Date: 01/07/20 05:43 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Date: 09/03/14 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked this but 'posy' is a word for a bunch of flowers. I looked it up. It just didn't sound right. But other than that I enjoyed this.
Date: 11/17/13 12:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow!
This was SUPER hot!
A dorky Bill and a badass Tom having sex on a couch, and anyone can walk in on them! Fuuuuck, that's hot!
Great job! Really, really great job!
Date: 08/09/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
cliff hanger on a one shot? That makes no sense
i love this story though
Author's Response: I'm actually planning a squeal. Thanks. :D
Date: 08/09/10 04:36 am Title: Chapter 1
ohhmeinkaulitz!!! can we have a sequel pliss!! :]
awesome story btw
Author's Response: We will indeed have a sequel, I'm finishing off a Mcfly oneshot then I will start it! Thanks.
Date: 08/08/10 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
A little more build up would have been super-but it was still hot!! I like to think that they got together and they had hot sex every chance they got!
Author's Response: I kind of had the motion that I should finish it after leaving it for so long. It would be good but I'm sure someone would catch them if they did and film it ;) And you just gave me an idea for another fic. It shall be slower next time:D
Date: 08/08/10 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
O.O wow very hot....!
Author's Response: That was the first I did! :D
Date: 08/08/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
i guess two words fit what i wanna say perfectly.
SLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWN!
the last part went by way too fast.
If that had gone by any faster i wouldnīt have noticed that part at all.
Iīm really not trying to dound mean.
Eventhough thatīs probably just what it sounds like i am.
I just wanted to give you a friendly tip.
Author's Response: I understand I just thought that I should finish it since I had started it a while ago. Its also the first I did so the next one I do will defiantly be slower. Thank you!