Date: 03/24/10 10:18 pm Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
thrice?? seriously...I didn't know that word existed
Author's Response: Okay... well, now you know. Erm, thanks for reading?
Date: 03/24/10 10:04 pm Title: IV: You've Got to be Kidding Me
Oooooh I love the tension between them, I can't wait for the reactions when they find out who they really are. Karla pregnant, mmm is it Tom's? I loved the bit about not examining a toad, brilliant. *bounce* more please *hugs*
Author's Response: It may be um, a long while before that happens (Them finding out). Well, we'll see. I'm excited for that part but of course, if it happened too soon, there's much less of a story. XP Well your answer to the baby question is in the next chapter. Just because I'm here, discussing it anyways - I have known a few too many girls torturing their boyfriends (or fuckbuddies or other various relationships) with the 'prego scare'. Sometimes they deserve it, sometimes they don't. I wonder if Karla is just a bitch, or if she actually thought she was pregnant? Hm? Haha anyways I'm ranting. Thanks for reading, my utmost gratitude. Froggie Bill~ *heart*
Date: 03/24/10 04:24 pm Title: IV: You've Got to be Kidding Me
Lmao I really enjoy this story!
I just read it all now and I love the way you write. You describe perfectly, and your metaphors are phenominal.
I hope you update this soon, (Even though you already just updated ;P)
And I really like the fact your chapters are long, gives you time to adjust straight into the settings and relate to the characters all over again.
Well done!!
Author's Response: You really found my awkward 9so I thought) metaphors okay? *bends on one knee* Marry me? No, btu really - I feel lighter reading your review. I'm glad you appreciate my writing style. It's certainly something I work at. Yay for long chapters x2! Thanks for reading thus far! *dances* ^---^
Date: 03/24/10 02:23 pm Title: IV: You've Got to be Kidding Me
This story is really interesting! Thank you!^^
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, very much! ^^
Date: 03/24/10 11:45 am Title: IV: You've Got to be Kidding Me
Hee, not terrible at all! I'm really enjoying this story quite a bit. I love seeing Bill so flustered because he found Tom attractive and I'm glad things seem to be slightly looking up for Tom, at least on the work front, because in the personal one he seems just about as lost. Hee. Thanks for the extralong chapter, I really liked it!
Author's Response: Appreciate your kind words every time. Thanks for taking the time out of your day not only to read - but review as well. You're more than welcome, and I will certainly keep writing! *heart* ^--^
Date: 03/23/10 02:24 am Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
The banner is awesome! :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I would have made a better one, but I'm not on my own computer right now, and don't have the program I want, but i still did my best. Glad you like it. ^^
Date: 03/22/10 09:36 am Title: III: You've Got a Storm Coming
Oh my gosh! I love it and I can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: *bows* thank you so very, very much for reading, and please continue to read on in the future. ^^
Date: 03/21/10 03:40 pm Title: III: You've Got a Storm Coming
Awww, poor Tomi, but things seem to be looking up for him. I'm very interested in reading what else you have in store for us.
Author's Response: My deepest thanks for reading this~ I'm doing my best to bring this story together in the most real, and feeling of ways. Your support has not gone unappreciated. ^^
Date: 03/21/10 11:56 am Title: III: You've Got a Storm Coming
This is awesome. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! ^^
Date: 03/16/10 08:31 am Title: II: You've Got Something to Worry About
hehe loved Bill and Gustav's teasing, very cute. Poor Tom, hugs him. XD
Author's Response: Gaustav is just <3 I love incorporating him, and his little quirks. Thanks for reading.
Date: 03/16/10 08:12 am Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
You are being far too hard on yourself honey, this is good. I'm really intruiged to see what happens. Looking forward to more. XD
Author's Response: Sorry for the late response huu - Thank you for your kind words, I'm working hard. ^^
Date: 03/15/10 08:35 pm Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
HEY YOU'RE AMAZING!! this is AMAZING! Excited for more :)
Author's Response: Oh my goodness. X__X You're so lovely, don't flatter me so! xD Thank you, I'm so warm to think you like my story like this!
Date: 03/15/10 05:14 pm Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
*glares* don't you ever doubt your abilities again!! ...*glomps* That was good! Keep going! I'm so excited to see the next chapter! Bill's kind of a bitch, but *shrugs* oh well, still a good story though!
Author's Response: Sorry for the late response - *bows* Lol sorry I made Bill kinda bitchy. But Bill has this divaish quality in reality, and I decided to play on it more, and it gives more fuel to my ideas. Thank you so much for reading, it means so much.
Date: 03/15/10 12:20 pm Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
Stop being so hard on yourself, this was really good.
I'm really sad that there's nothing more here :(
So I'm going to track this story and hope that it'll be updated soon!
Author's Response: Sorry for the late response. I'm continuously writing as fast as I can, while still spending days to review my work over and over to make it decent. Your kindness to keep track of my story makes me feel incredible. Thank you so much.
Date: 03/15/10 10:33 am Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
It wasn't lame at all, imo. I really liked the start of this and I'm interested enough to read on forward whenever you update. I liked that Bill's words struck a cord deep on Tom to actually question himself if he really was like that before. I liked that despite it all, Bill found it in himself to actually mean it when he wished Tom the best in the end.
Author's Response: Sorry for the late response - ah - Thank you endlessly for reading. My favourite part was the end as well. I've been in a similar situation as this, and it really is a meaningful experience. Thank you, once again.
Date: 03/15/10 09:39 am Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
I like it and I'm curious to know where this is going.
I most say, I felt a bit bad for Tom here. It really seemed like he was trying to be nice and Bill just wouldn't have it.
Author's Response: Sorry for a late response - Tom will likely get the short end of the stick for a while in this story. XD Tom is such a naturally strong person, I liked the idea of viewing him more as a victim for a change is some sense. My endless thanks for reading my story, truly.