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Reviewer: nadia123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/10 01:03 am Title: Chapter 5 - Scars

Ahh ! I just read all 5 chapters and I love it ! :D Update soon,please ! (:

Author's Response: Aww thank you :) It's really hard to update because I have no motivation for this story right now and I'm crazy busy with work because Universal is opening the Harry Potter world and yeah lol. And I'm more caught up with my other story. But I promise I'll rummage around in my brain and try to pull a new chapter together. Hopefully XD

Reviewer: dontwaitupxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Scars

buisha-buisha-boo? bwee!

Update soon, pretty please!

Author's Response: I will, I promise!! :)

Reviewer: _Alice_A_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/09 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The First Sin

Tom is the good guy? OKAY! Well, that is strange *laughs* but it's strange in a good way, 'cause I am so used to Bill being a good guy, that it gets annoying with time...
Now I really can't wait for the next chapter (:

Author's Response: I know! I wanted it to be different this time. Maybe I'll make Tom bad later. I don't know yet lol. And I wanted the "Bad Bill" because I find it kinda hot lol

Reviewer: _Alice_A_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/09 04:44 am Title: Chapter 5 - Scars

I read this before, but somehow forgot about it, so when I opened it today, I was slightly surprised to see two chapters instead of one. But I still love the story...
Bill is a very interesting character, he leaves me a lot of questions. Tom is... well, Tom is pretty much Tom, I still wish to believe that he's the jerk here. And that girl... well, we don't have much information abut her, so I can't judge her.
Keep writing! this story is great!

Author's Response: Well, Tom is actually the good one in the story! I wanted to make it different. Instead of Bill being the sweetheart, it's Tom! And I still don't know what I'm going to write about Kelsey. Like, what her problems were. I'm still pondering lol. Thanks so much for the feedback! They make my day :)

Reviewer: Bubbles96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/09 03:27 am Title: Chapter 5 - Scars

I love this story, great job :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!! :) :)

Reviewer: AlanaFacee Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/09 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Scars

aseret!!! you should have made it longer!! but i love it.

Author's Response: I knowwwwwwwww. And grassy-ass. Ily :)

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/09 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Fuck Me.

Scars Billy Bill? =(

Author's Response: Yes :(

Reviewer: tokiojbhotelfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/09 02:26 am Title: Chapter 4 - Fuck Me.

I LOOOOVE THIS STORY!!!

Makes me happy!

Mmmm. Sexy dominant Bill! Don't see that too often!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :)

Reviewer: CharlotteRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/09 02:21 am Title: Chapter 4 - Fuck Me.

OMG love the bad assed Bill...now i want to know Bill's side of they story and what he is hiding from Kelsey...so please hurry up and update cuz im quickly becoming addiceted to this story...just like drugs...lol

Author's Response: I love bad assed Bill. It's pretty sexy :)

Reviewer: dontwaitupxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Fuck Me.

lovelovelove :D

Author's Response: Thank youuuu :)

Reviewer: AlanaFacee Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/09 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Fuck Me.

oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
i love how it ended!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank youuuu. <3

Reviewer: TaraRawr Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/09 10:32 am Title: Chapter 3 - Ecstasy

I love this story... dont give up on writing please =]

Author's Response: Aw thank you! And I wont, I promise :)

Reviewer: CharlotteRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/09 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Ecstasy

WOW that is all that i have to say...but i like your story a lot and i think that you are doing a good job so far...and just fyi im typing wearing gloves cuz my hands are cold and let me tell you that this is not an easy task but yea... i cant wait to read more and i agree with you that evil Bill is pretty damn hot and im not much of a Bill girl at all!! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's something new and different for me to type but I'm trying! lol. and yes, evil Bill is pretty damn sexy lol

Reviewer: _Alice_A_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/09 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Ecstasy

Ah... I actually love this story. I would love to see what happens next. (:

Author's Response: Awwww thank you!!! :)

Reviewer: AlanaFacee Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Ecstasy

me gusta.. =]

Author's Response: me gusta me gusta me gusta lol

Reviewer: AlanaFacee Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/09 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Ecstasy

me gusta.. =]

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/09 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Ecstasy

Why do I like mad Bill so much?
Can't wait for more! =)

Author's Response: Because mad Bill is sexy as hell :) Thanks love!

Reviewer: taryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/09 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Ecstasy

awesome! plz dont delete this! i wanna know what happens next!

Author's Response: Aww thank you!!!!! :)

Reviewer: Shay_09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/09 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The First Sin

Girlll, I didn't know you had it in you!
:DDDD
I love it, wonderful job.

Author's Response: Aww thank you!! Ily! :)

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