Date: 05/12/10 09:31 am Title: “You’re such a spoiled princess.”
Gonna have to agree with FeNice here, it ended VERY abruptly and out of place. It had a good start but it didn't help that we had next to no background knowledge of the plot OR the characters. Maybe if you continued it longer, made it more complete, it could work, but as is...not so much, sorry.
Date: 05/11/10 06:43 pm Title: “ When we're married...”
That was a great fanfic. XD
Obligations, that word, popped up every few paragraphs. xD
i liked the sweet relationship between Anis and Bill, it was nice. (:
shy Bill is adorable.
lovely fic *hearts*
Date: 05/11/10 06:01 pm Title: “ When we're married...”
i really enjoyed that! its was really good! :D x
Date: 05/11/10 02:52 pm Title: “ When we're married...”
Haha go Lizz, go Lizz!! I laughed so hard xD "you look like you just had sex" I can really imagine that :p
Nice work!!! xxxx
Date: 05/11/10 12:56 pm Title: “ When we're married...”
...that was it? =/ Okay, it didn't exactly satisfy me, I'm sorry X'D
Actually, I thought it was going to be longer than just two chapters (it wasn't me missing a warning of a two-shot, right? O.o). From what you wrote in the first part, there were so little information about the plot that I guessed it was going to be a long-fic. But then, you've finished with a second part where, actually, nothing happened X'D And that would be okay if it was, for example, a two-shot about the real Bill and Bushido where we could guess the story behind what happens, or something like that, but here you've written of a 'new' world where Bill and Bushido are a prince and a journalist student and I thought we were going to find out about this world and the relationship between the characters little by little, and that you were going to develop the plot in a longer fic. Instead you just gave us a little outtake of a story we don't know nothing about.
…Uhm, I don’t know if I’m really explaining myself X’D I’m sorry, this review is a mess *sighs* But, yeah, that’s what I wanted to say XD I really liked the Bill/Bushido relationship, the way they interacted and everything, but I was expecting more by the plot =)
Date: 05/10/10 08:21 pm Title: “You’re such a spoiled princess.”
awh..i luv it please update soon and thank you for writing this fic:]]
Date: 05/10/10 06:16 pm Title: “You’re such a spoiled princess.”
Wiiiii I like!!! Ferry much ^^ Er staat wel een keer 'de' in ipv 'the'... Aber scheisse passiert natuerlich :p
Loove it! It's cute and mushy and mellow and totally awesomesauce xD
Date: 05/10/10 06:12 pm Title: “You’re such a spoiled princess.”
Ooh yes I loved it. :)
Billshido is uber love.
I loved that little interaction with them. I'm trying to come up with more to say, but it was quite brief and the plot has been barley introduced. I'm assuming Bushido is a rapper [or famous?] and Bill hates the popularity.. and being to spend less time with his future hubby. I like that concept. (:
Will love to read more.
It was excellent. < 3
Date: 05/10/10 04:06 pm Title: “You’re such a spoiled princess.”
Oh God, I so LOVED this, you've got no idea! I mean, I always love Billshido and I feel a strong need of this pairing, but I never get enough XD And now you give me this fic where Bill and Anis are together and they're happy, and they were just so 'awww' and cute and... and you've got me rambling incoherently, because I really loved them XD I'll be reading this fic, definitely *.*
Date: 05/10/10 02:30 pm Title: “You’re such a spoiled princess.”
This is sweet. I love Anis and Bill. I hope it's a happy story for the two of them. :-)
Date: 05/10/10 02:15 pm Title: “You’re such a spoiled princess.”
I love it so far!!!