Date: 07/28/10 10:17 am Title: Ehisdv
Oh, it's Cherokee. Lol, I have a bit of Cherokee in me, so says my grandma.
Wow, this is very interesting. Well written and intriguing summary. I'll see where this goes.
edit: Is Iggy and Izzy the same person? You wrote 'Izzy' in this chapter.
Author's Response: OMG I THOUGHT NO ONE WAS GOING TO GET THAT! OMG OMG OMG!!! -HUGS YOU- I'M CHEROKEE TOO!! XDDDD okay, now that my spazzing is done, yeah, Iggy and Izzy are the same person.. I'll go change that now.. stupid blondness... OMG! <143
Date: 07/26/10 11:46 pm Title: Seed of Discord
no we can't. so when Bill gets his revenge i'll be on the sidelines cheering for him and waving pom poms and stuff :)
Author's Response: POM POMS FTW!!!! XD <143
Date: 07/26/10 12:30 pm Title: Ehisdv
alright i love this story but why im confused is who raped him and when is tom going to enter!
please update soon!:D
Author's Response: Benjamin raped him and Tom is coming soon! Just wait for him! and I will defiantly try to update quicker then a month, cause I wanna be cooler then that! XD <143
Date: 07/26/10 02:07 am Title: Ehisdv
I could tell Unalavnhi was his god.. but what language? Made up? o.0
I couldn't even tell Bill had been raped. O_O
NO I HUG YOU FOR RAPING HIM.
I want a rape scene.. et would be sexy ^_____^
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I am really loving this one so far. :D
I can't wait for what will happen next and when will Tom come along. It's really great so far, this concept and plot. (: Do update soon. xD
I would love more torture implied on Bill. /shotshsotsshot
:3
Author's Response: I knew someone was going to get that! And I am going to try to write some sexyness later on, I just have to practice a little bit, I'm new to the actual sex stuff... it kinda intimidates me a little 0_0' AND!!!! There will be a little more torture of Bill, but more mental stuff then actual physical stuff. :P <143
Date: 07/26/10 01:41 am Title: Ehisdv
poor billa. i want to Bill to get his revenge on Benjamin when he gets out of there. I was so happy to see that this story had been updated. I love it. but still poor billa. can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about it taking so long, I'm a loser. Bill's gonna get his revenge, we can't just let Benjamin get away with that, now can we? >:) <143
Date: 07/26/10 01:01 am Title: Seed of Discord
i like it so far. you need to add rape to warnings. when is tom coming into play. please update soon;)
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I thought I had added Rape on the warnings, but apparently it wasn't there, so that you for reminding me. Tom's coming soon, you all must really want him in here. XD but thank you! <143
Date: 06/17/10 07:46 pm Title: Seed of Discord
please pretty please update please i like this story and the summary dragged me in!:)
Author's Response: Alright, alright, I'm working on it! :) <143
Date: 06/16/10 07:26 pm Title: Seed of Discord
well i must say that, i only hv a light understanding of wats goin on bt i do get the jst. i hope that the next chpt has a lil more explanation within it...and that it doesnt take a week for u to write it.
gud luck nd well done - its very captivatin for a introction :]
Author's Response: Well, obviously I missed the week due date. XD Chapter 2 might have some more explanation but it might not. Thanks for reading! <143
Date: 06/16/10 05:33 pm Title: Seed of Discord
wait...wait.....so is there gonna be translations for the words that are italicized ^^?
interesting...interesting....cause we dont really know whats going on....and maybe the soldiers think that Bill is a women ^^?....plus kidnapped Bill is always a plus =B.....cant wait to see whats more ^_^
Author's Response: Kidnapped Bill is always a plus, yesh yesh. And I don't know if I am going to give a translation for the words. I would like for people to make their own meanings for them, even though I could give a translation. I might since you asked. Also, they know Bill is a man.. ^_^ <143
Date: 06/16/10 04:49 pm Title: Seed of Discord
This seems really interesting. I will form more of an opinion when you write more. :)
Author's Response: Which will happen when my brain decides that it wants to form someway to write the second chapter. <143
Date: 06/16/10 02:07 pm Title: Seed of Discord
I love this already. :3 It's a really good intro, and now I'm dying for the next chapter. xD Please update again soon! I need to find out what's going on. O:
Author's Response: I'm working on chapter 2 right now. It's kinda difficult to write because.... well... I'm not gonna tell, I'm gonna let you wonder instead! <143