Date: 07/07/12 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pretty please continue on this!
Date: 01/02/12 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh my God o.O
Wow, that was awesome! Really, I have no idea why you stopped updating this story, but I'm just hooked, seriously. I also read your other story, Homicide Hotel, that was one of my favorite stories on this website. I decided that I wanted to re-read it since no one really posts Bill/OFC stories anymore, than I ended up with reading this story. And I've got to admit, this story, so far, is AMAZING.
I'm begging you, can you please, pleaseee continue with this. I swear I'll comment on every single chapter if that's what you're looking for. Please *puppy eyes* lol :P
Date: 01/02/12 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooh, I wonder what the medicine is made out of...
Date: 01/02/12 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
That... was... so... sad :'(
Date: 01/02/12 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, nice beginning. I'm hooked already :)
Date: 05/22/11 01:14 am Title: Chapter 4
please write more this is getting really interesting.. k keep up the awsome work that you have come up with so far..lol. i hope to read some more real soon.
Date: 04/08/11 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh this is really good i can't wait for more..please please please write more.. i wanna read ...lol.. k hope to read the next chapter soon ..take care and bye bye !!
Date: 04/07/11 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is veryy good i hope you write more.. i can't wait to read it.. :) good job btw !!!
Date: 06/30/10 04:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Woah. 0.0
Okay so when Bill started grabing at Tom in the dream, I thought he was an incubus. [kinda like a vampire, but feeds off sex instead of blood, in case you didn't know. XD]
But then he went all serial killer. 0.0
Can't wait to see what's up with him! :D
Date: 06/13/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like it. :)
hope you post up the next chapter soon! :D
Date: 04/23/10 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Where are the updates?!
Date: 04/02/10 04:43 am Title: Chapter 4
I love this story so far.
It's simply stunning
Date: 03/01/10 05:06 am Title: Chapter 4
Update. (:
It's interesting.
Date: 02/23/10 08:20 am Title: Chapter 4
God, that scared me, I thought Bill was going to go all murderer on Tom's ass. I am worried that this is all going to happen anyways, it was all just a foretelling type of dream. Funny thing is one should not be worried that the cancer is gone. They should be jumping for joy. But we all know that this is not natural. Like that drug itself goes ageist the flow of time. The thing about time though it always keeps on flowing and never stops. You may have escaped once, but you will get pulled back into the timeline in the end. So when are you going to update again? I am looking forward to it.
Date: 02/23/10 07:03 am Title: Chapter 4
this is awesomeee
Date: 02/23/10 07:00 am Title: Chapter 4
this is awesomeee
Date: 02/22/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
WOAH..... MORE MORE MORE!!
Date: 02/21/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
wow...hell of a dream...or premonition...but the cancer's gone so that's good...mostly...
Date: 02/21/10 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
that nurse...i'm really curious to find out what he turns into...so i'll read on...
Date: 02/21/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
ahhhh the suspense is killer D: and the whole creepy-dream-Bill is messing w/ my mind! can't wait to see what happens next (and how exactly Bill will be acting "differently") haha :)