Date: 04/03/12 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lols XD I loved the end - it was a perfect return to normalcy, after the drunken episode XD Plus, there were no grammatical errors, and that was HOT. As in, REALLY hot. Well done, Trix-san ^-^
Date: 05/29/10 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Totally fucking awesome.
Date: 12/31/09 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent! Excellent! XD
Date: 12/29/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think the whole think was rushed, it went by too quickly. I'd almost categorize this as crack because it's really unrealistic for two brothers to make the decision to fuck that fast, even if drunk. It was just ok for me. Give the event more time to linger next time. :)
Date: 12/29/09 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Jesus...reading back-to-back stories by you was a fan-flippin-tastic idea. I look forward to more smut from you. ;)
Date: 12/27/09 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
one word: hot!
Author's Response: thanks yew (:
Date: 12/27/09 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow (: that was briliant , so hot I really liked it
Thx for the story (: merry christmas