Date: 04/30/23 11:23 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 01/10/13 08:17 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
lovely :D
Date: 11/16/10 11:47 am Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
No, Bill, nooooooo... :(
But I loved your story anyway. :)
Author's Response: He's only doing it to protect Tom
Date: 09/05/10 10:14 am Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
Weeeeell, I liked it until the end(a) it's just that I'm a complete sucker for happy love endings xD
Author's Response: Haha aw I know how you feel. I can write unhappy endings, but I'm totally a sucker for the happy ones when I'm reading as well xD Especially if it's multi-chapterede stories! But, anyways, thank you for the review and I'm glad you (kinda) liked it ;D
Date: 09/05/10 09:59 am Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
This story is so heart-wrenching... I really like it (:
I'm usually one for happier endings but you wrote this beautifully and I hope there will be more from you!
Author's Response: Well, there most definitely will be! (:rn Thank you (: I'm a real sucker for emotional fics and I can't seem to write anything else as well so it's pretty much what I do by now ^^'
Date: 09/04/10 08:40 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
................................ BILL!
Author's Response: Sorryyy xD I'm sensing you're not pleased with the endng, amirite? But thanks fot the review anyways! ;
Date: 09/01/10 06:52 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
Oh no! Haha so wasn't expecting that ending! I think there needs to be another emotionally packed chapter/sequel where Bill tells Tom how he REALLY feels :P Awesome stuff. Love the wording and the emotion.
Author's Response: Huh, I might consider doing a sequel/second chapter... I have some ideas wanting to get out, but I'm ot sure if I'll do it. I sorta like how it ends so openly (; And I'm so glad you like it! :D
Date: 09/01/10 05:14 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
Awwwwww, OMG BILL! You stupid little shit!! lol. I can't believe you made him give up on his true love at the end! And esp when it was in the palm of his hand. It's just heartbreaking. :(
I really enjoyed reading this. "If I stop lying I'll just dissapoint you" is a super good line, I can see why it inspired you to write this.
I just feel so bad for Bill in this story, part of it is society, but the other part is that he's fucking himself over intentionally. :( So sad.
The love scene was totally sexy btw. The dialogue is well placed I think. You can really FEEL the way they talk and breath and kiss. That part was stellar.
My only criticism about this fic is that there were some typos and small things, nothing major required to make it sparkle, but a proof-reading wouldnt hurt IMO.
Very well done. This kind of twincest is exactly what I've been craving all day. :)
Author's Response: Yes, that line sort of summon op the story, don't you think? It just had me thinking "what if Bill thinks he has to lie to be "Bill"..?" And then everything sort of just happened and here's the story xD Haha. Thank you so much for liking it and for telly me! :Drn Oh, and as for the typos etc; I actually had it beta'ed. Just forgot to mention it ^^'
Date: 09/01/10 05:08 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
“Of course I do. No matter what, okay? I know you’re not perfect, I’ve always known. But to me you are ‘cause all of those small imperfections only make you that much more perfect in my eyes. It’s only human, Bill, and it doesn’t matter.”
That paragraph turned me into a puddle of goo! The whole story was a fantastic read, bittersweet and realistic and your characterizations dead on. I truly enjoyed this, despite Bill having to lie again in the end, knowing the truth just wouldn't do then, no matter if Tom and him had kissed.
Author's Response: *giggles* yay I'm glad someone enjoyed the more fluffy part of this story as well! :D It means a lot that you think the characterizations are right, 'cause I really spent a long time trying to get them right ^^ Thank you for the review - and here, have some cookies! (;
Date: 09/01/10 03:47 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
Really strong and emotional work here. Bills agony when he had to tell Tom the truth, was very detailed and you could feel how much he fought to keep that secret.
The ending was understandable and I'm impressed Bill managed to protect Tom. Good job.
*Maria
Author's Response: Yes, I was really trying to show how, even though he had so many secrets, this was the one he would tell more lies for and go much further to protect. I hope you enjoyed reading it, thanks for the review! (:
Date: 09/01/10 02:47 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
This story was just what I needed right now(: Thank you, it was really, really good(:
Author's Response: Really? I'm glad I could provide it, then (;rn Wow, you think so? Thank you so much! :D
Date: 09/01/10 02:38 pm Title: Liar, Liar, Dirty Little Liar
Eh, the ending disappointed me, I hoped that Bill will stick to telling the truth... but still great story! :)
Author's Response: Ah I'm sorry x) I just thought it kinda fitted the story better, it'd be weird if all of a sudden Bill is only speaken the truth, right? But thanks! :D