Date: 05/16/15 12:05 pm Title: Deleted Chapter 11 Date Scene
I can't believe I've never reviewed this chapter and that my review was so terribly short when I commented this story as a whole, before this chapter was added. But anyway. I really, really love this story! I'm a bit sad though that the botTom never happened XD It would've been great, but yeah. But ah this chapter was soo great! Such a sweet date with a bit of a dirty end ;) Totally awesome!
Date: 03/24/13 04:33 am Title: Epilogue
this was really good story!!
i wish there was a sequel to this!
Date: 02/28/13 03:16 pm Title: Epilogue
I LOVE IT
Date: 09/05/12 05:42 am Title: Epilogue
Beautiful story :3 Loved it!
Date: 09/05/12 04:39 am Title: Did You Lock The Door?
aww poor Stephanie
Date: 05/16/12 06:52 pm Title: Epilogue
I like Tvis story :-) i feel bad for Stephanie though :-( She souls have found a boyfriend that she's totally in lev with :D
Date: 05/10/12 01:15 am Title: Epilogue
Ruined her life? what, was Tom her life or something? Oh of course she was the one in control if it had been her way she would have gotten rid of Bill. Glad Tom had the brains enough to not want to marry her. No offense to the people who liked her but I thought she was a cow. She got what she deserved in the end.
Date: 05/10/12 01:08 am Title: How Long?
I feel bad for her, I do. I don't condone cheating either but Bill and Tom just had to be together. I thought what Stephanie did was a bitchy thing. She is a bitch. I didn't really like her anyways. Good riddance Stephanie.
Date: 04/21/12 01:29 pm Title: Deleted Chapter 11 Date Scene
i love this chapterr
i just wish you could have write Bill being on top hahaha i almost die when Stephanie interrupt them TuT!!!! big frustration with this fic hahahhaa but not so big as the love for it xD
amazing amazing story thank you so much for share it
Date: 04/21/12 01:15 pm Title: Epilogue
WAAAAAAAAA AMazingg Amazing Fic i love it so much
TuT their love is perfect so perfect and the engagement was so amazing omg TuT im going to read the delete scene
Date: 03/12/12 02:27 am Title: Epilogue
Before I go off on how TOTALLY AWESOME this was, I'm going to tell you about what I didn't like. First, I'm an actress, so I know how the business is. You do NOT do that amazingly the second you get to the city, unless, for some crazy reason, you're insanely lucky. Also (and this is just a tiny thing XD) there was a tiny mistake in, like, the second chapter. You wrote "acting method" instead of "method acting" once. Also... I got the feeling that you didn't really know what method acting is from this... or at least didn't know how it's taught. I wasn't taught method (it's a little too intense for an art high school), but I WAS taught something similar. You're not told "go do this monologue" (which was spelled wrong, by the way). You're told "how would you feel if this were happening to you" and "what emotions are you, as the character, feeling at this moment? What are your objectives and obstacles HERE." Method acting is a bit more intense than that... it's more like... well, the actor and the character are a single entity, with method acting.... At least until the show is over XD There's also a bunch of different acting techniques and other things that Bill would probably do if he wanted to break into acting... voice classes, for one (for diction, not singing), and movement for actors, and he'd probably try out something like Meisner before checking out Method Acting... (I was taught Boleslavski). Apart from actor terms and stuff to do with the business, there were a few grammatical and spelling errors that were consistent throughout (under-use of commas, etc.). Now you get to hear all my GOOD thoughts on this fic XD First, LOVED IT!!!!! When I saw the summary, I just KNEW it was going to be soap-opera-y, and that's exactly what I was looking for, and it was SO good. I love what happened with Bill and Stephanie, although I wish she'd found out some other way. Georg... is he bi and in love with Stephanie??? That's what it seemed like... XD It'd be good if that were true. I like the more realistic ending of Tom NOT winning the competition, although I think it's highly unrealistic for Andi to find work and an apartment that quickly. I LOVED Bill's relationship with Georg, and I hope that they can become friends again, even after Stephanie. Even though I wish she could have found out differently, I still loved the scene where she found out. It was just... so PERFECT, you know??? XD Well done ^-^
Date: 03/12/12 12:01 am Title: Avoidance and Temptation
Just a note (I'll review properly at the end of the fic, since it's complete): I've found that, in general, reminding people of how much time has passed isn't a great idea in fics... it's best to let them figure out time-lines on their own. Like, in one of my favorite books, the entire thing only takes about two days, but it feels a lot longer 'cause so much emotion and other crap is packed into those two days. I've found it's better to look back and go "Woah. That's how much time passed?!" Than to be reminded =) That's all until the end (or until I get interested enough in something else specific to mention it XD)
Date: 02/21/12 05:27 pm Title: How Long?
-a little bubble of a sob wells up- nooo.... no nono my escalade... i mean toms.. :'(
Date: 02/21/12 05:11 pm Title: Did You Lock The Door?
buh bye crazy lady :) lol.... oh sorry, am i supposed to be sad that she found out like this? huh ill work on that, :P
Date: 02/18/12 10:28 am Title: Wait, What?
lol. i love the PSA at the end of the this chapter
Date: 02/17/12 09:51 pm Title: Absence Makes the Heart Grow Fonder?
i highly doubt either one of those two... lets say tits to be nice has the self control to keep their hands off of each other. and, just guessing, Steph knows it. >:) loving this!
Date: 02/14/12 04:10 pm Title: The Meeting
daaaamn! yaay :) loved that it was basically smutt >.> but that's me. cant wait to read on! mwahaha