:21 am Title: The Chapter Four
I love your story!
Date: 11/01/10 07:47 am Title: The Chapter Four
Awh, hon, don't you worry. I know exactly how you feel. I haven't updated in more than a week (which is very unusual if you know me) and I feel terrible about it but there's so much going on in my life that it's nearly impossible to sit down and think of a whole chapter. :/ So don't worry about banging something out to please us if you're not satisfied with it. -hugs-
All the same, the chapter was good. It was filler, but it gave insight and I like that. It shows Bill is thinking more about Tom than either of them would care to admit, and that Bill isn't just going to stop destroying things just because Tom would rather him not do it. I'm quite interested in what's going to happen next. :)
Date: 11/01/10 07:22 am Title: The Chapter Four
this is really interesting...i thought this chapter was just fine...
Date: 11/01/10 07:12 am Title: The Chapter Three
i'd really like to know why he's keeping them seperate...i know i'll eventually find out...and i was surprised that bill's so warm...reading on now...
Date: 11/01/10 02:48 am Title: The Chapter Four
Wow. Love
Date: 10/23/10 07:04 am Title: The Chapter Three
Mmh, I am just waiting for the action to start. I have a feeling that I'm going to love this story but this chapter was a bit... less? More I don't really know how to say it in english, but maybe forced? There where less feelings (except in the last piece) in it and more: they did this and went to do that. More facts instead of thoughts. I hope i explained that right... I'm still looking forward to your next chapter. Xx
Date: 10/22/10 09:23 am Title: The Chapter Three
Nephilim? Something that is ans yet not of his world.
Date: 10/22/10 09:03 am Title: The Chapter Two
Okay big mistake here. He never even mechanic his name or whom he was to all these people so how would Tom know his name? All he knows it this guy is taking over the hotel.
Author's Response: Yes, but Tom never called him by name because Tom doesn't know his name. The story isn't from Tom's POV and the readers /do/ know Bill's name, so it is safe to use it in the content of the story.
Date: 10/22/10 07:23 am Title: The Chapter One
The walking down the office desk. That is in image . . .
Date: 10/22/10 06:58 am Title: The Introduction
Your really want a Manip? Of Vilhelmi? Do you want him in white robes? I will so make you a photoshop of Bill for you. I could also do a drawing of your vision. Though you have to let me know which one you want. Here is a link to my deviant art.http://krystleg777.deviantart.com/
Author's Response: I would love if you would do a drawing or manip for this. I honestly don't care which you'd do. I'd rather you do whichever you'd like to do more. -nodnodndo- :D ♥
Date: 10/21/10 10:53 am Title: The Chapter Three
Oh damn, oh damn, oh damn. Someone's getting interested in Tom. Let's just hope that when they kiss, Bill doesn't accidentally melt Tom's lips or something because I'm thinking that would make it harder for the two of them to ever kiss again. XD
Date: 10/21/10 03:02 am Title: The Chapter Three
awww, this is so endearing... i love you, anony~
Date: 10/21/10 12:30 am Title: The Chapter Three
O.O Ooh, more cliffys! Still getting good, love it!
Date: 10/21/10 12:09 am Title: The Chapter Three
I love this story. Honestly, it's the one I most look forward to updates for, of everything I'm tracking. :)
Interesting chapter! I'm just as curious as Tom. Can't wait for more!
Date: 10/20/10 11:44 pm Title: The Chapter Three
OOOOOOOOH~ :D